~TS: Love Hurts and Love Heals!~ Part 2- Page 7

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: shravyarao

You nailed it!! Hatts off to you!

You have given us friendship, romance, emotion, sentiment, humour and sarcasm.. It was the right amount mixture of everything. The gang was superb, they were all part of clearing the misconceptions that sameer has. It was so beautifully penned down.

I especially loved what preeti said " Haila! Jijaji konsa picture dekhe aaye ho loved it so much,
The broom beating, the way naina explained each and every incident and related it from her perspective and told him how he was their lucky charm was awesome. Everybody was surprised by this new sameer with all the filmy dialogues like in a saas bahu serial. Lol.

Absolutely loved it. Great job !! 👏 👍🏼 🥱

Thank you so much Shravya! Glad you could find time to read the story! 😳 I felt this manhoosiyat track was too difficult to be handled by only Naina- after all, their friends are as important in their love story as they are to each other...so wanted to incorporate the contributions of each n every one! 😳😳

BOLD: That is actually my favourite line in the show! 😆 I wanted to show Naina refuting each of his claims n misconceptions n make him see things in a new light...he wasn't unlucky...infact he was extremely lucky for them all!

Baaki added a dash of humour to make the update a li'l lighthearted! 😊

Thanks again!

Love

Sur

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Hitanshivyas

@Hitanshivyas

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Hayee .. dil le lo wali update I really wanted to happen this in the show too and just loved the comic conversations between the gang specially preeti's and how can I forgot our swati and munna they are so precious i am sure munna will never mind this type of manhoosiyat of sameer and that jhadu se maar matlab sach me dil ko sukkun mil gaya and in the end that hug was everything and thanks for the pm and keep writing lots of love to you ❤️ 😳

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

This was truly what i would call a climax update.

The comical part of the friends lightened the update while Naina managed to knock sense into Sameer

Loved the update. Thank you for the pm.

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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: 9211
This should happen in the show too...
Loved it.. as usual❤️

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: msdfan
It was nice update dear.. Loved it!! 👍🏼

I want the exactly same situation in the show also.. 😉

The discussion about manhoosiyat, I just don't want only between SamAina.. it should happen in the group.. 😃

Without hesitation she told about her love at first site and about Arjun's paper stealing.. I love this girl so much 👏

In fact, I was going to make a little big comment.. but last 2-3 times my comment went unnoticed.. So at this time, I did a little bit small.. Sorry for that.. hope you understand..

Thanks for this wonderful TS 😳.. and for the PM

Hey dear Sona!!! No yaar! Don't feel like that...I sometimes reply a bit late I know...but then I don't feel like replying for the sake of it...but I take my own time and reply to each post sooner or later! Pakka! Let me know if I missed any comment dear! Trust me! It would have been truly unintentional!!! I'm really really sorry for that dear! I'm just too caught up in life...I'm not even able to devote as much time as I would like to write too! 😕

And thank you so much dear for liking the update! I'm so glad you could relate to it!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
Thank you sooo much for this update ..
Now I exactly want this to happen in the show... EXACTLY !!
I loved it to the core .. Its always a delight to read your stories
You gave a beautiful end to this manhoos track ..with a pinch of humour in it ..
I felt as if I'm watching it on TV ..could very well imagin the gang saying all those dialogues ..
Sameer's phone call to munna ...I seriously felt like slapping him ..such a gadha he is ..still I love him to death
Pandit's dialogue about status difference literally did something to me ..for me this was the highlight of the entire update.. Samundit scenes are always treat to watch ..their little confrontation on the road was really amezing
Naina's trust on Sameer is seriously unimaginable ..Sameer is soo LUCKY to have her in his life ..
What I loved the most in the update was the reaction of the gang hearing Sameer's logic behind staying away from Naina and his loved ones ..dil le lo for this
Naina was ready to give a dhaasu reply to all his doubts ..
Loved the way you showed Sameer being unsure and still sticking to his manhoos thoughts ..and then slowly opening his brain and thinking wisely ..this whole confrontation was beautifully presented ..hats off to you for this
Jhaadu scene literally cracked me up ..you gave us a little view of future Mr and Mrs Maheshwari ..lol
The last scene has my heart ..finally Sameer letting out everything he has been holding till date ..this breakdown was very much needed ..and samaina hug ..
Ab bas CVS bhi humpe days kare !!
I so want them to have their very first hug life this ..full of emotions..
This update made me feel sooo good .I felt as if this manhoos track is actually over ..but soon it will be ..and I have full on trust on CVS ..we will get a dhaasu reunion

And yes ..I didn't find it LONG at all ..I can never get tiered or bore by reading your works ..
You gave a beautiful end to this ..hug full of love ..
The whole update was very much in flow ..
I forgot to mention the cutest scene of swamun ..how much I love them ..swati's Dialogue was hilarious ..
Are we getting one more part of this.. Showing the much awated gang all together happy happy ..and samaina romance?
Waiting for updates from you ..Its pending from sooo long
Please days karo mujhpe

Love.
Laalchi reader

Aww dear!! Thank you so much dear!! I'm so glad you loved the update n trust me I counted the pages on word (it was long 😆), but then I'm overwhelmed by the fact that you didn't feel it was long n boring...but infact enjoyed it! I tried to portray a variety of emotions among friends n the lovers...and of course, slowly unravel Sameer's confusion to clarity...I added a pinch of Swamun for romance n humour too hehe n the jhaadu scene...you are right haha...future Mrs. & Mr. Maheshwari for sure! Sameer is definitely really lucky for his friends n Naina n he is lucky to have such friends and a lover as sure as Naina in his life...whatever be it, she's never gonna let him suffer alone! 😊

Actually, this was meant to be a two part story only! 😳 So this one ends here...already too much on my plate to handle...I know I've promised an update to Expectedly Unexpected as well...let's hope I can do it tonight!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Riyagong
It's Beyond awesome ! I loved How everyone is Soo Cool About Sam's Manhoos Story ! Thank You So Much For This

Thank you dear Riya!! Glad you loved the end of the story too! 😊

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Uv78
Wow sur, kya likha hai...wish aisa kuch show mein b dekhne ko mile...do continue...

Thanks UV dear! I'm so happy you liked it! But then this would be all for this! I meant to write only two parts for this! 😊

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Amazing update Surbhi...he really needs a good one from Naina to come out of all this now...its high time ...we all are waiting for them to meet and here he is running away😳
Loved the reactions of the entire group on knowing the reason behind all this...especially Naina and Preeti...you were brilliant in writing this...hope the writers take an idea from you and end this track soon...its gone for so long😡

Loved it dear ...thanks for the pm😃

Thank you so much dear Manisha!! 😳😳 So happy you liked it! 🤗 I just wanted the entire discussion to be there with friends as well as the lovers! Aww dear..thank you for the nice compliments...true yaar...I too want this stupid track to end now hehe! 😆