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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: -vandy-
Mou...
Can we have an os where Naina asks Sam what went wrong with the pic issue wen he visited ahemdabad

I'm dying to see this in the show...but I don't see it happening

Mere dil ki baat likh di Vandy... that was one of the topics on my personal list...😳

I already have it planned roughly...will write for sure.. 👍🏼

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vandana

@VandyP

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: moumita04

Mere dil ki baat likh di Vandy... that was one of the topics on my personal list...😳
I already have it planned roughly...will write for sure.. 👍🏼

Mou 🤗

Another one that is bothering me is this constant taunts to Naina about her looks... I know Sameer has taken a stand once... And u too have touched this issue in fulfillment...

But I want a different angle to it ...

An os where Sameer fights these demons of Naina...

Edited by -vandy- - 7 years ago

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -vandy-

Mou 🤗

Another one that is bothering me is this constant taunts to Naina about her looks... I know Sameer has taken a stand once... And u too have touched this issue in fulfillment...
But I want a different angle to it ...

An os where Sameer fights these demons of Naina...

So Naina feeling insecure and Sameer assuring her? Or someone teasing Naina and Sameer taking a stand?

Any more details about the scenario?

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pinalkpatel

@pinalkpatel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: moumita04

Sazaa me bhi mazaa chahiye tumko...??😆😆

Loved the idea Pinal...will see how I can incorporate it...😳

Hehehe haan! Sorry I spelled your name wrong ...

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vandana

@VandyP

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: moumita04

So Naina feeling insecure and Sameer assuring her? Or someone teasing Naina and Sameer taking a stand?

Any more details about the scenario?

naina feeling insecure... stand he has already taken... i want him to be with her

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Mou di tussi great ho!!

Charan kaha h aapke

Bhagwaan aapko hamesha shukhi rakhe

Itni khushi mujhe aajtk nhi huyi

College OS series I m so exited

Now my request😳

Naina and Sameer drinking water from same water tap because water tap area toh college mein bhi h

And our hero giving intense looks to his heroine...

And yes I so want one scene of Samaina in which like Naina will pick up one dress for herself and Sameer will say that "yeh tumhara size nhi h Naina" and Naina will be like " tumhe kaise pata ki nhi h"

And one more scene like hum dil de chuke sanam in which Naina will say that "Sameer kuch ho gya toh" when Sameer will be doing romance with her.

And of course balcony romance in Naina's house yeh bhi chahiye

And one more in which Naina will ask Sameer ki "shaadi ki raat mein ghoonghat uthane ke baad kya hota hain?"

Aur bhi bahut saare scenes h par abhi itne hi yaad aa rhe h

Baki soch ke bataaungi

Lots of love for you Mou di🤗

Aishwarya

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: moumita04

Nice ideas Sharavya...😃

Quick question - I understand eye romance and write about it of course... But do you really want the OS to be bereft of touch scene? I mean we are talking about college romance... fir bhi no touch at all? Or pehle eye romance and then some touchy scene?

For the second scenario, I have never written a song sequence, but will surely try my best...

Thank you for the suggestions..!😳
And dear... you are really good at writing passionate scenes too... your OS stories are proof of that... Let me know if you want to pick up some other ideas from this thread to write a story...😊

I think subtle touching should be fine? Not like intense make out session, with rain and saree i think touching in subtle is going to lit fire, when on a bike ride after the freshers party.
Ooh!! This thread is lit!!
I would have tried, but i think this one is in your bucket, can't really do justice to this than you.

But i will sure try to pick something from here and write. 😉

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Chaaru

@chaaru26

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Hello Mou di...

I have a few suggestions and i dont know if they have already been suggested or not...

A scene where Naina plays with Sameer's hair. Its shown in one of Naina's dream sequences in the show but i want a scene where she plays with Sameer's hair and he is enjoying it and the rest of the gang teases them saying only Naina is allowed to touch his hair.

Another suggestion is the gang is together maybe in the college or at someone's house. All are talking but only Sameer is busy sleeping on Naina's shoulders or on her lap.

Another one where the only the girl gang is having a discussion on romance in movies in a free period in the college. Naina tells she imagines such scenes with Sameer. Sameer hears Naina, later teases her saying he can do better romance then shown in movies and you could turn it to 16+ 😉

Ok i have one more😆, Naina in Sameer's room and Sameer is taking a bath and he asks for towel but only Naina is present in the room so she gives the towel but Sameer's naughty mood is activated and he tries to pull her hand instead of the towel..😳

Ok my imagination is going wild with each suggestion...

Edited by chaaru26 - 7 years ago