Naina- Sameer : FF Vishakha and Agrawals -Part 37 (Page 25)updated - Page 8

Wow such a long and awesome update! I m so happy that u completed the entire Arjun mission in one go! Must have taken hours! I loved the J Sameer but thank god he wasn't angry with Nina for long as she didn't even know what was bothering him... but glad that now he wd understand when Naina gets J. So cute... movie date... waiting! One down many more to go, AB main hai next in line? Chacha Chachi?

Originally posted by: Radkam

Wow such a long and awesome update! I m so happy that u completed the entire Arjun mission in one go! Must have taken hours! I loved the J Sameer but thank god he wasn't angry with Nina for long as she didn't even know what was bothering him... but glad that now he wd understand when Naina gets J. So cute... movie date... waiting! One down many more to go, AB main hai next in line? Chacha Chachi?

Wow! Loved it!! Finally A is with them!!

reading the title...I thought this FF was on Sameer/Naina & Sunaina...and was not happy to read triangle...and so had avoided...but today read all 10 parts in one go...and such a nice and beautiful update...please update soon next part

Originally posted by: surbharati

reading the title...I thought this FF was on Sameer/Naina & Sunaina...and was not happy to read triangle...and so had avoided...but today read all 10 parts in one go...and such a nice and beautiful update...please update soon next part

Originally posted by: viraf4u

Yes chacha chachi and tayaji taiji probably all in one go.. if they manage to keep it short :) or will make it different parts..

but up next there will a tiff between Samiana over Vicki.. as our Naina will want to know the real reason of the cut on his lip and this will make Sameer spill the beans...

but soon a romantic movie date is planned... lets see where they go and what they end up with :)😛

Yes the last update was super long took me days as introduction of cricket tournament had its own sequences that I had to follow through.. but glad that you all stuck with me and liked it...

thank you so much for the comments..

btw, I forgot to mention that awesome cricket commentary, though m
A fan of the game, description tou pakka nahi hoga... I might hv to copy a few lines from u for my FF forever yours... 😛 btw, u changed the title...this seems more apt is ShoeNaina song making an appearance yet... , but I want to demand a small incident when she again hovers over Sam & he sees Baiba angry & understands the feeling completely coz he felt the same with VK, even though she didn't know snout VK liking her & then he wd Shoe away ShoeNaina...reader's demand if u can fulfill 😉 😛

Originally posted by: Radkam

btw, I forgot to mention that awesome cricket commentary, though m
A fan of the game, description tou pakka nahi hoga... I might hv to copy a few lines from u for my FF forever yours... 😛 btw, u changed the title...this seems more apt is ShoeNaina song making an appearance yet... , but I want to demand a small incident when she again hovers over Sam & he sees Baiba angry & understands the feeling completely coz he felt the same with VK, even though she didn't know snout VK liking her & then he wd Shoe away ShoeNaina...reader's demand if u can fulfill 😉 😛

Part 8 : Mission Arjun bhaiya.The execution...Jealous Sameer :

Sameer (S) - Male Lead, Naina (N) Female Lead , Pandit ( PT) , Munna ( M), Swati ( ST), Preety ( P), Arjun bhaiya ( A), Rakesh sir ( R), Vishakha ( V) , Poonam Bhabhi ( PooB), Pooja didi ( PooD) Karthik ( K ), Sunaina (SN), mama, mami, taiji, chachaji, chachiji, Shefali (SF) , Mundit ( Munna + Pandit) , SaMunDit ( Sameer + Munna + Pandit), Samiana ( Sameer + Naina ), Vicki (VK), Kartik (K)

Next day college :

A jaldi aata hain aur saath mein N aur P bhi aa jati hain... cricket match mein bas ab 2 hi din bache hain. Aaj saarein school jinohone participate kiya hain vo aane wale the ... pitch wagera dekhne aur kaun kise ke saath kab khelega --- vo sab tay aaj hi hona tha...

VK bhi aa jata hain aur Samundit aur gang, K aur gang bhi wahin hain...

N ko dekh ke S bahut khush hota hain aur N bhi ek acchi si muskaan de deti hain... VK S kay age hi khada hain aur use lagta hain.. N usko dekh ke smile kar rahi hain.. aur vo bahut khush ho jata hain.. aur haath utha ke N ko hi karta hain..

Yeh dekh key Mundit chillate hain jor se... arey N tumne accounts ke notes likhe?? Aur N un dono ko dekh ke puchti hain Accounts ke notes ?

M: haan haan Vo accounts ke notes chaiye.. jara yahan aake dedo jaldi sey...

N aur P : bhaag ke wahan chali jaati hain. aur pura gang class mein chala jata hain..

VK wahin ka wahin khada reh jata hain .. aur A ki awaz sun ke uski aur chalne lagta hain...

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Evening program ki tayari:

Sabhi teams wahan ikaatha hue hain aur Princi aur Sports teacher sab ka swagat karte hain.. aur niyam ki ghoshana karte hain...

Princi: aap sab teams ka yahan sawagat hain VJN university ki : Inter collegiate Cricket tournament mein. Aasha hain haar baar ki tarah is baar bhi chahe aant mein koi bhi jeete.. sachhi jeet to khel ki hogi.. aur hum sab yahin koshish karein ki competition ko sach mayno mein aur sahi tarike se hi khele. Ab mein university ke Sports teacher ko bulana chahungi jo competition kay rules aur point system aap sabko baata denge.

Sports teacher: Aap sabhi team aapne district ke preliminary rounds khel ke yahan pahonchi hain. Har match 20 overs hi khelegi aur in 20 over mein tay hoga kaun kitne point jeet sakta hain.. ab sabhi team ke captain aage aa jay taki toss kar ke yeh decide kar sakte hain kaun kis ke saath khelne wali hain...kal.

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Ghar jaane ke pehle: K , S, VK, A aur puri team pitch pe khadi hain aur nervous hain kal kya hoga...

A aur VK team ka honsla badhate hain.. aur sari team ko best of luck kehte hue aaj raat jaldi so ke kaal ek dum fresh hone ke liye kehte hain...taki vo log aaram se semi finals mein acche points ke saath jaaye.

Princi aur Sports teacher bhi VK aur K ki coaching sey bahout khush hain aur team ka utsaah dekh ke garv mehsoos kar rahe hain aur kehte hain.. is baat to VJN hi jitegi trophy.

Sab byee bole ke ghar ki aur nikal padte hain..

S N ko isharey se class mein milne ke liye kehta hain... tabhi A- N aur P ko ghar chalne ke liye bulata hain.. N kehti hain vo class mein kutch bhool gayi hain.. abhi leke aati hain.. aur jhat sey class ki aur bhaag leti hain aur dusari aur sey S bhi class ki aur daud jata hain...

N aur S dono ek hi saath class mein pahonch te hain... aur dono hi School ki vo pehli mulakaat aur vo twirl yaad karte hain.. aur dono hi ek dusare ko dekh ke muskurate hain..

S: N bas kal do dino ki match ho jaye aur hum jeet jaaye vahi bhagwanji se maangta hoon.. taki jitne ke baat mein A sey hamari baat kar sakoon..

N: haan meine to bhagwanji se yahi manga hain ke tumhari sari mannatein puri ho...

S: yeh sunte hain.. N ko pyar se dekh ne lagta hain aur chupke se uska haath pakad leta hain aur dheere sey usey utha key us pe kiss karne hi wala hota hain.. ke N haat sharmate hue khinch leti haain aur dusari aur mud jaat hain..

S: N ke piche jaake khade hoke dheere se jhook key N ke kaan mein bolta hain.. " aaj nahin to kaal mujhe flying kiss chahiye- tum tayaar rehna dene aur lene ke liye- aur halki si phoonk marta hain usek gale pe jis ki wajah se N wahin ki wahin khadi ki khadi reh jaati hain us ehsaas ki wajah sey... aur S chupke se byee bolke chalne lagta hain...

N S ko jaate hue dekh blush karti hain.. aur S tabhi mud ke dekh kar N ko ek acchi si smile aur wink karte hue chala jaata hain...

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Quarterfinals aur Semi Finals:

VJN ka mukabala PMU - quarter finals:

PMU kafi acchi khel rahi hain par end mauke par VNJ aapni acchi fielding ki wajah se wicket lete hue jeet jaati hain. S and K gale milke ek dusare ko badhai dete hain.. aur VK aur A bhi bahout khush hoja te hain aur daud ke dono ko gale laga lete hain.. aur pehli jeet ka jashn puri team hug karte hue manate hain...

VNJ ka mukabala SPU ke saath Semi finals:

Pehli jeet se khush hote hue dono hi teams accha khel ka pradarshan kar rahi hain...S aur K ki partnership ney VNJ kay kafi runs bana liye hain..aur SPU haar ki stithi mein aa jati hain..aur kafi aasani sey VJN Semi finals jit jaatey hain aur Finals mein pahonch jati hain...

Finals mein pahonch jaane se. pure school aur team mein ek umang ki leher daud jaati hain. 3 saal baad VJN finals mein pahoncha hain.. is liye Princi aur Sports teacher aur sabhi staff bahut khush hain...

Team mein bhi Finals mein pahonchane par ek alag sa utsah aa jata hain.. K bhi S kay saath ki dushmani bhulte hue lag raha hain aur dono haath mila ke ek dusare ko badhai dete hain. Dusari taraf N aur pura gang bhi bahut khush hota hain.. aur Mundit jaldi se aake S ko gale lake ke use hawan mein uchalte hain.. N aur girls gang bhi wahan aa jati hain.. aur N bhi khushi se S ko gale lagane ke liye aage badhti hain.. Jo dekh ke S khush ho jata hain.. tabhi wahan VK bich mein aa jata hain.. aur kehta hain.. abhi khushi to hain par asli khushi kal hogi jab hum Finals jeetengen aur trophy leke aayenge.. chalo ab sab jaake aaram karo aur kal ki tayari karo..

S aur N nirash hoke ek dusare ko dekhte hue.. apne apne ghar chale jaate hain...

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Night time phone call before the Finals

S: N aaj tum mujhe kutch dene wali thi match ke baad? (flashback to where N goes to hug S)

N: ooohhh aaccha kya mujhe to kutch yaad nahin hain.. aur muskurati hain.. ( hug ko yaad karte hue )..

S: accha to tumhe kutch bhi yaad nahin.. to fir thik hain.. mujhe aab sona hain.. kal ki match ke liye coach ne kahan hain aaram karna hain to mein phone rakh raha hoon...

N: arey arey tum to naraz ho gaye.. vaise baat to sahi hain.. kal ke liye tumhe sach mein aaram karna chahiye...aur ... ummm aur.. kal jab jit ke trophy leke aaoge.. toh ... toh...

S: toh kya... trophy ke baad kya??

N: to ky maloom kal trophy ke saath tumhe aur bhi kutch mil jaaye.. and she blushes at the prospect of hugging S

S: smiles and shies at the hint N just gave and thinks now I need to win this match at any cost.. and says thik han fir kal trophy jit ke hi tumse miloonga.. gn

N: sharmate hue.. gn

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Finals ka din:

VJN aur St Xaviers ke bich mein finals chal raha hain.. St Xaviers last 3 saal se jeet ti aayi hain aur is baar bhi pure josh ke saath khel rahi hain.. par VJN bhi aacha khel kehlte hue unhe kaante ki takkar de rahi hain.. VK aur A bhi unhe aache se guide kar rahe hain...

St Xaviers: 20 over mein 135 runs bana leti hain.. jo bahut jyada hain.. aur VJN team thodi niraash ho jati hain..

Tabhi S pure team ka honsla badhate hue kehta hain ki agar hum apni pari khelne ke pehle hi yeh sochne lagein ge ki vo team ne itne saare runs banaye.. to hum khelne ke pehle hi haar jayenge.. abhi humein yeh sochna hain.. ki hum 136 runs kaise bana sakte hain aur jeet sakte hain.. jab tak winning attitude nahin hoga.. hum jit nahin sakte...

A aur VK yeh sun ke khush hote hain.. A jaake S ke kandhe pe haat rakh ke usey honsla dene ke liye sabashi deta hain. S bhi yeh dekh ke bahut khush hota hain ki A ab usey samjane laga hain aur pasand bhi karne laga hain.. aur jis reason sey yeh pura plan usne aur N ne kiya tha vo kamyaab hote hue dikh raha tha. Ab S ko itna to bharosa tha ki is match ko hum jeete ya haarein... A usey sach mein pasand karne laga hain aur use.. jeet ke phele hi ek jeet ka ehsaas hota hain..

Wahi dusari aur N bhi S aur A ko dekh rahi hain aur khush ho rahi hain... ki shayad ab A , S ko pasand karne lage hain...aur ab unse baat karne mein shayad sab thik ho jaye.. jaldi se vo bhagwanji se prarthana karti hain.. A maan jaaye.

VJN ki baari: VK- S ko openers mein jaane se mana karta hain.. aur A aur K dono hi shocked ho jate hain... S samaj jata hain VK aisa kyun kar raha hain.. usey side mein leke jaake baat karta hain... kyunki abhi match ko shuru hone mein thodi der hain

S: VK is match se nato sirf tumhare par kafi logon ki umeed judi hain.. aur hamari aapsi tashan ya jo bhi hain.. uski wajah sey main tumhe match do dao pe lagane nahin doonga... A ka cricket ka career is par nirbhar karta hain... aur mein tumhe aisai uske saath khelne nahin doonga...

VK: accha to tum mante ho ki A ka career is match pe depend karta hain? to tum yeh bhi jaante hoge ji main aisa kis liye kar raha hoon... main bhi A ko kamyaab dekhna chahta hoon kyunki vo N ka bhai hain.. and he looks pointed at S and says.. aur mein N ko bahut pasand karta hoon...( flashback of ragging day, fresher's party, hallway hit and misses )

S: yeh sun ke to jaise S ka sabra ka baandh toot hi jata hain.. aur vo sidhe VK ke collar ko pakad leta hain... kay kaha tumne?? N ka naam bhi mat lena varna mein bhool jaoonga tum mere coach ke hasiyat se yahan ho... aur jab yeh baat nikali hi hain to main tumhe bata deta hoon... tum N se door hi raho aur A se bhi... agar match ke baad unse rishta ya aaspaas bhi dikhai diye to mujhse bura koi nahin hoga..

VK: accha tumhara copyright hain dono pe?

S: ab agar N aur uske parivaar ke baarein mein kutch bhi bola.. to yeh match to kya mein sab kutch bhool jaoonga..aur vo VK ki collar aur bhi zor se pakad leta hain..

VK bhi Sameer ki shirt pakad ke usey dhakka deta hain.. S: bhi usey pakad ke girane ki kosish karta hain.. Tabhi VK ka haath uth jata hain aur ek mukka S ke gaal pe lag jata hain aur S ka honth kat jaata hain.. aur khoon behne lagta hain...

Yeh dekh ke S bahut gussa hota hain aur VK ko bhi ek mukka jad deta hain aur VK gir padta hain aur shocked ho jata hain S ki takat dekh ke..

Tabhi wahan A aa jata hain aur dono ko ladte hue dekh shock ho jata hain.. aur saath mein Mundit bhi aa jate hain aur S ka khoon dekh ke bahut gussa hote hain aur VK par toot padte hain.. A bich mein aake VK ko bacha ta hain.. aur puch ta hain kya chal raha hain yeh sab... kyun ladai jagda kar rahe ho?

VK: S ko taunt marta hain.. batadoon, Samundit ke hosh ud jaate hain.. ki agar A ko abhi pata chala to vo galat soch baithe ga aur yeh sab plan choupat ho jayega... S- Mundit ko sambhal ta hain aur kehta hain : A hum log lad nahi rahe the.. vo to mein VK se puch raha that mujhe opening ke liye kyun nahin bhej raha aur mera pair slip hota hain aur mujhe bachane ke chakkar mein VK ka haat mere gaal pe lag jaata hain aur honth cut jaata hain..

A believe kar leta hain.. aur VK ko kehta hain.. S aur K ko hi opening karni chahiye... VK: haan kehta hain aur S ki aur dekhte hue wahan se chala jaata hain...

A: S ki aur dekhte hue.. tumhe lagta hain ki mujhe kutch dekhai nahin deta ... par mujhe sab dikhai de bhi raha hain aur samaj mein bhi aa raha hain.. abhi is waqt match sabsey jyada jaroori hain hum sab ke liye.. to tum sirf khel pe dhyaan do baki sab baatein hum match ke baad bhi kar sakte hain.. aur vo wahan se chala jata hain..

S thoda khush ho jata hain ke A gussa to nahin hua agar usey lagta hain ke mere aur N ke beech mein kutch hain... Is ek khushi ki wajah se S ke andar ek naya josh aa jata hain.. aur vo pitch ki aur match open karne ke liye nikal padta hain..

S jaisai hi bahar aata hain vo aapna helmet pehen leta hain taki mooh dhak ley. N ko agar vo cut dekhai de gaya to vo sab bhul jayegi- hum log kahan hain aur jhat se uske paas aajayegi..

N S ko aate dekh khush hoke usey All the best bolti hain.. par S ka chehra dekh use kutch ajeeb sa mehsoos hota hain.. vo isharey se puchti hain sab thik hain? helmet utaro?

S : yeh ishara dekh ke muskurane lagta hain.. meri taklif ek pal ko mein khud se chupa sakta hoon par Naina sey... chupana mushkil hi nahin namoomkin hain...aur vo thumbs up dikha ke kehta hain sab thik hain...

VJN ki baari shuru hoti hain aur S aur K bahut accha kehlte hain.. tabhi achanak K catch out ho jata hain aur puri team hatash ho jati hain.. par S .. K ki aur jaake usey gale se lagata hain aur kehta hain.. well played... aur kehta hain ab hum dono ki aur se mein kheloonga.. K is gesture se khush ho jata hain aur S ke shoulder pe pat kar ke usey good luck kehte hue chala jaata hain...

Aakhri kutch balls bachi hain aur VJN: 7 wicket pe 123 runs bana chuki hain... ab 2 ball pe 13 run chahiye.. jo namumkeen se lage rahey hain.. par S ka honsla buland hain.. 5 ball no ball declare hoti hain aur uspe S ne 4 lagaya... is wajah se abhi bhi 2 ball aur run chahiye 9.. agli ball pe S ne lagaya Six... aur sab kudne lagte hain.. par abhi bhi unhe 3 run chahiye jitney ke liye...

Aur last ball pe S: four maarne ki kosish karta hain ball boundry ki aur jaati hain aur fielder usey pakad leta hain ... S upar dekh ke bhagwanji ka shukhriya manta hain.. aur sab khushi se uchal ne lagte hain.. kyun ki fielder ground ke seema ke bahar khada hain... aur vo 4 ho jata hain aur VJN 2 run se jeet jaati hain..

Puri team field pe aajati hain aur S ko apne kandho pe utha leti hain.. A aur VK bhi bahout khush hote hain aur gale lagte hain..

S bhi aake A ko gale lagata hain.. aur A bhi khushi se phoola nahin samata.. ke VJN jeet gayi...

S VK ke pass jaake use sey haat milata hain.. VK : congratulations bahut accha khele tum.. par yeh mat samajna ki hamari baat puri ho gayi... Keh ke wahan se chala jata hain..

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Mundit aur N wahan aa jate hain aur N- S ka cut dekh ke shock ho jati hain...mundit samaj jaate hain.. N ne vo cut aur khoon dekh liya hain.. aur S aur N ko wahan akela chod ke chale jaate hain..

N: S yeh chout kaisai lagi tumhe.. kya hua.. kab hua..tumne kutch bataya kyun nahin.. aur vo panic karne lagti hain.. yeh dekh ke S bas use dekhta hi rehta hain pyar sey...

S: arey koi baat nahin.. bas aisai hi .. N: aisai hi? Khoon nikal raha hain hontho pe se aur tum keh rahe ho aisai hi?? Yeh kaisai hua aur tumhara gaal bhi suja hua lag raha hain.. kya hua kisi se hatha payi hui?? Vo daud ke aapne rumal ko gila karke S ke gaal aur honthon ko saaf karne lagti hain... S: N ko itne paas apne honthon ko chute dekh.. ek ajeeb si tarang mehsoos karta hain.. aur N to fikar mein hi khoi hui hain.. aur bole jaa rahin hain... S ko to ab kutch bhi sunai nahi de raha vo to sirf N ke chune ka ehsaas mein kho gaya hain... na to use chout ka dard ho raha hain na to jeet ki khushi... ..vo to is sailab mein behta jaa raha hain... tabhi uski nazar darvaje pe jaati hain... jahan vo A ko khada dekhta hain...

A ko dekhte hi S ke chehre se khoon gayab ho jata hain aur vo sunn ho jata hain.. N yeh dekh ke confuse ho jati hain aur vo bhi mud ke darvaje ki aur dekhti hain.. aur A ko dekh jam jaati hain...A bhi S aur N ko aisai dekh ke sunn hojata hain.. aur ek dum sey gussa hone hi wala hota hain jab vo saari baatein yaad karta hain ( car winning match S ki wajah sey.. A ka cricket coach ke liye sifarish.. S ki jee tod mehnat, A ko badhava , K ke saath tashan hote hue bhi Usko match saath mein kehle ke liye kehna, team ko jeetne ke liye uksaana- uske ghar pe uski Bhabhi ka A ko dekh ke rishtedaar kehna.. yeah sab uske dimag mein chal raha tha...) Yeh sab sochte hi uska gussa shaant ho jata hain aur vo dono ki aur dekhta hain..

S: A vo mein aur N vo.. tum galat mat samajana mein tumse baat karne hi wala tha...

N: apna sir niche kar sirf khadi hi reh jaati hain.. aur kutch bhi bol nahin paati..

S: aaj mein tumse kutch bhi nahin choopaoonga.. tumhe to yaad hi hoga hum dono ka school ka panga ( flashback to fighitning and A falling off the steps ) tab tum bahut gussa mein the is liye mein kutch keh nahin paya par main N se bahut pyaar karta hoon. Manaki mujhe us baat ko samajne mein der hui aur shart wali baat bilkul galat thi.. par ab vo sab ek bita hua kaal hain.. aaj mein aur N ek dusare se bepannah pyar karte hain aur ek dusare ke bagair rehne ka soch bhi nahi sakte. Tumhe lag raha hoga ke mein ek bade baap ki bigadi hui aaulad hoon aur N ke saath timepass kar raha haoon.. par main tumhe yakeen dilata hoon.. main N ko leke bahut serious hoon... aur maine apne ghar walon ko bhi bata diya hain aur meri mummy N se bahut khush hain aur usey apni bahu swikaar kar chuki hain.

A yeh sun ke shocked reh jata hain ke itna sab kutch ho gaya aur yeh sab itne saloon sey chal raha hain... Vo N ki taraf dekhata hain...

N yeh sari baate sun ke upar dekhti hain S ki taraf aur fir A ki taraf.. vo dhere se A ki tarf badhate hue aati hain aur unke samne aake khadi ho jaati hain... do pal ke liye ruk key.. vo A ko gale lagake rone lagti hain... N ko rota dekh S aur A dono hi tilmila uthte hain.. S: duad ke N ke paas jaata hain aur use rone ke liye mana karta hain...

A: yeh dekhta hain aur ek halki si muskurahat uske chehrey pe aajati hain... aur N ko saamne rakhe ke uska chehra apne haathon mein leke kehta hain.. N tu kab itni bad ho gayi mujhe to pata hi nahin chala... main manta hoon S ke baarein mein mere vichaar kabhi acche nahin the.. par is cricket tournament kay duarn maine S ko kareeb se jana hain.. aur vo samaj jata hain ki yeh sab in dono ka hi plan tha... aur vo N ko puchata hain ... ki mere yahan coach ke post kay chuney jaane mein tum don ka hi haat hain .. haina? aur muskurata hain... S yeh dekh ke N ke paas aake khada ho jata hain aur N bhi rona band karti hain aur A ko gale se laga leti hain..

A: N aur S ko saath khada dekh bas dekhta hi jaata hain... tum dono ek saath bahut acche lagte ho.. sada aisai hi khush rehna aur S agar tumne meri behen ki aankon mein dubara aansoon laye to mujhse bura koi nahin hoga..

Yeh sunke S aur A gale lagte hain aur N bas khushi ke aason rone lagti hain aur A ko gale laga leti hain.

S wahan un dono ko gale lag ke rote hue dekh sochta hain ki .. Jab maine zindagi sey ummeed lagai to usne mujhe di dadi aur somani kay taane, Naina se judai ke vo paal, par jab laga saans choot rahi thi to usne diye dher saari khushiyan... mummy ka sweekar aur A ka saath..zindagi aaj bahut khoobsurat lag rahi thi... mano mujhe pe meherbaan ho... par mujhe maloom hain.. abhi Delhi bahut door hain...

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Part 9: Ek pyara si mulakaat

Part 9: Ek pyari si mulakaat

Sameer (S) - Male Lead, Naina (N) Female Lead , Pandit ( PT) , Munna ( M), Swati ( ST), Preety ( P), Arjun bhaiya ( A), Rakesh sir ( R), Vishakha ( V) , Poonam Bhabhi ( PooB), Pooja didi ( PooD) Karthik ( K ), Sunaina (SN), mama, mami, taiji, chachaji, chachiji, Shefali (SF) , Mundit ( Munna + Pandit) , SaMunDit ( Sameer + Munna + Pandit), Samiana ( Sameer + Naina ), Vicki (VK), Kartik (K)

S, N aur A saath mein wapis field pe aate hain jahan Princi announcement kar rahi thi. Princi: aaj 3 saal baad VJN wapis Cricket tournament jiti hain aur isi khushi mein ... school ki taraf se puri team aur coach aur saare teachers aur student helpers ko kal party ka invitation hain. Sabhi log party ka naam sun ke bahut khush ho jate hain.

N abhi bhi kahin khoi hui hain... S usey dekh key puchata hain kya hua- ab to A bhi aapne saath hain. N tabhi S ke zakham ko dekh ke dukhi ho jati hain kyun ki purey time helmet pehan ke rakhne ki wajah se vo vapis hara ho gaya tha aur khoon bhi nikal raha tha.. S yeh dekhte hi turant rumal se use daba deta hain. A bhi yeh dekhta hain aur fir N ki tarf dekhta hainaur N ko dukhi dekh ke vo samaj jata hain usey S ki chinta ho rahi hain par vo kutch bolta nahin hain.

Tabhi wahan VK aa jata hain aur A ko kehta hain kal party mein milte hain.. tum saath mein kise leke aarhe ho? A : mein shayad N ,P aur ek aur dost ko leke aaraha hoon aur tum? VK: mera to koi dost nahin hain to mein K ke saath aaonga aur chupke sey N ko dekhta hain jo abhi bhi S ko dekhe jaa rahi hain.

Tabhi A N aur P ko bulata hain ghar jaane ke liye. N ka maan bilkul S ko chod ke jaane ka nahin hain- uska maan to hain vo S key chout pey dava lagaye aur gaal ke liye garam pani ki water bag de taki vo sujan kam ho jaye. Par A ki aur dekhte hi vo P ke saath chalne lagti hain.

S jaanta hain N ko abhi jaane ka maan nahin hain kyunki vo meri chout pe marham lagana chahti hain. Vo isharey se useey tassali deta hain ki vo thik hain aur ghar jaake uspe dava laga lega. Tum chinta mat karo.

N A ke saath ghar ke liye nikal jaati hain aur Samundit bhi ghar ke liye ravana ho jate hain.

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Naina ka ghar:

Ghar pahonchte hi N sidhe aapne kamare mein daud ke chali jaati hain aur A sey baat karne ke liye bhi nahin rukati.. abhi uske dimag mein sirf S ki chout hain na ki A ke saamne jo itna bada khulasa hua vo .

A bhi kutch kahe bina niche jaake sidhiyon pe baith jaata hain aur sochta hain pure din ka vyakya (incident) tabhi Shefali (SF) wahan aajati hain aur puchati hain A tum yahan aisai kyun baithe ho? Sab thik hain? kya hua aaj match mein? Tum jite na?

SF ko dekh ke A ka maan shaant ho jata hain aur vo muskurane lagata hain: haan aaj VJN jeet gayi.. sab bahout khush the coaching sey aur Princi to shayad mere liye ek job ki bhi sifarish karne wali hain. SF sach mein aaj ka din bahout kamal ka tha.. aaj mujhe kafi sari cheezon se milna bhi hua aur samna bhi hua.. kal tak jo meri ungli pakad ke chalti thi vo kab badi ho gayi aur kisi aur ka haath thaam ke chalne ke kabil ho gayi main jaan hi nahin paya..

SF confuse ho jati hain match aur ungli ka kya vaasta hain... aur A ko dekh ke puchati hain: Yeh tum kya bol rahe ho? Match mein kisiko ungli pakad ke chalna pada tha? Tabhi vo A ko thik se dekhti hain aur samaj jati hain- N ki baat kar rahe ho? Kya hua tumse kisi ne kutch kahan?

SF jaanti hain N aur S ke baare mein aur kai baar usne socha bhi tha A ko batadey par fir use laga- yeh baat N aur A saath mein baith ke karein to hi A ko tasalli hogi.. varna use lagega sabko maloom hain aur usey batana zaroori nahin samja- isiliye usne itne saalon se yeh baat kabhi A ko nahin batai.

A: aaj S ne mujhe uske aur N ke baarein mein bataya.. ek pal ke liye mujhe aisa laga ki ...mujhe bahut gussa hona chahiye.. kyunki isi S ki wajah se Papa ki bezaati hui thi puja didi ki shaadi mein ( flashback to the wedding scnen ) aur school mein bhi S ne papa ko bahout tang kiya hain aur S ne jo N ke saath shaart wala incident tha.. usey to mein kabhi bhoola nahin sakta ( S aur A ka tashan school mein ) par aaj jab usney bataya aur jaise vo N ko dekh raha tha aur Jaise N usko dekh rahi thi.. mano mera gussa ek dum se shaant ho gaya.. chaah ke bhi mein gussa na ho paya dono pey.. aur maine un dono key rishte ko swikara.

SF yeh sab sun ke muskurati hain.. : A shayad is badlav ki zimmedaar hum hi hain..aur dono ek dusarey ko dekhne lagte hain... jab tum S pe gussa the tab tumhey bhi pyaar ka ehsaas nahin tha.. par aaj jab tumhe un dono ke baarein mein maloom hua to tum samaj paye ke vo dono kya mehsoos kar rahe hain- kyunki hum bhi vo hi feel kar rahein hain.. isiliye tum un dono pe chaah ke bhi naraz nahin ho paye. Yeh pyaar hota hi aisa hain- ki gussey vale Arjun ko bhi billi bana de .. aur vo hasne lagti hain... SF ko hansta dekh A bhi muskurane lagta hain aur sochta hain sahi kaha SF ney.. agar vo meri zindagi mein na aati to mein pyar ko kabhi samaj hi nahin pata aur N aur S ko bhi galat samajta..ab chahey aage jo bhi ho.. mein unka aur SF ka saath kabhi nahin chodunga..

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N ghar pey ek jagah se dusare jagah chakkar laga rahi hain.. uska maan shaant hone ka naam hi nahin le raha hain.. usey baar baar S ki chaot dikhai de rahi hain aur maan to kar raha tha S ke paas jaake uska haal dekh paye aur dava lagaye.. par kaise.. raat bhi ho gayi thi.. ghar se nikalne ka to sawal hi nahin tha aur S to pehle hi dard mein hain- usey bhi yahan nahin bula sakti... vo bechain ho uthati hain aur ghar ke baar corridor mein upar niche chalne lagti hain...

Tabhi A sidhi se niche utarte hue aata hain aur N ko dukhi aur kashmakash mein dekhta hain. Vo samaj jaata hain- usey S ki chinta ho rahi hain... vo sidhe ghar mein jaata hain aur thodi der mein bahar aata hain aur N ko saath chalne ke liye kehta hainaaj match ki khushi mein chal ice crme kha ke aate hain aur SF ko bhi saath le lete hain kyunki P to so gayi hain... N ka ice crme khane ka bilkul man nahin hain par use maloom hain yeh match jitna A ke liye kitna important tha.. to vo unka maan rakhne ke liye saath ho leti hain... par dimag to S ke paas hi atka hua hain...

A, N aur SF gaadi mein ice crme ke liye nikal jaate hain... N piche baithi hain aur SF aage.. A baar baar N ko dekhe jaa raha hain.. aur tabhi vo N ko rote hue dekhta hain.. aur choti se muskurahat uske honto pe aa jaati hain.. kyunki usey maloom hain..pyar kisi ko bhi nikamma bana deta hain...

Tabhi achanak S ke ghar ke saamne aate hi vo gadi rok deta hain.. N shock ho jati hain... bhaiya yeh to S ka ghar hain.. aap yahan kyun ley aaye yahan pe kahan hain ice- crme ki dukan? A piche mud ke hansta hain.. haan mein tumhe ice crme hi khilane ke liye laya hoon par real ki ice crme nahin... aur S ke ghar ki taraf ishara karta hain .. aur kehta hain.. mujhe maloom hain tum shaam se S ki chout ko leke baichain ho.. jake mil lo usey to tumhe tasalli ho jayegi ki vo theek hain... yeh sunte hi vo A ko gale lagane ke liye badhati hain par gadi mein gale kaise lagaye.. aur daud key S ke ghar ki aur chali jaati hain..

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S ka ghar

S bhi shaam se baichain tha N ko dekhne ke liye par gaal thoda suja tha aur hont kafi laal ho gaya tha- khoon tham gaya tha par dukh raha tha aur aisi halat mein mama mami ney ghar se nikal ney ki permission nahi di...varna vo jaake N ko ek baar dekh leta..kyunk ki vo jaanta hain N ko use dekhey bagair nind nahin aayegi aaj. aur vo intezaar kar raha tha jab uske ghar pe sab so jaaye to N ke saath phone pe baat karke ussey tasalli de de ki vo theek hain...

Tabhi na jaane kaunsa ehsaas ne usey chua aur vo kamre sey nikal ke bahar garden mein aa gaya... ghar pe sabhi so gaye the.. aur vo garden mein halki si chandani ke niche thandi thandi hawa chal rahi thi.. aur vo N ko miss karne laga.. kaash tum hoti mere paas..

Usi waqt ek awaz sunai deti hain.. Sameer... aur vo chaunk jaata hain.. N ki awaz.. aur vo mud ke awaz ki tarf dekhne lagta hain..aur tabhi N ko daud kay aate hue dekhta hain aur jaise uski saans hi ruk jaat hain... N sach mein wahan thi.. uske ghar pe.. ussey milne aayi thi..raat ko ...meri chout pe marham lagane aayi thi... meri Naina..

N bhi S ko garden mein tehle te hue dekh khud ko rok nahin paati hain aur uski aur daud ne lagti hain. S ko apni aur mudte hue dekh ek ajeeb si leher daud jaati hain, aur vo daudte hue jaake S ko gale se laga leti hain. S bhi samaj nahin pata kya hua aur N ko gale laga leta hain... dono hi ek dusarey ke chune ke ehsaas se kaanp (shiver) jaate hain... aur dono ney hi is chuvan mein kho jaate hain ... mano mahino- saalo ke baad miley ho ... aisa lag raha tha jaisey waqt tham gaya ho.. dono hi kho gaye the ek dusarein mein... chandani bhi unke is pyaar pe muskura rahi thi aur phool bhi haaste hue apni khushboo faila rahe the.. mano sara aalam isi ke liye kabse ruka tha jo aaj kheel utha tha...ek dusarey ke chune kay ehsaas sey...

tabhi N ko iilm ( presence) hota hain ki voh kahan hain aur dheere se aapne haath khichane lagti hain... par S ka maan to abhi bhara nahin aur vo N ko jaane nahin deta... par N ab thoda sharmati hain aur ghabra bhi rahi hain ki agar wahan koi aa gaya to aur vo dur hone ki koshish karti hain.. is baar S use chod deta hain... kyunki vo us chandani mein N ka chehra dekhna chahta hain jis pe uske chune ka ehsaas saaf saaf dikhai de raha hoga... aur vo dheere sey N ko chodta hain aur use dekhne lagta hain ... N ka chehra mano gulab ki tarah laal ho gaya tha.. sharm aur pyar sey... S to yeh dekh ke muskurane lagta hain aur N bhi yeh dekh ke niche dekhne lagti hain sharmake...

S: N tum yahan kaise itni raat ko? N: Vo A leke aaye hain.. S- yeh sun ke dang reh jata hain.. A.. tumhe yahan mere ghar A leke aaya hain? N : haan vo shaam sey meri roti hui surat dekh ke reh nahin sake aur ice crme khilane ke bahane yahan le aaye aur kahan mein tumhe dekh loon taki tasalli ho jay kay tum thik ho. Tabhi uski nazar fule hue gaal aur laal honth pe padti hain.. aur mano dard usey ho raha ho.. uski aankhe naam hojati hain.. aur dheere sey uska haath S ke honth pe chala jata hain..aur usey chu ke use sehlane lagti hain.. mano aisa karne se uspe marham laga rahi ho... N ki ungaliyon kay chune sey.. S sahem jata hain... N uski kaanp ko mehsoos karti hi aur kehti hain.. sorry dard ho raha hain...

S: nahin tumne itne pyar se usey chuva ... sab dard gayab... aur vo N ke aankhon see behte hue aanso ko apni ungli sey ponchta hain... main thik hoon Naina.. sach.. tumne aaj mujhe jis tarah se gale lagaya.. mano saari zindagi ka jo bhi dard mere andar bhara tha vo sab thik ho gaya..aur vo N ko bas dekhte hi rehta hain..

Tabhi unhe gadi ka horn sunai deta hain aur N samaj jati hain.. A bula raha hain.. aur S ko byee bol ke jaane lagti hain.. par mud ke kehti hain... haldi wala doodh pee lena taki subh tak sujan kam ho jaye... aur ... ghar jaake phone karti hoon tum phone ke pass rehna thik hain? aur muskurati hain.. tabhi S uska haath thamb leta hain... aur fir se dono hug ko yaad karte hain aur ek dusare mein kho jaate hain.. tabhi dobara horn sunai deta hain.. aur N byee bol ke wahan se chali jaati hain...

S bas N ko jaate hue dekhta rehta hain.. aur sochta hain..nanaji sahi thay... jaisa unhoney socha tha N ke baremein vo bilkul waisi hi hain... Mujhe sambhal ne wali meri chout pe marham lagane wali... mujh sey bepanah pyar karne wali... vo bilkul waisi hain... meri Naina...

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Night time phone call:

N ghar pahonch ke sidhe apne kamarey mein jaati hain phone leke. P to so rahi hain isiliye use maloom hain vo to uthne se rahi. Vo S ka no dial karti hain.. aur Hello kehte hain aur samne se S bhi hello kehta hain...

Do no jane ek dusare ek chuvan ka ehsaas abhi bhi mehsoos kar rahe hain aur ek dusare mein kho jaate hain..

N: haldi wala doodh piya? S: hmmm haan abhi thoda piya.. par mujhe bilkul pasand nahin hain aur moo banata hain

N: bilkul bacchon ki tarah karte ho.. vo doodh chout ke liye davai thi koi milkshake nahin tha jo tumhe enjoy karna tha use aur muskurati hain..

S- yeh sunke muskurata hain par honth dard karta hain isiliye ek cheekh bhi nikal aati hain.. ooouch..

N : kya hua sab thik hain? honth dard kar raha hain? hanso mat tum aur agar baat karne se dukh raha hain to phone rakhdo hum log kal college mein milenge..

S: nahin nahin.. phone mat kato.. main mar jaoonga.. mujhe tumse abhi dher sari baatien karni hain.. haan thoda dard ho raha hain par tum baat karti rahogi to dard bilkul gayab ho jayega.. accha tum kal party mein kya pehen rahi ho? Main bhi tay nahin kar pa raha hoon kya pehnu..tumhe maloom hain na mujhe Man of the tournament ki trophy milne wali hain? aur tum meri honewali vo ho... to tumhe bhi ek dum mast dikhana hain...

N- S ke muh se ye sun ke maan hi maan bahut garv mehsoos karti hain. aur jab vo use "honewali vo kehta hain tab to vo ek dum laal ho jati hain... hmmm main bataoon .. kal tum kya paheno?

S: hmmm tumse hi to sunana tha isiliye to kaha..

N: Vo school kay farewell mein jo tumne pehna tha.. jise maine abhi tak dekha nahin hain.. kya tum vo suit pehno gey kaal? Mujhe tumhe dekhna hain usmein.. Mundit bata rahe the. Tum par khoob jaach raha tha...

S yeh sunke ek thandi si saans bharta hain... hmm thik hain mein kaal vo hi pehnoonga..aur tum?

N: ummm surprise hain tumhare liye.. is liye nahin bataoongi... and she blushes..and remembers on the way back from S house in the car ride- N had asked SF if she could borrow one of her long dress to wear at the winning party next day and A and SF both were surprised and smiles and SF says sure. As it is SF is coming with A to the party so N was going to get ready at her place so no one needs to know at home what she is going to wear and A will take them to the party from SF house.

S: surprise sunke aur bhi shock ho jata hain.. Naina aisa kya kar rahi ho batao na kya pehnogi.. main tumhe lene aajaoon ghar?

N: pagal ho .. ghar pe kisi ney dekh liya to party baju mein reh jayegi.. julus nikal raha hoga hum dono ka.. A ke saath hum sab aayenge main P, ST aur SF. Tum mujhe college ke bahar milna hum log saath mein hi chalenge andar..is tarah tum mujhe dekh bhi loge aur batana surprise kaisa laga.. thik hain?

S: N ab to subh ka intezaar karna mushkil hain.. haaayyee ye subh tu jaldi se hoja...

N: Honewaley Mrsabra ka faal mitha hota hain... aur blush karti hain..

S- N ke muse Honewale Mr sunke jaise ek leher si daud jaati hain.. kya kahan tumne..fir se kahon... kya hoon tumhara...

N : vohi jo mein tumhari hoon... honewale.. aur dono muskurane lagte hain...Aaj sabra ka faal jo mila vo kaisa laga? She is remembering the hug and smiles shyly...

S: mano jaise Jannat mil gayi ho.. par ek baar sey man nahin bhara... dubara chahiye.. main aajaoon wahan abhi... aur dono haans padta hain..

N : arey baba ...in paal ko sambhaal ke maan mein kaid karlo taki jab kabhi bhi tumhey meri yaad aaye to tum mujhe aapne paas bilkul waisey hi paao..accha chalo tumhe ab aaram karo. ab acche se so jao aur hum kaal milte hain.. nikalney se pehle mein phone karoongi taki tum wahan usi time pe pahoncho.. maloom hua mein fir tumhara inteezaar karti hui khadi hoon...

S: pakka.. is baar to mujhse hi sabra nahin ho raha .. tumse pehle pahonch jaaoonga.. dekhna

N : accha thik hain.. aache se so jao gn.. I love you Sameer

S: I love you too Naina.. gn

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Shefali ke ghar:

N, P, ST aur SF tayar ho rahe hain.. P ne blue salwar suit pehna hain, SF ne yello color ki dress pehni hain aur ST ne red color ki frock pehni hain..

N tayar hoke aayiney ke saamne khadi hain.. Halke gulabi raang ka A-line long flowing dress diya tha SF ney pehne ney ke liye.. uspe choti choti butterflies thi ek corner pe aur uski sleeves choti aur puff thi.. it was hugging her beautifully. N keeps on patting the dress and looks at her reflection and smiles. She had worn drop pearls in her ears and had small butterfly clips in hair. She was wearing a thin braclet and nothing on the neck. SF had also given her matching sandals to wear and she was standing tall in front of the mirror... she was imagning S there in suit and looking at her lovingly.. just then she hears A calling out..

A: N jaldi chalo late ho jayenge.. kitne der kar rahi ho... tabhi N bahar aati hain.. aur A usko dekhta hi rehta hain... meri choti si behen aaj itni badi ho gayi aur kitni sundar bhi lag rahi thi.

Girl gang bhi N ko dekh ke khush ho jati hain..ST: yaar N aaj to Sammer ka haal bura hone wala hain.. P: aur nahin to kya meri behena aaj qayamat girane wali hain jijaji par...

N yeh sab sunke khud pe muskurati hain aur sab log gadi mein baith key college ke liye nikal jaate hain..

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S ke ghar:

Mundit tayar hoke baithe hain suit pehen ke aur Sameer abhi bhi der laga raha hain.. Yaar S kaab aayega tu bahar? Der ho rahi hain.. aaj bhi bhabhi sey daant khane ka irada hain tera jab trophy milne wali hain?

S: arye yaar sorry sorry... vo kaal raat ...and he thinks about the hug and blushes and gets lost in that thought ...

Mundit: kaal raat kya?? Bhabhi sapno mein aayi thi.. tang karne...

S: sapno mein nahin khud aayi thi tang karne...

Mundit: heeeiiinnn... kya??? S sari baat batata hain key A usey leke aaya tha...

M: vohi mein kahoon aaj tere chehre pey yeh ek naya noor kaisa hain.. Bhabhi ke pyaar ka ek aur naya rang Chadha hain tujh pey...

S- tabhi ek box nikalta hain aur dikhata hain Mundit ko... usmein usne N ke liye ek necklace liya hain motiyon ka..ek dum chote moti- delicate sey...

Mundit: vow yeh to bahut sundar hain S...

S: kaash N ko bhi yeh pasand aaye.. aaj jab mujhe trophy milegi to N ko bhi to kutch milna chahiye ... bas ab to sabra nahin ho raha.. chalo niklate hain...

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Part 10 : Trophy winning party:

I had to split Part 7 into 2 parts Part 7 and 8 as it was just too long..