Samaina SS - Thodasa Roomani Ho Jaayen - Part 2 added 6th July

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -vandy-
Beautifully written may...
I loved how you covered the aspect of being desired by the couple...
I wished the CVS covered this aspect in the shoe as beautifully as you have written... It would be a great to watch

Looking forward to the next part

Do pm me wen u update

Thanks Vandy 😊

I believe that between a couple desire for each other is equally important along with affection and respect. And instinctively all women very much want to feel desired by their man irrespective of whether they are In Dinon Ki or Un Dinon Ki!

I agree it would have been great to see CVs exploring some of these things but looks like they don't want to venture into anything remotely resembling physical attraction between Samaina. Looks like CVs also strongly believe in Yeh sab Sirf shaadi ke baad like Naina! 😆

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: JaySee
Wow... beautiful.
You gave a perfect reaction from boys and girls for Dhak Dhak moment. It's natural for Naina to have that kind of insecurity after seeing Sameer's reaction to that song. The most I liked was how Sameer killed that insecurity once and for all.

Thanks dear! Glad you liked it 😊

Yes, it would be natural for Naina to feel some insecurity after his reactions to Madhuri. I definitely would have if I was in her place! And only knowing that she is capable of invoking an equal if not more reaction from him would help her feel assured of his love for her. Love and desire go hand in hand between a couple.

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

May! Forgive me for being so late, bit embarrassed😛

I am speechless right now, one of the main reasons I love your works apart from the thought provoking plot is how you extend the existing scenes and we are pleased. 😉

We had wanted Naina angry and think over how Madhuri danced, evoking new emotions but well, that track was just for fun. But this angle of if she is worth to be desired had me pleasantly surprised, the kiss at the last, blush worthy

Amazing! 😃

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
It was wonderful dear
So beautifully written👍🏼
it's right Sameer can't look at her with desire because what he feels for her is much more so along with every feeling whether it is desire or passion or affection LOVE will be there which is easily visible in his eyes whenever he looks at her
pls continue it
Update very soon

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it yes, it will always be more than just desire as it should be between true lovers.

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
Loved it may .. I liked the fact that how your os usually begins where the topic was left unaddressed in the episode and from their u build up beautifully . Sameer how sensibily addressed Naina's insecurities regarding her looks and the fact that she was not desired by him. Last part made me blush hard. I have sent u buddy request Pls accept it and pm me whenever u update next I don't want to miss any update

Thanks so much dear 😊 I am so pleased you liked it.

I think I am developing an OCD condition especially for trying to complete what I feel are unresolved threads in the show 😆

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani
Wowsome update dear

Thank you dear 😊 glad you liked it!

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Azraa01
This is similar to the reaction i expected Naina to have in the show. I wanted her to make Sameet realise that she is no less than Madhuri.
Thank you for penning this and for the pm.
Eagerly awaiting the next part.

Thanks dear 😊

I think Sameer knows she is no less, but she needed to realise it too! Glad you liked it.

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
So glad you decides to continue this beautiful price of work
It was amezing
Naina's insecurity and Sameer's confusion was perfectly portrayed... With right amount of fear
So Sameer from finally understood the reason behind hwr wired behavior and he took full advantage of it
I'm really looking forward to the next part
Please update soon

Love
Laalchi reader

Thanks so much for your lovely feedback 😊

Reading your comment - he took full advantage of it - had me laughing a lot! 😆 mauke pe chauka!

I think it would be a natural instinct to feel a little insecure and jealous in a scenario like this. At least I would have been!

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Totally wowsome !!
A brilliant take on the movie date episode. The emotions, confusion, insecurities etc are portrayed so well.

Thanks dear! So pleased that you enjoyed it 😊