~TS: Love Hurts and Love Heals!~ Part 2- Page 7 - Page 10

What a beautiful piece of writing! 👏
I loved the confrontation b/w Samaina
Would love to see something like this happening in the show as well
Loved how you involved the gang too and that last SwaMun scene ❤️
Absolutely loved this TS!
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: anuridi

Thanks for the pm ..I wish this happened in the show but never the less your stories have been beautifully written and we as readers are reading/ read all the scenarios possible in the show through your story.Keep the good work!!!

Originally posted by: moumita04

Sur... What a beautiful TS...!! Hugs for this one...!! 🤗

Aww thanks Mou!! So happy to see you liked it! 😳

The first part was painful to read...but I must applaud you for bringing out Sameer's thought process so perfectly... Each and every incident he recollected from his perspective reaffirmed to him that he was unlucky... Yet he yearned... for a glimpse of his friends, for a glimpse of his love... yearned to be a part of the masti... He took solace from the fact that Naina could sense him, reassured himself of her love, and yet stayed away from her breaking her heart and his...

I know yaar...in the first part, I tried to deal with the emotions that must be raging through Sameer...his desire to be with the love of his life, his friends...he didn't even realize he asked the cabbie to take him to PVKM...it seems the most natural place for him to be...he wishes only if could be with her, take her in his arms n see her smile...yet blames his fate for stealing another person he ardently loved from him! Thank you so much Mou! 😊

And Naina... she is the personification of love... knowing that Sameer is nearby... going through the exact same places... how her heart knows which path to trace... I am in love with her love... Such great detailing Sur... 👏👏

Thanks again Mou...remember the Naina we saw during the initial days...she could sense him before he could, before they'd seen each other...that speaks of a connection between them...their paths were meant to cross! 😳

I panicked just like Sameer on hearing her scream... and then loved how your brought about the scenario... how he left everything and his priority was to take Naina to hospital... but again he left from there thinking he brought her bad luck...

The friends got to know... and I must say Preeti did the right thing by letting Naina know... She had full right to know... 👍🏼

Yep...the friends are smart too...even before Sam realized his love for Naina, Mundit knew...it's like they know Sam as good as Naina...he tried to abstain from going near her in fear he might affect her as a bad omen...but then he couldn't leave her lying there...his love triumphed over his superstition!

Naina's phone call to Amrita was again well thought of... She knew in her heart that Sameer was only hers yet she wanted to confirm once if fate had indeed played a cruel joke on her... She needed practical evidence before dealing with Sameer...

Yes...Naina is brainy...n I wanted her to act like that. She knew Sameer is lying...he's in some big mess...Even though it would shatter her heart in a million pieces if Sameer went to some other girl, she still loves him unconditionally...if he was indeed happy with someone else, she would let him be...that's how strong she is.

Kasam - how true you are! That was tried and tested formula... How easy it was to believe and trust people... Such were those days and the simplicity of life that we indeed believed no one would lie with a kasam... 😳

So true yaar...we rarely get to see this these days...I cannot imagine how people could lie under a kasam...I still follow it though...I remember as kids, when we were forced to take a kasam, we used to cross our hands at the back, signalling it crossed out that kasam...haha silly we were, but also innocent to believe in n trust the sanctity of an oath!

Totally loved the gang's reaction on hearing about Sameer's manhoosiyat... Hahhaa... Konsi film dekhke aaye ho Jijaji...?? Lol... Each and everyone of them had amazing dialogues... and perfectly done...

Hehe...maine socha bahot sad sad ho raha hai...kyun na thoda comedy bana dun ise...hehe...thanks again Mou! 🤗

I applaud your idea here once again... 👏👏 How cleverly you used Sameer's thoughts in the first part to provide answers to those questions in the second part... Fab work Sur darling...!!

😳🤗 Thanks Mou!

Naina,... naina... naina... what a lady...how cool and calm she was while answering his questions... and loved how she took everyone's test by asking those questions... hahaa...

Ah.. she confessed about love at first sight... I don't know if that isn't lucky for Sameer what is... 😳

He was getting convinced... yet he kept on asking questions... wanting to clear all his doubts and insecurities... Amazing yaar... loved reading it...

I somehow wanted Sam to know that Naina was in love with him all along...tab to kuch bura na hua...n whatever bad things happened to her, brought the two closer...if it wasn't for the bet, Sam probably would have missed out on her n the gang too wouldn't have been together...I so love their journey...Naina can be practical too...😆

And that dhulai by jhadu... Munna at service for his bhabhi... Hahahaa... Baato baato me usko bhi chance mil gaya romance ka... 😆😆

Jhaadu padwa ke Sam ko mujhe khud sukoon mila...dumbo Sam...😆

And the ending... so perfect... that hand kiss... and the hug... Ah such lovely feels... I want this to happen for real in the show when this manhoos track ends... Ek bone crushing hug and a hand kiss to banta hai yaar... 😳

As usual, wonderful writing dear... loved it...!!

So happy to see you enjoyed it Mou...hand kiss kya...flying kiss spoiler ke baad main kafi aage pahunch gayi apni thinking mein hehe...😉

Love,

Mou

Originally posted by: PritiSC

Superb yaar...now let see what happens in serial

Originally posted by: -Aniisha-

What a beautiful piece of writing! 👏
I loved the confrontation b/w Samaina
Would love to see something like this happening in the show as well
Loved how you involved the gang too and that last SwaMun scene ❤️
Absolutely loved this TS!
Thanks for the PM

OMG that was such an awesome update
Hayee sameer aur uski Manhosiyat
naina directly dialed amrita wow..
kuch bhi Ho preeti's on her jijaji is awesome
n when gang got to know the reason behind his indifference lol..
ek ek ke expression were so cute
Munna jhadu de.. n Munna obling his bhabhis command bhoot utarna hain
aww I loved it
rolfing..yar..it was hilarious
finally misunderstanding cleared
n the swamun scene was cute munna's dialogue was best

story Khtm hogyi... kya??
ek epilogue toh banti hain

Sorry for the late response didi but as they say, better late than ever!

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

OMG that was such an awesome update
Hayee sameer aur uski Manhosiyat
naina directly dialed amrita wow..
kuch bhi Ho preeti's on her jijaji is awesome
n when gang got to know the reason behind his indifference lol..
ek ek ke expression were so cute
Munna jhadu de.. n Munna obling his bhabhis command bhoot utarna hain
aww I loved it
rolfing..yar..it was hilarious
finally misunderstanding cleared
n the swamun scene was cute munna's dialogue was best

story Khtm hogyi... kya??
ek epilogue toh banti hain

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Sorry for the late response didi but as they say, better late than ever!

Haaye, such a long and engaging update, completely loved it!

Arey koi na dear! Main khud bhi late hi hoti hun reply karne mein! But so happy that you enjoyed this update! 😳😆

The way Swati stood up when Munna said 'Pandit' was so funny...She's so used to her being called like that, hehe.

Hehe...I wanted to highlight that part only 😆

The build up for MunDit finding Sameer was so realistic, they pondered upon different possibilites, a failed attempt and then called Somani and here they are infront of Sameer, with fire in their eyes...

Sameer acting all ignorant pained my heart, so what would the boy be going through!? He was hurting his loved ones too...

Poor MunDit, they were in dilemma between the duty of a brother and a brother in law...they lied, how much guilt would be inside them.

I literally could feel Swati and Preeti's emotions, seeing your best friend/sister getting hurt day by day is not such a pleasent sight, it hurts as much as your heartbreak...

Very true dear...Mundit, Swati, Preeti are blessings for Samaina...I'm sure their love story couldn't have been this rocking if it hadn't been for these friends in their life! 😊

As much as he is funny, Munna when angry can be dangerous..Remember the slap Sameer got during Delhi? I still didn't get over the glares!!!

Arey sacchi...I loved that Munna also- ek thappad n Sameer was back in form- he knows when to be serious n when to be easy-going! 😊

I am proud of my Naina..More than love, I am impressed by her trust on Sameer that without misunderstanding anything, she just called Amrita to know what's the matter..Shows how she has become mature emotionally too..

Loved their phonecall, how they talked it out and Amrita's dialogues felt like the show's itself..

Liked how Naina didn't beat about the bush and instantly started bombarding him with queries, her complaints and her frustration..The tigress avatar was so pleasing to read..

The best part of the update was how the confrontation took place in front of the whole gang, that added a charm to it...

Thank you dear...it is very rare to find lovers like Naina and Sameer- even in those days I feel- without trust n without respect, love is nothing I feel...n of course the gang couldn't have been left out here...aakhir wo bhi to sune Sameer ka raaz! 😉😆

'Mere saath bhi rehkar zinda nahi reh paegi' That line, that made me feel so much emotional...Sameer's emotions summed up in one line...

"Haila! Jeejaji! Kaunsi picture dekhke aaye ho?" 🤣I cracked up there...Such a Preeti thing to say in this tensed atmosphere..

Well, I don't blame Preeti at all as the whole gang's reaction was funny..

Haha...jaan ke funny banaya tha yaar! Glad it worked! 😃😆

The vest option was to use reverse psychology here and Naina did use it and Wow! That was so good to read that I had read it again and again..Well, I completely love it when Naina argues!

She even revealed that it was love at first sight ☺️I want a scene like that in the show too..

True yaar! Naina ne Sameer ke har point ko counter kar diya...even I want Naina to tell Sameer (not in her dreams) that it was love at first sight for her!

Naina playfully kyun maara, ache se do maar deti jhaadu se...instantly akal tikaane pe jaate!😆

Na na...hone wala pati hai na...😉to thappad to pyaar se maara...lekin jhaadu se ache se maara...haq hai uska...akal thikane aayi aakhir jhaadu se hi na! Achi dhulaai ki usne Sameer ki aur jab thak gayi tab hi give up diya...kaash show mein aisa hi kare Naina 😆

The SwaMun moment! Bas ab kya kehna hai, they were all over each other and I could visualise Munna dancing around...hehe.

Hehe...Munna ki to chaandi hi ho gayi! 😆

'Diya jala toh apshagun' I also never understood the concept of it😆

Me too yaar...wahi I wanted to highlight ki hum jaisa sochte hain, usi tarah se hamara mind kaam karne lagta hai n it starts believing n accepting such superstitions as true!

Yes! It was good that they cried together, releasing all the stress and we got a handkiss too. They hugged as they finally together got rid of these manhoosiyat.

That was a beautiful ending to this story!

Thank you dear so much!! Ab itna to banta hai na...dono tadap rahe the ek dusre ke bina! 😉😳

Heyyy 😆