~TS: Love Hurts and Love Heals!~ Part 2- Page 7 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

AmzAmaz surbhi ... I liked the fact that you gave equal importance to frdship and love when it comes to taking sameer out of this mansooyiat mode ... I really hope something of this kind is shown in the serial too


Thank you so much Suman dear!!! So happy to see you enjoyed it wholeheartedly! Yep- I wanted the friends to be there too...after all...they are as important as the lead couple in our show...not merely some side characters! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Owww I loved the way u handled this mahsoos track..Frnds ho to munna pandit preeti jaise warna na ho..Hehe..Loved readings very line every clarification.. at some point u made me laugh n at some point I cried..N they hugged yippiiee..Fab..


Thank you so much dear Meenakshi! I'm so happy you could relate to the emotions as I wanted to portray them...happy at one instant n sad at another!! 😊😊 Ab ek hug to banta hi hai na hehe..bahot ho gaya intezaar!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Hayee .. dil le lo wali update I really wanted to happen this in the show too and just loved the comic conversations between the gang specially preeti's and how can I forgot our swati and munna they are so precious i am sure munna will never mind this type of manhoosiyat of sameer and that jhadu se maar matlab sach me dil ko sukkun mil gaya and in the end that hug was everything and thanks for the pm and keep writing lots of love to you ❤️ 😳


Thanks dear Hitanshi! So happy to see you enjoyed the twist of comedy in it...thoda zyada serious ho raha tha...jhaadu scene likh ke mujhe sukoon mila...n then Swamun scene ek to banta hai na...Munna was jumping with joy! 😉 thanks so much dear!
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Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Azraa01

This was truly what i would call a climax update.

The comical part of the friends lightened the update while Naina managed to knock sense into Sameer
Loved the update. Thank you for the pm.


Thank you dear Azraa! Glad you enjoyed the light-hearted way in which I dealt with this update! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Hey dear Sona!!! No yaar! Don't feel like that...I sometimes reply a bit late I know...but then I don't feel like replying for the sake of it...but I take my own time and reply to each post sooner or later! Pakka! Let me know if I missed any comment dear! Trust me! It would have been truly unintentional!!! I'm really really sorry for that dear! I'm just too caught up in life...I'm not even able to devote as much time as I would like to write too! 😕

And thank you so much dear for liking the update! I'm so glad you could relate to it!


It's ok dear, I understand 😊.. You are juggling between so much stories, so that happens naturally

I am waiting for your next update.. hope so, will get soon 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: angelic567

As usual amazing... Nailed it.

Sameer cannot be brought back to senses so easily... His insecurities are so deep rooted... He can go to any extent to keep naina away from him... I wish she gave him a tight slap instead if shouting.

Mundit became the saviors as always... These two are love... I hope sameer dont say anything like this in the show... I can't see naina getting hurt anymore... How dare he say that he loves amrita😡... Wanted to kill him for this foolishness.

Preeti's trust on her jeejaji was amazing... She knows sameer cant love anyone but naina... Swati's reaction was also spot on... Thinking amrita trapped sam.

Glad that naina used her topper brains here... She did right by calling amrita and getting the truth out... This is the naina i want to see... The way she went straight to his home and confront him was superb.

Naina trying to make him say the truth by pleading and finally using her trumpcard... Asking him to swear on her... She knows what works in sameer's case... Loved this fierce naina who knows to make her way.

The whole gang's reaction was superb... They were not fools like sameer to believe in these kind of stupidity... Sameer ki watt lag gayi 😆
... Each and everyone of them were splendid.. Especially preet calling him filmy bahu😆... Loved the jhadoo se beating sameer part... He deserved it and even more. 😆

Naina and her way of making him understand was amazing as well... This girl is so calm when needed... She rightly gave her own example of taiji calling her manhoos all the time... This was the final push needed for sameer to be back to senses.

The cute romance at the end was lovely... The gang was so understanding... They gave the lovers their much needed space... So so loved the way he said 'sameer sirf naina ka hai'... The trust between them will be unbreakable after this... Amazingly penned down. 👏




Thank you so much Simi! Yet again a wonderful comment, which made my day! 😊 Read it in the morning! Wo Naina marne to wali thi thappad...par already bechara Sameer kha chuka hai ek baar...aur ab to pyaara wala bf aur hone wala pati bhi hai na...to slap kandhe pe maar diya! 😉
Sameer ko bhi jhoot bolna pada- think how he would've felt- ek to he loves only Naina...upar se Amrita is a good friend n he had to use her name here in all this...but wo bhool gaya...his girl is a topper...jhatt se pakad legi uski galti!
Preeti, I feel, has always been the psychic- she could see through Sameer's genuine efforts to get forgiveness n knew it can't be just from Arjun bhaiya...she hears all about the bet n in turn slaps Naina...once she has cooled down, she tries to pave the path of Sameer n Naina's reunion...
n Swati well, wo hamesha baal ki khaal nikalne walon me se hai...a practical one I should say- she wants Naina to be sure that Sameer ka pyaar shaadi wala hai...so here also, she knows a girl might try to entrap him going by Sameer's looks...
I felt like adding a bit of comedy in here...n I'm happy Sameer let it out to Mundit that dadi had told him all this...I so want them to drill some sense into him that dadi was only manipulating him! Filmy bahu Preeti type ki lines hain...aur jhaadu se marna to haq hai Naina ka! Laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante na! 😉
n 90s ka superhit formula was kasam...and Sam ke hisab se chalte rahein to duniya ka har banda kabhi na kabhi, kisi na kisi ke liye manhoos hoga hi!
Sam too was shocked seeing their reaction! And Sameer sach mein sirf Naina ka hi hai! 😊😊😳
Thank you once again dear! 😳😳🤗
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Riyagong

It's Beyond awesome ! I loved How everyone is Soo Cool About Sam's Manhoos Story ! Thank You So Much For This


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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Thanks for the pm ..I wish this happened in the show but never the less your stories have been beautifully written and we as readers are reading/ read all the scenarios possible in the show through your story.Keep the good work!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sur... What a beautiful TS...!! Hugs for this one...!! 🤗

The first part was painful to read...but I must applaud you for bringing out Sameer's thought process so perfectly... Each and every incident he recollected from his perspective reaffirmed to him that he was unlucky... Yet he yearned... for a glimpse of his friends, for a glimpse of his love... yearned to be a part of the masti... He took solace from the fact that Naina could sense him, reassured himself of her love, and yet stayed away from her breaking her heart and his...

And Naina... she is the personification of love... knowing that Sameer is nearby... going through the exact same places... how her heart knows which path to trace... I am in love with her love... Such great detailing Sur... 👏👏

I panicked just like Sameer on hearing her scream... and then loved how your brought about the scenario... how he left everything and his priority was to take Naina to hospital... but again he left from there thinking he brought her bad luck...

The friends got to know... and I must say Preeti did the right thing by letting Naina know... She had full right to know... 👍🏼

Naina's phone call to Amrita was again well thought of... She knew in her heart that Sameer was only hers yet she wanted to confirm once if fate had indeed played a cruel joke on her... She needed practical evidence before dealing with Sameer...

Kasam - how true you are! That was tried and tested formula... How easy it was to believe and trust people... Such were those days and the simplicity of life that we indeed believed no one would lie with a kasam... 😳

Totally loved the gang's reaction on hearing about Sameer's manhoosiyat... Hahhaa... Konsi film dekhke aaye ho Jijaji...?? Lol... Each and everyone of them had amazing dialogues... and perfectly done...

I applaud your idea here once again... 👏👏 How cleverly you used Sameer's thoughts in the first part to provide answers to those questions in the second part... Fab work Sur darling...!!

Naina,... naina... naina... what a lady...how cool and calm she was while answering his questions... and loved how she took everyone's test by asking those questions... hahaa...
Ah.. she confessed about love at first sight... I don't know if that isn't lucky for Sameer what is... 😳
He was getting convinced... yet he kept on asking questions... wanting to clear all his doubts and insecurities... Amazing yaar... loved reading it...

And that dhulai by jhadu... Munna at service for his bhabhi... Hahahaa... Baato baato me usko bhi chance mil gaya romance ka... 😆😆

And the ending... so perfect... that hand kiss... and the hug... Ah such lovely feels... I want this to happen for real in the show when this manhoos track ends... Ek bone crushing hug and a hand kiss to banta hai yaar... 😳

As usual, wonderful writing dear... loved it...!!

Love,
Mou
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Superb yaar...now let see what happens in serial

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