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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
Sorry dear. Somehow I missed this story. Liked the way how you brought the twist to the original story. Chachaji is the perfect support for Naina. He is helping her to identify the right and wrong.
Now Naina can teach Sameer without hiding from anyone. So happy that not only Sameer but Munna and Pundit are also benefiting from these teaching sessions. Can't wait to read further.
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: JaySee

Sorry dear. Somehow I missed this story. Liked the way how you brought the twist to the original story. Chachaji is the perfect support for Naina. He is helping her to identify the right and wrong.
Now Naina can teach Sameer without hiding from anyone. So happy that not only Sameer but Munna and Pundit are also benefiting from these teaching sessions. Can't wait to read further.
Pls update soon.


That's ok. Yes, Chachaji guides Naina. Will mostly have an update tomorrow.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53
Hey All,
Really sorry about not updating. Going through a personal crisis right now but promise an update sometime this week. Until then you can check out my other story -https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=5047957.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#54
May u overcome ur crisis.. and God give u enough strength to face it.. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey All
It has been eons since I have updated this story but hoping there are still readers who would read this. Let me know how it is and if I get 5 comments, I promise to update the next part today itself.

Part 6

The next day morning, Sameer started early to school so that he could catch Naina before class started.

Nanu, "Arre, Sameer, how come you are awake so early and all set for school also?

Sameer took blessings from Nanu. "Nothing, Nanu, I am going to school so that I can practice cricket. The head boy competition is coming soon.

Without even waiting for Mundit, Sameer rushed off to school.

Mundit came half an hour later to Sameer's house and asked Nanu where Sameer was.

Nanu replied, "Sameer left early saying he was practicing cricket but you both are here, with whom is he playing cricket then.

Mundit themselves wondered the same. Arre, maybe Naina asked Sameer to come early. said Munna.

"Naina; who is Naina? asked Nanu.

Munna realized his slip of tongue but Pandit happily replied, Naina is helping Sameer with his studies, Nanu.

"Naina, huh said Nanu. Munna grabbed Pandit before he could blabber something else and left from there.

Sameer was waiting in the parking for Naina. He had come so early there was literally no one apart from him in the parking but somehow Naina also came early but her cousin Preeti was with her. He was wondering how to talk to her alone but Naina parked her cycle and informed Preeti that she will come after talking to Sameer.

Sameer was astonished hearing this and fear crept in his heart. He realized something must have definitely happened at Naina's house.

Naina slowly walked up to Sameer and said, "Sameer, sorry I didn't come yesterday. When I spoke to you on phone, Papa heard me and...

Sameer shouted, What?? Rakesh Sir heard you talking to me... Naina, what happened after that, did he scold you too much?

Naina, Yes and he forbid me to teach you anymore since you are Arjun Bhaiya's competitor.

Sameer was dumbstruck listening to this. Now he understood why she didn't mind informing Preeti that she was talking to him but he also realized that this could be the last time she spoke to him. Somehow he didn't wonder about who will teach him but was just stuck on the fact that him and Naina will mostly not talk to each other after this.

Naina on the other hand was pretending to be sad but seeing Sameer completely dumbstruck on hearing her Papa's name couldn't control her laughter.

Hearing Naina's laugh broke Sameer from his thoughts, he realized that this could just be joke on him.

"Naina, stop laughing; Does Rakesh Sir really know about you teaching me? "

"Yes, Sameer. Papa did overhear me talking to you and scolded me also.

"Then, why are you laughing?

"Because, Chachaji supported me and I can continue teaching you. Seeing Sameer's confused face, Naina elaborated on the previous day's events.

Sameer was amazed but he decided to make Naina suffer a little. "Here, I was so worried about you and you knew that you can teach me and decided to scare me with your Papa's name, hmm Saying so, he turned away but darted a glance at Naina.

Naina was touched that Sameer was worried about her but knew right now she had to handle Sameer and his anger.

"Accha, baba, I am sorry. I shouldn't have laughed at you. Said Naina but Sameer just turned away a little bit more.

"Ok, tell me what should I do so that you will forgive me. Said Naina.

"Hmm, since you didn't come yesterday, you have to teach longer today.

"Ok agreed Naina wondering how this is a compensation.

"Not at school, you have to come home said Sameer hiding his grin.

"What? shouted Naina, now she was the one dumbstruck, Sameer was inviting her to his house but how can she go.

Before Sameer could reply Mundit arrived. "Ponga, I told you Sameer would have come to meet Naina.

"What happened, Naina? Why didn't you come yesterday? Asked Pandit

Naina was flustered, now somehow she has become comfortable to talk to Sameer but talking to Mundit still made her feel awkward. So she replied, "Sameer will explain and left from there.

Mundit looked to Sameer and Sameer shortly explained that Rakesh sir knows but Naina will continue to teach since she has her Chachaji's permission.

Munna said, "Thank god, she can continue teaching you otherwise head boy competition is completely gone.

Pandit asked "But, how come Naina is going against her Papa and her Arjun Bhaiya. She normally just nods along to them

Mundit looked to Sameer for answers but Sameer just shrugged even though he knew why she was doing this.

He was wondering if she will agree to come to his home. He has never specifically invited someone to his home, after all he never had a house to call his home before he came to Ahmedabad but somehow he ended up inviting her. He didn't even know why he did it but he wanted to know what her answer would be. He expected it to be Yes since it was Maheshwari residence and everyone in school was envious of him and his wealth so she had to be curious on how is home is.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#56
Thanks for pm.
It's amazing and storyline is also different from show.
Hope Sameer will have feelings for her too
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57
Really nice
Please update next one soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58
Slowly slowly they r becoming more comfortable with each other. And sameer unknowingly liking her. Loved the part.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
What if...Rakesh had been overridden? Nice work.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
Wow, I read all the parts in one go.
It was wonderful...Pls update regularly.
Thanku

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