Samaina SS - Thodasa Roomani Ho Jaayen - Part 2 added 6th July

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Loved it may .. I liked the fact that how your os usually begins where the topic was left unaddressed in the episode and from their u build up beautifully . Sameer how sensibily addressed Naina's insecurities regarding her looks and the fact that she was not desired by him. Last part made me blush hard. I have sent u buddy request Pls accept it and pm me whenever u update next I don't want to miss any update

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This is similar to the reaction i expected Naina to have in the show. I wanted her to make Sameet realise that she is no less than Madhuri.

Thank you for penning this and for the pm.

Eagerly awaiting the next part.

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

So glad you decides to continue this beautiful price of work

It was amezing

Naina's insecurity and Sameer's confusion was perfectly portrayed... With right amount of fear

So Sameer from finally understood the reason behind hwr wired behavior and he took full advantage of it

I'm really looking forward to the next part

Please update soon

Love

Laalchi reader

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May

@SixteenAgain

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: NainaSharma08
Beautiful
It was like watching the whole story on screen
Beautifully expressed

Just loved it

Thanks dear! So pleased that you liked it 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: _shweta98
What a beautiful take was this .. loved it! Totally!
Thank you for the PM !!!

Thanks so much dear for you love comment 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: asmita21180
Wow !... Wow is so small reaction after reading this , i must say perfect and well described...
They went to movie ...Experienced new things... Learned from it...And feel more closer..This was the best that could happen to a couple in their journey of discovering love ...taking care of every aspects , the friends , the surroundings of a cinema hall , even the fight with mawali boys...You started and finished it ( wat else is a point when u create something and just let it go without proper explanations , CV 's need to learn this )...
The outburst of Naina , Sameer's confusion and concern after Movie... And then their confrontations were all beautifully covered ...

Another well written part ...And looking forward ti read more from you...

Keep it up and best of luck for future...

Asmita

Thanks so much Asmita for your lovely comment!

It is so heartwarming when readers can relate to the feelings and ideas that I am trying to convey. As you said it's satisfying when there is a some logic tying these threads in the background.
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May

@SixteenAgain

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Wow!! I had thought in our show Naina will be angry with him after what she saw...but nothing of that sort happened. I am so glad you came up with this... 👏

Thanks dear 😊

I wanted to explore her emotional turmoil and insecurities that were likely to be experienced. Anger is a lot of times only how we express some of our strongest emotions when we don't know how else to express them. Which is exactly what Naina did here. All the hurt and doubts about what Sameer really feels for her broke through in the form of anger.

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dreamyp
Last scenes were damn romantic.. the kiss on kiss day.. hehe it was soo cute..The way sam was checking her out my god..U made me blush hard dear.. love..

Kiss on kiss day! I am so glad it happened this way though I was oblivious to this while posting 😆

Check out karna toh banta hi hain! Brings to my mind the lines - jab tak na pade aashiq ki nazar, singar adhura raheta hai 😳

Thanks for your lovely comments dear!

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Priya

@Priya2910

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Totally wowsome !!

A brilliant take on the movie date episode. The emotions, confusion, insecurities etc are portrayed so well.

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Radkam
This was the perfect take on the Dhak Dhak fiasco... boys vl b boys!!! Hahahha but for Sameer. Naina is the only one... loved it very much & thanks for the PM!

Thanks Radhika! Yes, boys will be boys... but apni girl ko bhi toh appreciate karna chahiye na 😉