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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Waohhh so gud to see such a beautiful story.. sunday ban gya hehe

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Bluebee
Loved it very much...you have portrayed everything very beautifully ...👏
And preeti blackmailing Arjun was so funny...
"Mujhe hindi or Gujarati dono acche se aate hain"...🤣

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating.😳 Glad you loved Preeti and Arjun's convo.😃

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Thank you so much dear for appreciating every bit of it.It really means a lot.😃 Such beautiful words of yours just motivates to write more.We have an index of stories titled 'Un Dino Ki kahaniya'' in forum.Please go through it to find stories by me and other writers too.😳

OK.. I will surely go through it

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Niakhush
This was lovely minu...I have always Loved Preeti a lot...n in ur story today though it was about samina bt for me Preeti was the Star...I whd so luv to see arjun being confronted for his deeds by Preeti in show!!!

Lovely OS...each n every dailouge was band in... bilkul perfect!!!

Awesome!!!

Thanks Nia for the appreciation.😃 Seems Preeti took away the shine 😆 Yeah one confrontation between Arjun and Preeti has to be there..Glad you loved whole of it.😳

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

This was such a pyaara OS

Oh god!! Naina's reaction hearing of photo😆

Preeti is hilarious..Arjun ko dhamki dedi!!

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Hello Minu dear! Back again with an OS😳

This was a light hearted one and I enjoyed every part of it!

I am a little biased towards Preeti and this time I don't need to be biased. Preeti indeed stole all the limelight...

Thank god naina didn't ask why did he break the photo frame as if he told the reason, she would be confused because uski jawaani abhi aayi nahi😆

Preeti blackmailing Arjun was so fun to read 🤣

You even added Tai ji's famous dialogue 'Inn logon ka lakhshan tik nahi lag rahe mujhe' but this time it was for Preeti and Arjun 🤪

Lovely OS...❤️

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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Samainaforever

@Samainaforever

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Beautifully written di loved it

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Thanks for the PM Minu!! It felt like watching one of the episodes on TV minus the bloopers of course😆

I hope the writers can read your story and take suggestions. What I loved were the parts Preeti and Arjun played in it...laugh riot. I could actually imagine this happening in front of my eyes with Somy and Ayesha's faces. O bai how can I forget Taiji as well :)

And keeping pen in the breast pocket was so symbolic and added the subtle romantic touch.

Keep writing😊

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

I absolutely loved Preeti here. Her style is so different. And you brought it to the fore in an amazing manner.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: moumita04
Minu - sabse pehle to hugs for this one... 🤗
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As said by Stephen King - "Description begins in the writer's imagination but should finish in the reader's"

You never fail to take me down the imaginary lane you have carved out. There is no other writer who could have done a better justice to this imaginary scenario of how Preeti would blackmail Arjun.

I simply loved the story... It has the right balance and the perfect mix or love, apprehension, comic relief... and I am fan of the symbolic references you weave in.

The bribe system of India worked on Mr. Maheshwari too... 👏👏
Sameer proposes and Somani disposes... Such a true reflection of their relationship... 😆😆
Naina scared of buying another gift for Sameer, while Sameer bringing camera to click her pictures... how lovers look out to soothe each other...
Sameer waited for 1 hour... yet it didn't matter to him because he was waiting for his love... how easy it was to hide it just so Naina doesn't feel guilty... And Naina finding solace in his arms and then that pen ticking signal... how precious it is for them... ❤️

And finally Preeti - the darling munchkin...!! She calls herself side-character but in this story as well as on the real show she is a true superstar... Samaina's hope!

Gutsy, free-spirited, kind hearted and so adorable... She literally slayed it... hahahaa... I wanted to pity Arjun, seriously... but then I couldn't... It was just too wonderful to find him in such a situation... Preeti listing out his crimesheet... hahaha... 😆😆 And desperately trying to save himself from Taiji... Too good Minu... mazaa aa gaya padhke... !!

You added "tiscu taiyan" too... 🤣 Preeti to apne imported jijaji ko bhi dhamkane lagi...!! Chalo achcha hai Sameer is smarty enough to keep his saaliji happy... 😳

And how adorable that he understood his mischievous saali is up to something and is the reason behind Arjun's sharif avataar... Aur hamari bholi Naina ko kuch samajh nai aaya... 😆

Aur Sameer se milne ka asar to dekho... Naina's topper brain activated... paificifying Taiji with elaichi wali chai... taaki woh baki sabki elaichi na kutde... Awesome!! 👍🏼

All in all, another masterpiece from you... And I loved it so much that I am going to read it again... 😳
Thank you so much for this story and for the dedication... Love you my soul sister... 🤗

And the gulmohar tree and buttercup shrubs were a nice touch...!!

Love,
Mou

Mou!🤗 Love you!

Stephen King's quote for me is like VISA approved.Trust me I am surrounded by his books on writing as craft since two semesters.His lines are priceless and you putting it here makes me do a victory jig.

So did we complete with 'Blackmail Arjun' mission?All major and potential ones done? I hope so.😉

Felt so good while writing this and felt like back to my old days of writing dialogues more than descriptions.Glad that you loved the whole of it measured out.

That Somani and foreign trip had been my personal experience ..so put to use..😆

Trust me writing the romance portion was difficult.Don't know why I felt block for two continuous days before settling to find something ordinary to extraordinary.Me an d my obsession with symbolism..You better know that and evaluated well.😳

And Preeti effortlessly took all the limelight I think.I really enjoyed writing her dialogues.She was in full form to strike.Perhaps it was the first OS on blackmailing Arjun exclusively..😆

Pity Arjun? I wanted to give him a kiss after all the blackmails he got...Bechara bacha..😆

Thank you for all the appreciation.And bada wala thanks for the push..Lazy and forgetful I am this piece would not have hit the floor.❤️

Thanks for encouragement and kind words.

With love-

Minu.

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago