~TS: Love Hurts and Love Heals!~ Part 2- Page 7

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Wowww!!!!! What an update

Loved the comic texture in it

Especially the conversation of the gang and Sameer

And also I liked the Swamun scene😳

Finally Sameer left his manhoosiyat jaap

I really loved it👍🏼

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Alisha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Oh my God .. from where should I start it was so so so beautifully penned .. excellent job dear .. the way you penned both parts .. amazing ..

Part 2 cracked me up badly the way everyone said things in sarcatsar way hahahhahahahhaha ..

Ufff that jhaado part hahahahha lol ..

Awww SwaMun part was cute ..

There was a lil PreeDit .. ahmm atleast for me ;P ..

Sameer ki bewakoofiyan hahahhahahahhaha

Tauba their sarcasm .. loved it

Every dialogue

I was actually imaging all of them saying these dialogues

This was up to mark ..

Balke more than that

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_shweta98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

This should happen in the show too...

Loved it.. as usual❤️

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Aisa.. Bilkul aisa hi confrontation chahti hu main show mein bhi.. Maza hi aa gya

Main to kehti hu aur do chaar lagani thi jhadu se

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
Wowww!!!!! What an update
Loved the comic texture in it
Especially the conversation of the gang and Sameer
And also I liked the Swamun scene😳
Finally Sameer left his manhoosiyat jaap
I really loved it👍🏼

Thank you dear!! Glad you enjoyed the update!! Yeah, I wanted to make it a little light hearted! 😳😳 BTW...what do you prefer being called?

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Wow ..
I just loved this part so much..
Hope something like this only happens
Too too good..
I liked the jhadu beating scene ..
Each and every thing

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shravya rao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

You nailed it!! Hatts off to you!

You have given us friendship, romance, emotion, sentiment, humour and sarcasm.. It was the right amount mixture of everything. The gang was superb, they were all part of clearing the misconceptions that sameer has. It was so beautifully penned down.

I especially loved what preeti said " Haila! Jijaji konsa picture dekhe aaye ho loved it so much,
The broom beating, the way naina explained each and every incident and related it from her perspective and told him how he was their lucky charm was awesome. Everybody was surprised by this new sameer with all the filmy dialogues like in a saas bahu serial. Lol.

Absolutely loved it. Great job !! 👏 👍🏼 🥱

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Phoenix

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

As usual amazing... Nailed it.

Sameer cannot be brought back to senses so easily... His insecurities are so deep rooted... He can go to any extent to keep naina away from him... I wish she gave him a tight slap instead if shouting.

Mundit became the saviors as always... These two are love... I hope sameer dont say anything like this in the show... I can't see naina getting hurt anymore... How dare he say that he loves amrita😡... Wanted to kill him for this foolishness.

Preeti's trust on her jeejaji was amazing... She knows sameer cant love anyone but naina... Swati's reaction was also spot on... Thinking amrita trapped sam.

Glad that naina used her topper brains here... She did right by calling amrita and getting the truth out... This is the naina i want to see... The way she went straight to his home and confront him was superb.

Naina trying to make him say the truth by pleading and finally using her trumpcard... Asking him to swear on her... She knows what works in sameer's case... Loved this fierce naina who knows to make her way.

The whole gang's reaction was superb... They were not fools like sameer to believe in these kind of stupidity... Sameer ki watt lag gayi 😆

... Each and everyone of them were splendid.. Especially preet calling him filmy bahu😆... Loved the jhadoo se beating sameer part... He deserved it and even more. 😆

Naina and her way of making him understand was amazing as well... This girl is so calm when needed... She rightly gave her own example of taiji calling her manhoos all the time... This was the final push needed for sameer to be back to senses.

The cute romance at the end was lovely... The gang was so understanding... They gave the lovers their much needed space... So so loved the way he said 'sameer sirf naina ka hai'... The trust between them will be unbreakable after this... Amazingly penned down. 👏

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Thank you sooo much for this update ..

Now I exactly want this to happen in the show... EXACTLY !!

I loved it to the core .. Its always a delight to read your stories

You gave a beautiful end to this manhoos track ..with a pinch of humour in it ..

I felt as if I'm watching it on TV ..could very well imagin the gang saying all those dialogues ..

Sameer's phone call to munna ...I seriously felt like slapping him ..such a gadha he is ..still I love him to death

Pandit's dialogue about status difference literally did something to me ..for me this was the highlight of the entire update.. Samundit scenes are always treat to watch ..their little confrontation on the road was really amezing

Naina's trust on Sameer is seriously unimaginable ..Sameer is soo LUCKY to have her in his life ..

What I loved the most in the update was the reaction of the gang hearing Sameer's logic behind staying away from Naina and his loved ones ..dil le lo for this

Naina was ready to give a dhaasu reply to all his doubts ..

Loved the way you showed Sameer being unsure and still sticking to his manhoos thoughts ..and then slowly opening his brain and thinking wisely ..this whole confrontation was beautifully presented ..hats off to you for this

Jhaadu scene literally cracked me up ..you gave us a little view of future Mr and Mrs Maheshwari ..lol

The last scene has my heart ..finally Sameer letting out everything he has been holding till date ..this breakdown was very much needed ..and samaina hug ..

Ab bas CVS bhi humpe days kare !!

I so want them to have their very first hug life this ..full of emotions..

This update made me feel sooo good .I felt as if this manhoos track is actually over ..but soon it will be ..and I have full on trust on CVS ..we will get a dhaasu reunion

And yes ..I didn't find it LONG at all ..I can never get tiered or bore by reading your works ..

You gave a beautiful end to this ..hug full of love ..

The whole update was very much in flow ..

I forgot to mention the cutest scene of swamun ..how much I love them ..swati's Dialogue was hilarious ..

Are we getting one more part of this.. Showing the much awated gang all together happy happy ..and samaina romance?

Waiting for updates from you ..Its pending from sooo long

Please days karo mujhpe

Love.

Laalchi reader