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Rachna

@richurachna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

wow lovely yaar

perfect prayer shopping samina moment

thanks for PM

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bmk28

@bmk28

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Mou, It was so lovely... Just how love birds used to behave Un Dinon riding on a bike..Loved it totally.. Hoping that someday we would get to see a bike ride on show like this.. By the way, you made me go back to old days of Ahmedabad.. Loved your detailing and places you chose for them to roam around :-P

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

A lovely update once again, however I felt there was a slow progression of this OS.. But slow in a good way.. As Naina eventually became comfy with being close to Sameer and seeing him protect her...

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

OK making this comment a little filmy... Yeh lines for u Mou after reading this os ... Ek Mai aur Ek Tu dono mile is Tarah.. Aur jo tan man mei ho rha h Voh toh hona hi tha 😆

I wrote this song just to convey my feelings Kyunki Jbse I have known u and starting reading your works toh Uske bd k effects on tan man u understand 😉 .. OK don't take seriously it was for fun purpose 😆

Coming to os ismey Voh sb elements they jo ek dream bike ride date par hone chahiye .. Small gestures by sameer like making her walk in way or signalling her to sit straight before coming on main road are worth mentioning .it showed how much he cares for her. Honestly I haven't seen mpk so who scene nai Pta which u mentioned but the way u wrote I could imagine what it would be like on samaina. And Voh shadi k baad wala dialogue made me blush too imagining sameer's flirtous smirk 😳

Ending the comment on another song line ... Tumse milne ko dil krta hai re baba 😉 ... In the hope of meeting u someday ... A good writer and an imperfectly perfect person ko afterall kon nai milna chahega 😃

Sorry for a little bak bak on this comment .. 😆

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_shweta98

@_shweta98

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Mou Mou Mou!!! What to say about this... about your writing...

You're one of my few favourites...

Loved every small bit of this OS!!!!

Naina ne jeans pehni.. taaki woh Sameer ke pass baith sake.. hayeee.. feels!!😳

Loved it ki tumne likha ki uski himmat nahi hui first time waise baithne ki... yeh aksar hota hi hai..

Mandir.. waahh.. sameer ..hat's off!👏

Wowww... dono ne saath milke shopping kiya.. Naina ke liye.. true that Sameer is always interested in Naina's dressing up.. hehe😆

Pav bhaji aur phir garden wale wo pal.. wow! Sameer unknowingly full haq se put his fingers on her lips..😳😳

Naina ne samajh kar.. ki wo galat bilkul nhi hai... leaned on to him... hayeee Moumita!!! Such is your writing ki main melt ho jau unke saath hi emotions mein.. 🥱

Phirrr... Naina ka Sameer ko pakadna.. woh galti se break lagna.. Naina crushed against him.. so much feels..☺️

Sameer thinkong about Naina being embarrassed in public n tapping her hands was love.. shows his concern n care for her.. finally they're back in college...

Sameer se rehne wala to nahi tha aaj Naina ko hug karna.. apni baahon mein bharna.. wow!

Bahot hi khoobsurat pyaara sa update tha!!!

Thank you Moumita! For writing such writeups!

Always waiting for more!!

Thank you for the PM!❤️❤️

P.S. Sorry for the late comment! Monday se articleship start ho gayii.. so time nahi mil raha!! But I do read each n every update.

P.S. 2! Aaj kal mere show dekhne ka aadha reason to connected rehna hai.. forum ke specially kuch stories to jaan hai! And you contribute a lot! Thank you!❤️ For being there ❤️

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

This was a well thought n absolutely well written one, what we all wanted when naina n sameer planned for their first bike ride. Shmuch a beautiful piece Mou! Preeti advising her about the clothes, sameer taking her first to the temple, the confidence she got after his thoughtfulness, her courage, him thinking every thing through, understanding her hesitation in the start n accommodating her accordingly, and then getting surprised by her trust in him and her boldness.

It was a fully packed treat! Loved the hug in the last n the tension they had in the park, the growing feelings, the intense emotions to the proximity. Completely in love with this bike ride 😳

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Nice OS Mou😃👏

Loved to read the minute detailing and the park portion was the best part of your update😃👏

Their proximity and the emotions rushing through them were brilliantly penned down😃👏

Loved it entirely😃

Thanks for the pm😊

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Isha

@mystique123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Dear Mou...

I am bowled over by this bike ride. As always, you took me also for a ride along with Samaina...I was riding beside them tranquilized by their love and adoration. I fell in love with their love.😊

It was mesmerizing to see the sparkle in nature as if reciprocating to Sameer's happiness. Sameer's enthusiasm to get his bike ready to give her the best ride won my heart as it symbolized his dream of gifting her a great future together. ❤️

Them dressing up for each other, Preeti-Naina convo, the banter between friends...is the reflection of such an amazing writer you are 👏

Mandir visit was indeed the least expected one but you made sure that the bike ride also has essence of their journey till date. This thoughtfulness of Sameer visibly left an impact on Naina that it made her shed her inhibitions.

The garden scene was beautiful not because they once again confessed their love for each other but for their comfort of feeling where they belong to.⭐️ They are bound to walk miles together❤️

Sameer's gestures to make Naina comfortable reminded me of Trust in dreams, for in them is hidden the gate to eternity. Him wanting to hold her in his arms, to shower all the love on her ...even then her wish is his command. 😳

This bike ride date of Samaina is echoing Be not be Afraid of going slowly, be afraid of standing still in my mind.

I love you Mou for such a soothing story 🤗