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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Well ...After long it was an update worth the wait... And bike ride was something we all fans had eagrly waited in the CV's ... after the famous bike ride scene ,your write up is something to behold...

The way it started ... All planned and thought of... And then their whole ride...Sameer driving carefully and his protectiveness in street... It was all like I was with them all the time and watching them personally... ( Not to forget their dresses you mentioned )

Sameer shopping for her ...And that too considering her outfits ...Matching with each dress...Amazing job..( get me such a boy ..Lol)

The lunch date was short ( did they ordered single plate and feed each other .. I know I am greedy now .. and somewhere I just peeked inside the restaurant and yes they were ...Even drank water from same glass ..😆))

Then the park scene...I always wonder what it would feel to sit there with your lover... Excitement and nervousness together...Right... You brought it up so well...Their intimacy was mind blowing...

I want this all in the show...Each and everything...Otherwise my wild imaginations are enough to draw my own pictures...

I loved this update a lot...Great job Mou...

Best wishes ,

Asmita

Edited by asmita21180 - 7 years ago

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Awesome OS Mou!

Loved all the detailing in this one too... right from the bumblebee and sparrows to the Parimal Gardens lily ponds.. you vividly bring it live in the story.

Preeti's advise on the Naina's attire was spot on! And Naina made full use of the freedom given by the jeans! Sam baba was left speechless 😆

All the protective stuff he does instinctively and how it reminds Naina of Chachaji... awesome. Most girls want to find a husband who reminds them of their father as he is the first ideal man in our life. But, for Naina Chachaji is that father figure, so if she can feel the same concern and safety with Sameer then that means a lot!

Loved it!

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Wow.. this is such a cute OS..

Loved it MoU..

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Arey yaar Moumita

This OS has given me goals😳

A bike ride date, starting with praying at the temple

A bf shopping for his gf has to be the cutest thing ever!!

Daringbaaz Naina😲 Sameer ko to ummeed se zyada khushi mil gyi

The hug at the end was❤️

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

loved it Mou di 👏

It was the perfect bike ride 😳

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Mou

Bike ride ke total feels aa Gaye

I simply loved Sam ka preparation for it...right from giving a wash to the bike to filling the tank 😆

Preeti... Is team Sameer

Had Naina worn the skirt... Sameer would've never felt the eternal.bliss he felt with Naina sitting straddled on the bike...her hands on his waist...her whole body pressed to him...

I could imagine the whole scene...and feel exactly wat Sameer felt

There's a saying in Hindi...

Bin mange moti Miley... Mange Miley na bheekh

Sam did not demand anything from Naina...he just wanted her to be on his bike...and by the end of it trust him enough to keep her hands on his shoulder...

Wat he got without asking for anything was Naina being closer to him like never before and also the much awaited hug...turning it into the best day of his life...

And trust me... God broke the mould after creating Sameer Maheshwari... He is seriously boyfriend goals...

A date which starts with the blessings of God...which he knows how much his Naina believes in... Then shopping... Then food and then...some time away from the crowd... Just the two of them... Awesome

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Priya

@Priya2910

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Thoroughly enjoyed the bike ride. It was slow paced, leisurely and exactly how the first bike ride date should have been.

Please give us more of such beautiful stories.

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Shippu92

@Shippu92

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Wow, splendid, amazing it is.. I love how you have shown the pace of naina from being shy to being bold that's how things roll when you sit with your love on a bike for the first time in real too. I love how sameer respect naina boundaries that's beautiful n must in a relationship.. I always look f to your stories. .Superbowl work

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SanayaK

@SanayaK

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Loved it !!!!

and love you too...☺️

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swaram

@swaram

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#60

This was beautiful. What I love about your writing is how you think through everything, actually living the characters, makes their every action and emotion so relatable. And the romance is just right, suitable to your story. Too good Yaar. Please keep showering us with more and more delectable such stories. #Lovingit

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