Samaina FF - Tumhari shart Ya Mera Pyar... Pt 1 pg 3 BET - Page 2

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ArshAriya thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyp

Hey guys

Someone posted this concept here on IF , i liked it and thought to write a story. Yeah Hum Tum is pending and m living proper time to it but right now muje ye wali likhni hai..😆

Concept :-

What would have happened if naina knew about the bet before?
What would hv happened is she overheard the boys talk?
Will she still love sameer knowing about the bet?
What will she do now?


Will update soon part 1.. till then btaiye u like the concept or not ..
cr. To one of IF member..I forgot name.. Sorry dear..




Hey dear again Ramya here
Thank u for considering my suggestion
Hehehhe it's ok if u forget my name but m really very eager to read I was thing if anyone will write on my suggestion or not I was sad n thought if no one will write den I will myself write ss on this concept but here u r considering my concept
Thank u dear continue super soonish
Can't wait to read further
N do pm me
Take care
Ramya 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Likho jaldi, m waiting for another perspective on the bet phase! It think it one of our fav tracks!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramy_ani




Hey dear again Ramya here
Thank u for considering my suggestion
Hehehhe it's ok if u forget my name but m really very eager to read I was thing if anyone will write on my suggestion or not I was sad n thought if no one will write den I will myself write ss on this concept but here u r considering my concept
Thank u dear continue super soonish
Can't wait to read further
N do pm me
Take care
Ramya 😊


Ohh ramya..Sorry yrr name bhul gyi thi tumhara.. see if u want to write go on.. concept same h but story diffrent hogi.. I would love to read you pov too..Waiting 4 an update from your side too..

Love
Meenakshi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyp


Ohh ramya..Sorry yrr name bhul gyi thi tumhara.. see if u want to write go on.. concept same h but story diffrent hogi.. I would love to read you pov too..Waiting 4 an update from your side too..

Love
Meenakshi



No no now u r writing so m just gonna enjoy reading 😳 so continue soonish dear bcoz I just can't wait pretty plzzz 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seems to be an interesting topic
Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting plot...Waiting for the update!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the concept totally different thing ..
Eagerly waiting for first part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 1 :-

BET

Sameer was very upset after blamed for paper stealing. Bcz of him nanu had to ask sorry from everyone. Only naina n her father are responsible for this incident. " I will never forgive you naina..Never.. " he said in his mind ,in anger.. 😡

On the other hand, naina was feeling guilty , in evening she found out the main culprit was her own brother , arjun not sameer. She didn't trust him at all.. sameer eyes were speaking truth but she could not able to read those innocent eyes. What type of love it is when there is no trust. She wanted to call sameer n say sorry. She wanted to clear out whole misunderstanding, she wanted to say ro whole world her sameer is innocent but she can't.. she is bound in relation with arjun. Taking stand for sameer means standing against her brother, if the truth come our then arjun will b suspended from school, her father ll not able to tolerate this truth. She promised arjun she will not tell this truth to anyone, not even sameer, not even preeti..

But whatever happened sameer had no fault then why should he suffer ? " I have to talk to sameer..Yes... Tomorrow I ll talk to him and will say sorry for everything.. " determined she slept in wait of tomorrow morning..

Next day
Naina came early to school so that she can talk to sameer in private, her eyes were fixed on door but there was no sign of sameer. " What if he don't come today? What if he leave the school? What if... "
Many questions arise in her mind..

" Nahi..Nahi..Sameer aaega..Muje pata hai.. wo aise haar manne walo me se nahi hai.. muje bahar jake dekhna chahiye..Haan"
She went outside to search for him..

In parking
Sameer had came to school but he was hating this place now bcz of yesterday incidence.. He got the punishment of that crime which he did not do.. but bcoz of nana ji he had to come.

Mundit was calming down his anger, were trying to make him understand let's forget whatever happened..

Munna (sadly) - yaar bhul ja jo bh kal hua.. chal class me chalte hai..

Pandit - haan chlo.. koi fayda nh ab unn sbke bare me bat krne ka..Jo hona tha ho gya.. type chori ka jhutha ilzam b lg gya or tera cricket khelne pe ban bh lag gya .. (disheartened)

Sameer - yrr muje iss bat ka dukh nahi hai ki me cricket nahi khel paunga par nana ji ko itna kuch sunna pda..Sab meri wajah se..

Munna (angry) - teri wajah se nahi uss chamchi naina ki wajah se . Na wo tere khilaf bolti na wo sab hota ..

Senior boys were passing from there when they heard their convo and jumped in without invitation..

Pankaj - tch tch tch.. bechara trusty ka nati..Dekho kya haal bna rakha h..
(Hi-fi to other friend)

Pandit (angry) - abhi hmara dimag bhot kharab h chup chap chle jao warna..

Pankaj n frnds - warna? Warna kya..??

Mundit and pankaj were about to fight when sameer stop them..
Sameer (stoping them) - munna pandit..Koi jarurt nahi h inke muh lagne ki . Abhi hmara waqt hi kharab chl rha hai..

Pankaj - jao jao maaf kiya (laughed) waise b kuch baski nahi h tumhare..Bacche ho..

Sameer was patient till now, he hold pankaj collar easefully and said " bacche hai .. tbi bol rha hu panga na lo..Warna log kahege baccho se haar gye " left his collar and smirked..

Pankaj (angry mood) - are ja na.. muje kya dhamki de rha hai.. ek ladki ko to sabak sikha nahi sakta or muje gyan dene chla hai..

Sameer laughed which confuse seniors and mundit..
Munna to pandit (confused) - ise sadma to nh lag gya??

Sameer (calm tone) - sameer maheshwari apne dushmano ko kabhi maaf nahi krta..Chahe fir wo ladki ho ya ladka.. naina ne jo kiya uski saja use me dunga par apne tareeke se..

Pandit - aisa kya krega bhai tu?
Seniors were also eager to know..

Sameer (smirked) - naina ke papa ne sbke samne meri parvarish pe ungli uthai thi na kal ab unki parvarish ka namuna me sbko dikhaunga..

Pankaj - accha.. or wo kaise?? Hum naina ko bachpan se jante hai wo aisa koi kaam nh kregi jisse uski parvarish par ungli uthe..

Sameer - kregi... Me krwauga usse..

Pandit - par kya krwaega aisa??

Sameer - Pyar.. Naina Aggarwal sameer maheshwari se pyar kregi.. Sbke samne Muje I Love You Kahegi..

Seniors laughed.. " Naina Or Pyar.. wo b tujse? Sapne me b nahi.. "

Munna - haan sameer .. ye log sahi keh rhe h.. naina aisi ladki nh hai.. are aj tak kisi ladke ko najar uthake bh nh dekha usne..

Sameer - me KISI ladka nahi hu.. Sameer Maheshwari hu.. yun pta lunga use , chutkiton me.. ( he was very confident)

Pankaj - chal theek hai , maan li teri bat.. tu Pta lega uss chamchi ko par Agar nahi pata paya to?

Sameer - toh .. jo tum kaho..
Munna pandit were like he is totally gone now..

Pankaj n friends smirked and declared - agar tu naina ko nahi pata paya to tu Hmesha ke liye ye school chupke chala jaega.. bol manjur ?

Sameer was stunned , he took a moment to think but then said - theek hai.. lagi shart..
Munna pandit tried to stop himself but he didn't listen them at all..

Pankaj - toh tera waqt shuru hota hai ab. Tik tok tik tok..
Seniors left from there while mundit were regretting sameer decision of this shart and sameer was determined to win this bet.

Naina who came in search of sameer stopped in her track when she heard their covo.
"Sameer made a bet to make me fall in love with him? Nahi may be I heard wrong.. "
Tears me their way from her eyes , subconsciously she start walking not able to believe what her love just said , she was broken and devastated..The guy whom she loved betrayed her trust today..



P.s. long enough?? 😆 may b u all will rewind that episode today.. kya din the wo.. thay tashan, that bet mode, no fiction can match the original story still I m giving a try to entertain u all.. have a look , let me know my mistakes..
Silent readers , yrr ho jao active.. one comment or like won't harm.. love u all.. waiting for feedbCk..

Love
Meenakshi

Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting...now what will do Naina ??
Plz update soon ..love it

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good start ... Naina is heartbroken .. poor girl... Lets see what happens in next update ... Continue soon

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