Hello Mou! 🤗 I know I am too late but slow and steady wins the race :P Jokes apart exams are not letting me breathe so pardon me for such late comments.
So one by one I'll comment on each ongoing story of yours but first these 3 oneshots! It'll maybe take sometime but i'll pakka do it. So bear with me, I am sorry :)
#1 Measurements
Expect you to show the best out of every situation! Literally I can imagine your Sameer-Naina better than what is being shown in the college track now in the show. :D
The way Sameer desperately wanted to see Naina's measurements was dreamy! ❤️
I could imagine him diverting everyone so that he could have a look at her chit 😉
The way Naina was certain there was something wrong and asked him the same. I loved the whole way the build-up to Sameer finally seeing her chit happened! 😳
The dream and how he loves her in jeans, it was so awesome. I could see Sameer in that scene ^_^
The way his fantasy or should we say Kalpana came true, the best part for me in the whole story!
Sameer's reaction to Naina and Naina's happiness seeing her man react was exquisite.! :')
Finally their moment in the classroom, no words for that. From Naina knowing Sameer just too well to Sameer being a naughty boy and kissing on her hand awww! And their hugs!!
The ending scene where Naina tugs his hand and kisses the inside of his palm! My god so many feels. Loved it totally!!! <3
#2 Bike Ride Date
Loved this bike ride. It was a million times better than the show, I hope no one kills me but well that's the truth 😛
Coming to the way the levels increased, that was wonderful, from sitting away like Naina did in the show to holding his shoulders to finally his waist! Bravo..I loved how you brought that about with one incident to make her belief and trust on him stronger and stronger.
The date and its preparations were on point. Naina selecting a jeans to Sameer wearing blue, both of them nervous and excited , aww ☺️
Then the stops in between, Mandir, Shopping and Park, awesome! I loved how Mr. Sameer Maheshwari had planned everything! 👏
The way they tackled the posters and her jealousy, amazing. I particularly loved the park scene.
Both of them sitting with serenity in each other's arms, relaxed and away from the world, that is the Dream! 😳
Most of all, I loved how Naina trusted him with things like keeping her head on his shoulder, going to a secluded area of the park and then holding onto his waist. Sameer's reaction was bang on.
They almost kissed! *_* That was wonderfully written and the ending hug!
It was all in all a brilliant date, I wish I get a Sameer after this coz if every date is gonna be this awesome, god get me this guy ❤️
Loved it! <3
#3 Dance Of Passion
This was PERFECT!! I'm amazed, can we even get 1% of this in the show? I don't think so. :P
The way you've woven this story, it was so amazing. The progress, the emotions, the love, it all came across really really well. ^_^
At the starting, Sameer's desperation to know anything about Naina's dress was so cute, even the colour would do!. 😆
The way he uttered Sunaina's name and then she teased him about taking the hug from Sunaina instead of her from now on was so Naina! 🤣
Best part was their flashback to first hug, it was so them! Like how do you even make them appear in front of the eyes doing that, I get lost in your stories like it's some other world and once it finishes I come back to realize, ohh I wasn't seeing them in front of my face they were in my imagination, this literally happens with me and even good writers haven't made me feel this, so thank you! 🤗
Sameer and his fascination to see her applying Mehndi , then his getting sad when she didn't write his name aww , poor boy! :)
Sameer ka reaction on seeing Naina , mind-blowing *hats off* It was just awesome to imagine them that way. ⭐️
The twirl scene and Sameer comparing Sunaina and Naina, drawing the conclusion that only Naina could make his heart tug , OMG!
Aloo scene hahaha! It was cute, khana ya ladki ;) Tough choice thi par Sameer ne choose kr hi liya! 😃
The classroom scene baap re , the feels it had! No words to describe, I was lost in it. And vandy really has a point when she says every time you describe a kiss it's different, like how do you manage to do that, it evokes a different set of expressions everytime
The kiss and then her showing him his Mehndi, Thank you for making her write Sameer, initial "S" toh Sharad ki yaad dilata hai 😆
Overall I love this a bit more from the rest two. It had the perfect balance of everything! 😳
Again I am so sorry for the late comments! But you deserve all the love for the way you write, you send me to a fictional world where I forget all my worries and tension! So thank you for that!! 😃
Edited by A.Green - 6 years ago
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