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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow .. just wow
Superb update .. why did you stop it at that point ..
Khair loved it girl

Eagerly waiting for next partppp
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Nice update but not fare ... the point you stopped please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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this is so interesting...pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the comments. Sorry couldn't update it last night.

Part -3

Naina with shaking hands opened the chit "Thanks for helping meJ, Can we start during lunch? Naina was both disappointed and relived when she read this. She replied back, "Sure, but in the canteen or classroom? Sameer wrote, "Classroom.

The bell rang and everyone started for lunch. Naina turned to Swati, "I have to write the notes for the classes I missed yesterday, you go for lunch, and I will come and join. Swati asked her to come soon and left. Sameer had already explained to Mundit, so they both left to get samosas and cool drinks from the canteen for Sameer and themselves.

Slowly, Sameer and Naina turned towards each other. Naina asked, "What subject do you want to start with? Sameer replied, "I need help with all the subjects so anything is fine.

They both started with science. Naina, who normally gets flustered around Sameer, was somehow not that conscious when she started teaching him. In between Mundit came with the samosas and the way Naina was explaining, even they both could understand easily.

The lunch got over and they decided to meet in the evening again.

In the evening, they were at the library and they started with math. Naina hesitantly asked, "Did you read or get the notebook that Swati gave to you yesterday? By then Sameer had already decided to pretend like he has never read the letter but at the same time he didn't want to give the letter back so he replied that he lost the notebook. Naina was still worried and asked, "Did you at least read it? but Sameer replied no. Finally, Naina felt like she can breathe again.

That night again, Sameer took out the letter and reread it. He thought about Naina, he knew Naina was studious but today he realized how smart she was that she could so easily explain things to him. But more than anything that impressed him about her today was, the way she smiled at him when she said she will teach him, it was as if she was the one who was gaining something from teaching him and not the other way around. He was happy about Naina being back in school again and it wasn't only because she can teach him.

I am pretty sure all of you were disappointed with the chit. But I cannot give away anything now. Comments and criticism are welcome.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Probably the first one to read it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Probably the first one to read it


Tbh I'm.so glad Sameer didn't give her that letter back hayeee
I soo want to see how will he now fall in love with her ..
Will he tell her maybe after some time ,days , or in future about this ..
Hahaha so the boi is happy and he's impressed with what Naina is and how she is ..
I'm loving the process ..
Naina baby was relieved that .. that notebook was lost and thought sameer didn't read that letter fair enough .. because if I was at Naina's place I would have thought the same thing .. that if he would have read it he would have talk to me atleast ..
But she doesn't know that he read it already and don't want to give her back ..
Ofcourse her sincere and true confession why should he want to give it back ..
That letter literally touched the heart

Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
A very nice update really good sameer was sameer always. I liked his intent of not giving the letter back to her. Waiting for the next update eagerly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the realistic approach you gave to the chit. 😊
Even glad that Sameer dint want to mention about the letter even when he has treasured it.

The letter was plain and simple but indeed magical that has touched his heart.

Waiting to know will they confess their love to each other❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Loved reading all the parts... Beautifully written! Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AlishaSyed


Tbh I'm.so glad Sameer didn't give her that letter back hayeee
I soo want to see how will he now fall in love with her ..
Will he tell her maybe after some time ,days , or in future about this ..
Hahaha so the boi is happy and he's impressed with what Naina is and how she is ..
I'm loving the process ..
Naina baby was relieved that .. that notebook was lost and thought sameer didn't read that letter fair enough .. because if I was at Naina's place I would have thought the same thing .. that if he would have read it he would have talk to me atleast ..
But she doesn't know that he read it already and don't want to give her back ..
Ofcourse her sincere and true confession why should he want to give it back ..
That letter literally touched the heart

Eagerly waiting for next part


Thank you , will try to update as fast as I can.

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