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Thanx for the PM dear...
Read the story in one go...Glad that you ended the manhoos track before college admissions..So that could show a even new phase in samaina relations...Naina being bold and deciding she wants them all together and lied about fees to her family, sameer had a lot of new things to consider about her ... She said and she Had done so many things for Sameer and when it comes to sameer she can fight with the whole world...
In part 2 I really liked they all went to the college in sameer's car... It was again so nicely written... The both pouting a kiss to each other ((blush blush )) ... Munna and Pandit being their usual self... And one more thing which I really liked here was their prtectiveness for all the girls ... (( I know it feels same in the show..But it had never came up when boys are showing Chivalry to save girls and even the Ragging episode the girls were humiliated until last when sameer came up and gave all his money... It would have been a good scene showing how they stood for the girls dignity in the show as well... Kind of showing how much the boys have grown and changed from the experience of sameer's bet aftermath ... But what we are given is nothing and only the vague view ...)) But this way of creating the story and then maintaining the real essence of the characters...(( The one when Pandit says ""saali bhi teri ..Gharwali bhi teri ... Hahahahaha,)) I could actually hear their dialogues and banters like they are talking for real while reading ... (( Swati saying mai teri pakki wali friend nahi kyunki humari kabhi ladai nahi hui ...Again a good one...So their banters were I could completely relate them to the characters...
Third part was so good and the way u presented it... Naina and Preeti convo at home (( Mere Jijaji Sameer ..Tere jijaji Ameer ,, I have watched that clip so many times and u us ed it wisely here ))) and college .. munna calling Kartik Biglaid Ameer zada ... (( That was the real parallel ... Loved Sameer's reaction ..Hahahaha ... ))
(( I always feel so much negatiVity from kartik ... I could actually think he could do such things ...)) And making preeti realise he was not good enough for her...All the way GREAT !! ...
The entry of Pandit...Wat an heroic entry to save his girl (( although they don't realise ...But that's the heroic act a man needs to do..Not only for his lover but any girl and her dignity ... )) Preeti is still kid in some ways and she won't even realise what pandit had done for her...( But you will come up with some good notes to bring them closer ..I know ... ... I am eagerly waiting for some of Swatina and Preedit moments ... ))
All an all the princi coming there and actually scolding and warning kartik ,..I am in love with this princi ...And she actually asked him to say preeti a sister... ( I rolled out laughing)) school se nikle to college me bhai behn shuru... And preeti saying may be princi met their Safari Suit Rakesh Tauji , Hitler Taiji ... And Shayar PVKM Principal...Lol ...
... Eagerly waiting for the new update and pls pls give us more Preedit scene... (( I like pandit more now after his cute Eye Fluttering moments while rehearsal ... He looks so cute ... And then the way he is watching closely is she had threading or not...That was quite a moment ))
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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