Samaina OS - A Legal contract.

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@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shelly_nair
Nice one

Thank you dear! 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: 9211
This was very very emotional and on point.
I'm speechless.
Loved it.

Thanks dear! So glad that it touched your heart 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: souhasini
Wonderful os. Loved how naina opened her heart in front of sameer despite d whole class was hearing

Thank you dear. As you can see Naina had not planned it to be like that.. but I guess the desperation to be heard by him once caught up with her... or maybe just a feeling of hopelessness..

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shabreen

@shabreen

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Wowww beautifully written I wish CVS could end manhoos track like this it would b emotionally soo gud

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Fantastic os

The unique way of confronting was amazing... Poor naina is so much in pain due to sameer's foolishness... Bande ki akal ghaas charne gaya hai.. He needs to be jolted back soon... Naina has lost all her energy trying to get some sense drilled into his head... Poor soul started thinking that may be she was unworthy.

Loved how she used her topper brains and gave it to him in her own unique way... Much needed one... He deserved it for making her go through all this... People are so mean at times... Didnt like the way her classmates made personal remarks on her.

Naina's words and its hidden meanings are understood by sameer... I liked that each words of hers pierced his heart... He slowly realized that she's losing it... She has already started losing faith in love and relationships... Promises made without any legal contracts... The way stressed on how legal contract is important made him realize what his behavior has turned her into... Loved his realization.

Mundit are such sweethearts... They are always proud of their bhabhi's achievements... Naina's thoughts whether shexand sameer were married, would the situation have been different was on point... The way she thought would he have walked away like that if they were married took my heart away... Anyway glad that sam decided to let go off his fears... Loved the ending where they talked even without uttering a word... Their hearts did the job.

❤️

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Laksh2000

@Laksh2000

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Loved it. Had never thought of marriage as a legal contract. But it truly is . U had sketched out nainas insecurities correctly. Sameer needs to know what she is doing to an innocent girl.

Please do write more.

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Priya

@Prickly_164.

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Really a wonderful os 👏

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

'Raise your words not voice. It is the rain that grows the flowers, not thunder.'

This would be one of my favourite OS written on this 'manhoosiyat' track...This was so different and thought provoking...

Marriage as a legal contract.

All the relationship needs time to time reassurance of what they mean to them or else misapprehension arises...

Her thoughts on how it would be different if they were married, you are right he just couldn't have run away like that..Cheers to you for thinking in a such a different way..

She was fed up of Sam running away and her insecurities were shown very correctly, how she was questioning her own value..

Her word were her strength and she used it to bring back her love life on track!

I loved how you made Sameer slowly realise his folly and her slow breakdown in the class made my heart bleed..

The end was beautiful, I literally could imagine him holding his ears!

Keep writing more, May! Do PM me...

Love,

Shreya

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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Radkam

@Radkam

Navigator

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Such a nice & different perspective... it came out bang on...he is so adorable when holding one ear for apology! Finally, without knowing & without mRriiage, Naina pushed him beyond the limit which only she can & has the right to do!!!