SamAina OS-The First butterfly effect - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you dear! Khaan pakadke sorry late comment...jab tumne post kiya mummy paas mein thi aur mujhe patha tha kuch asanskari hoga and I will surely blush and I did☺️
I am glad that you came up with an OS soonThis was amazing!
Naina touching herself trying to bring back that feeling when Sameer touched but she failed...It's just Sameer's right to make her nervous and her heart to flutter...
Hehe, Naina's one track mind and Sameer's 'innocence'😆 I just love how Naina gets flustered when Sameer teases, good going..
Aah, the pleats romanceThe touch will burn them till ashes..how his fingers trailed from her waist and slowly to her navel and that repetitive action he was doing❤️ They didn't kiss but surely you were successful in changing the colour of my face.
The twist, it was all Naina's plan and how I love Naina's boldness and finally the acceptance of their want for each other...loved it.
I am just glad that I didn't read this OS with my mom beside me, hehe.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Just wowww
Topper ki dimaag😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This OS erupted butterflies in my stomach too☺️
Our wish of Sameer seeing Naina in a Saree is still pending.. N you kinda fulfilled it, that too with a sexy saree n this heated romance!! Lovely

Please do write more OSs
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh lord I need break to breath .. hufff hufff
It was freaking hawwttt
I swear ..

I'm blushing so hard

They were so close .. Kia Yaar kiss Nahi hua
Do continue it if possible ..
Waise you should write a 18+ SamAina's FF
Would love to read it

Khair I loved it

Acha I have send you buddyrequest now do send me pm whenever you'll write something more hawwttt
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Uff...that was hot!!😳
Shravya, you're very good at passionate scenes yaar!
Sameer knows what looks good on his girl,so ofcourse he'd choose a modern,transparent saree 😉😉
I loved bold Naina...it was so smart of her to call Sameer in to help her,she knows how to drive him crazy😉
Best line-sam trying to be the good boy he never was!!😆😆
Don't bother, Sameer,we like it when you're not good😉
Aww man,the gang turned up at the wrong moment...had they stayed away for 15-20 mins more,your os would have been 18+😉
Beautiful story,pls write more.
Love,
Viji
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: moumita04

Shravya... I was thinking today only that its been long since you have written another story... And look here you are...😃

Ahh... what a concept... Completely loved reading it...

The sensuous touches and Naina trying to reminisce them by touching herself... Of course it wasn't the same. How could it be?
Only he has that capability to evoke those thousands of butterflies in her... His voice, his touch... That's the only thing that can create this magic.

Good touch on Sameer being away for business... Those brief periods of separation increases their want for each other.

So, Sameer got a saree as well as a blouse for her... He knew the measurements...!!😉

I loved how it was Naina's idea to call him in... and Sameer didn't even expect it... Hahaha... I always love bold Naina... Oh I wish the kiss had happened, but that's for another time...and I simply fell in love with the ending... Both hearts yearning the same...😳

Keep writing dear...!! You managed to make butterflies flutter in my stomach as well...👏



Hey moumita, it has been long yaar, yes, naina touching herself to get the feeling back is somehow easy and relatable to everyone who is in love and experiencing this type of feelings for the first time. Just thinking about it and smiling i can clearly see naina doing it. And absolutely right, only sameer's touch can create the magic and leave her feeling the butterflies.

The seperation was needed for them to take the first step into physical, otherwise they will do romance only in dreams lol. Oh, yes he knew the measurements 😉
Naina is a very strong character i love how she is ready to take steps when needed without hesitation, i would love to see that naina back in the show now. Yep, the kiss is for another time, i'm simply afraid about writing a kiss scene 😆 , i especially love this ending in this one.

Thank you moumita, glad u liked the ending As well. 😉 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: toshibelekar

Uff hot. Please update more. Waiting for next.



Glad u liked it dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Oh thank you shravya for writing this one on my request ... It was so passionate and romantic☺️...i myself got butterflies in my stomach reading this😆... They way naina was trying to reminscise his touch was so good and their phone call was super awesome ... Naughty and bold naina is always treat to read .. thank you so much dear once again .. btw my name is suman😊



Hey suman 😊

You are right, naughty and bold naina is always a treat to watch and read as well 😉
Thanks for cheering me up to write something dear 😆 and glad u loved it 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: JaySee

superb, cute, hot and passionate. Hoping that we can see similar scenes in the show. It will be a treat to watch. I was just thinking what will be Sameer's reaction if he came to know that Naina called him budhu in this matter.



Haha yes even subtle romance is fine, kuch tho do CV's. Like we are getting fed up with imagining thingss on their behalf lol. Even naina and sameer seemed to do romance only in dreams kya yaar ye log? But atleast sameer beta tho aage nikhla. Lol, i would love to see that as well. Sameer getting to know what naina thought of him. And him trying to prove her wrong. 😉

That would be awesome 😆

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