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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
It's a rocking concept. I think you should write. The act of Sameer hiding the letter is a loaded idea and so full of potential.
Good luck

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Everyone. I have decided to continue the story and sorry for the delay in the update.

Part -2

The next day morning, Sameer arrived early to school. He had overheard Nanu talking with the principal about Naina rejoining the school and he wanted to meet her. He told himself that it was because he wanted her help in studies and it had nothing to do with the letter.But unfortunately, Naina was late that day and he couldn't talk to her alone.

She was so excited to see Sameer again, yesterday morning, she thought she will probably never see him again but today she can see him and also tell him that she can teach him. But no, of all the days she had picked today to come late and on top of that had to complete few formalities to rejoin the school and now it was break and no one was in class. She kept her bag at her desk and walked out wondering where Sameer will be. At the same time, Sameer was rushing back inside the class and both of them almost collided again. Both of their minds flashbacked to the time when they first met each other.

Naina started talking first, "Sameer, I am not going from our school, I will teach you. Sameer was literally speechless, he knew she was coming back and he was going to ask for her help but he didn't expect her to immediately tell that she will help him and he kept staring at her and at her bright smile. When the other students started walking inside the class, he replied, "thanks and went to his desk.

Naina also walked back to her desk and she saw Swati and both of them hugged each other and starting talking about how they will not be separated now. The class started and everyone sat at their places. After some time, Naina realized about the note book and asked, "Swati, did you give the notebook to Sameer?and Swati replied yes that she did but she does not know whether he read it or not. Naina started worrying if Sameer read the letter, she had written the letter when she thought she will never see him but now it was different and she had also agreed to helping him without even thinking about the letter. She turned towards him and Sameer feeing her gaze also turned. She just smiled at him and he smiled back. She thought in her mind, he will not be smiling if he had read the letter, he would have definitely said something. At that exact moment, Sameer passed a chit to her.

Comments and reviews are welcome, tomatoes and slippers also.

Next update will mostly be tonight itself.


Edited by Janani214 - 7 years ago
mystique123 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Oh!!!...you have stopped it at a cliffhanger .
Eager to read the next
Anjali33 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Hey, you stopped at such an exciting point.. this is not done
Update asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
What is written in the chit? I'm excited. Plz PM me after updating
WeRockTheWorld thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Loved it !! and Cliffhanger... 😆 now I cant wait to know what is written in that chit... 😳 pls update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
This is not fair. You stopped at such a cliffhanger. Pls update it soon. Can't wait to know what is there in that chit.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Hey it was too short... But still very good... Looks interesting .. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Thnx for continuing it...i would really love to read it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Read both the parts together and really liked them! It will be fun to explore how this goes with Sameer knowing about her feelings from the start.
Do update soon.. what's in the chit?!

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