OS Series - Sequence Suggestion

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Booklover94

Some work, probably...
Although,I'm pretty sure I'll like anything you write😆

Naina can seduce Sameer itni waxing her legs. Komal ki khwahish bhi puri ho jaegi 🤣

Bad joke, don't take it seriously😆

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Kind of they were much matured in their school years then they are behaving now.. sometimes it feels like they are in love or not...Even the phone convo shown is not perfect...

The canteen scene .

.After naina goes to college and they are asked for a party for having their threading first time and sameer and naina both are injured.. but naina didn't even notice sameer has blood in his hand..Which I felt awkward ..

Just after that the cooking scene where naina and chachi ji both can't cook and their is a n emergency for making dishes traditionally for guests..Naina when told sameer she should have to be shown more boldly ...Infact there had to be a PMS discussion with both of them...Like showing naina in cramp...Or may be she has stained her dress and sameer hesitantly helps her and understands the situation ...Then when naina tells him she can't cook or something and sameer comes to rescue...

Both the scenes are so incomplete ...

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