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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Sivasri
Very nice story...their love is slow and steady...
Samaina school scenes were always my favorite ones..
Your story is fabulous..keep updating..

Thanks. Yep, Sameer is yet to fall in love so it might continue to be slow and steady for a while.

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Rph09
Ih wow this update was super cute. Naina's honesty is making sameer a better soul. Loved this part.

Thanks.😊

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: dreamyp
It was so nice dear.. the story is going good.. pm me when u update next.

Sure and thanks.

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina
Just went through all the parts
beautifully written
loved it
sameer is slowly bit by bit understanding her
nice

Thanks. Ya, Sameer is now trying to understand her and will slowly ignore other's prejudice against Naina.

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: munchkinland
A very beautiful story indeed
the pace and build up is really good
He is slowly falling for her
and naina is so cute and innocent
continue soon

Thanks 😊

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: shwta16
Thank you for this lovely update. I loved how Sameer is now understanding Naina in a better way. Now he thinks that she is indeed a nice girl and doesn't do anything just for a show off. I am eagerly waiting for the next part in which they will again meet for teaching session. Please update soon and try to give us a long update. Afterall we are damanding fans! :)

Thanks. Sure, the next chapter will have some Samaina in library. 😉 . Will try to update as soon as possible. This is the first time I am writing a story so still finding it a little difficult to write long chapters but will definitely try to give longer updates.

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: YUDKBHT
Hey,
I finally got around with this story, and read all the parts in one go.
Awesome story.
I guess everyone have these what if situations and there own imaginations, but yours was a fresh idea. Loved it.
The way Sameer knows that Naina loves him, but is hiding it.
The fact that Naina fought rakesh for Sameer.
A brand new retake!

Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

Thank you. I am still yet to continue with your story. I think I have missed at least 3 or 4 updates. Sorry for that, will read and update.

Ya, while rewatching the episode came up with this scenario. Started as a OS and now it's become a FF.

And I have always wondered if Chachaji could have encouraged Naina to teach Sameer against Rakesh's wishes, then what would happen... So added that as well here.

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Veenapain
Read all the parts, loved it Waiting for the next update

Thanks, will update as soon as possible.

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Janani214

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Posted: 6 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Prizi
amazing update dear

Thanks dear 😊

Edited by Janani214 - 6 years ago

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Abida_angel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#90

Just red all the parts in one go and looved it.
I really liked the twist of naina still teaching sameer...
Part 7 was the best for me..the way sameer got to learn the importance of trust through naina was beatyful[L{
He already feels for her but is not ready to embrace himself into that terratory..the way he finds naina cute like a kid whom you want to pull cheeks 😳 I could see the whole story happening infront of me..please update soon 😊

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