Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 40

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

Oh wow

So Amazing update

Ab toh rishta pkka samjho

Originally posted by: A.Green

Does it count that I haven't read the first two sections but I read first chapter of Section 3 and loved it? 😆😛

I love the fact that you are juggling so much in this single story. I got a brief idea from the note at the start, how much time and thinking this story takes out of you 😃 Commendable 👏

I loved the talk between Naina and Chachaji ❤️ You handled it so well, I was so impressed, by how Naina wasn't scared of telling the truth, she was scared of what the future held! I miss this Naina 😭

Preeti was scared of her parent's reaction, oh damn! I am sure agar aisa show mein dikhaya the exact scenario would repeat. Anand would accept, maybe after a while of retrospection and Bela would lash at first but seeing Anand she would agree. Really loved it 😃

Mostly the understanding between Anand-Naina is too die for! 😳

I loved the bike ride 😆 So fun, sameer zinda rahenge toh shaadi hogi na hahaha, typical Sameer Maheshwari.

Sameer missing Nanu and wanting do to everything right was so endearing to read

I am awaiting future updates and I promise I will read the previous ones soon. Just that once I started reading this, I no way felt the need to stop. Sorry for jumping the line this way

Loved it! <3

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hie dear!

Ohh...cheating ki tumne? 😉 Nah...actually you could start from here only! This is just a connecting part to the rest of the story...and the beginning of how they begin convincing their families! It truly is difficult for me to write...lots of characters, love stories, family dynamics, plots n twists in mind n to put them all down...phew!

I always wanted Naina to be the one to own up to Chachaji...I don't care if the rest of the family discovers the affair by accident...to Chachaji she must be honest! And with chachaji by her side, how can Bela still remain angry! 😊 I'm now eager for such a thing to be shown in the show...pata nai kab Naina me bahaduri aayegi in the show! 😕

Vaise, I wouldn't say this was a great part as a writer...I would actually advise you to read Section I for the sneak peak into their college lives and the start of this journey..and Section II for some of their firsts (romance away from family drama)..Hope I'm not boasting about my work..but this advice comes solely from a readers' POV! 😊😊

Love

Sur

Originally posted by: A.Green

Chalo if you have told this to me, I'll tell you a secret 😆 You are my favourite favourite writer on this forum 😳 How you write the characters, be it Sameer-Naina or any side characters I connect with them a lot. Even if you feel ye acha update nahi tha, mujhe toh acha laga, short, impactful and sweet! Maybe it's my biased opinion since you're my fav writer 😛

I will read those two sections. Unme se bhi beech beech mein se padha hai kabhi kabhi 😆 (Sorry!! Sameer style kaan pakad ke)

Mt. Abu wali puri story padhi hai. Will comment when I have time :/

But see whatever you write, I love it, coz maybe I just love how you weave the story and your writing style really clicks with me

Originally posted by: lakku19

Wow.. awesome update.. loved it..

But it's very short dear..

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Beautifully written loved it

But bohot chotu sa update tha

Continue soon now I cant wait to read further

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Aww dear...ye keh ke to tumne mera din bana diya...matlab Sunday bana diya (sabse important day of the week)..love you so much!!! 🤗

I hope I'm able to write as per your expectations in future too...😳

Haan haan...koi na...aaraam se padho...jab bhi time ho...no hurries! 😃

Tumne Mt. Abu bhi padhi waah...that was my first attempt at writing...itna pyaar ho gaya tha mujhe Samaina se ki I took to writing to express myself! 😃 Would love to read your take on it too!

But yes..I know you have a lot on your plate, especially for this month! 😊 All the best for that!!

Love

Sur