Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 38

Originally posted by: Azraa01

A trip with many memories.

Now that the trip has ended, im sure the romance will also be minimal.

Thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: Radkam

Badhiya wali trip thi... kuch bahut Purani yaadein taaza ho gayi! 😳 trip Khatam ab aage?

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

Awww these two are way too cute

The kisses, the fireflies, the gift- it was all so awesome

And Humari ultra bholi Naina 😆

Too good yar.

Will be waiting for the next part

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Sur Darling!🤗

I read it so soon and felt that there are certain points if I take and go to sleep..would not be able to sleep then..

Minu darling! Thank you so much dear...maine kitni baar ye comments padhe hain you don't even know...but due to a paucity of time, I wasn't able to reply sooner..my bad! 😕

So here's the review-

I might be starting from end but yes the end had my heart.A wrist watch..The most thoughtful and beautiful gift.Connected instantly with me taking me into beautiful flashbacks.You mentioned he was emotional ...but I think without mentioning that word also that whole scene was emotional..The dialogue that he would cherish the moment /the times she is with him..

What i loved that he adored her as a gift too...She is a wonderful gift well was not packaged how he expected it to be..but yes!With the ticking of time both are each other's coveted gifts.❤️

I always feel a watch is a very symbolic gift...one is I really adore watches...gifts with a purpose if we see from a practical perspective. Yet when you think from the emotional POV, a watch symbolizes the moments we treasure with the person to whom we've gifted it to..Naina gifting the watch to Sameer was a indication to that fact...she wants all her time to be spent with him n Sameer too thinks likewise...though as you said, there is no greater gift for him than his Naina!

Next coming to the fireflies--

They are emulating stars on earth and such a beautiful symbolism.Fireflies came in and so does they were 'fire flied'..Yes!They were on fire but not the all engulfing inferno.Sharing one room was the touchstone of all their faith,trust,control and unconditional love..If love makes you lose sense then love has the power to put barrier against all that is primal senses...Love surely can make one go weak but its the same love that can make one all-senses conqueror.

I loved a point there...Naina fell weak in the moments of love but Sameer stood all rock like...Yes!That was the most beautiful thing.

Haan dear...though I've never seen fireflies for real 😕 Have been planning a trek for two years...hasn't happened. That's what love is na...passionate extreme at one instant and gentle the other! 😳 I wanted to show that though they feel comfortable enough to share a room now, yet they understand that they should restrain themselves. And this is something that Sameer needs to take care of. Naina has enough trust on Sameer to know that he'll always be by her side no matter what happens. Yet he doesn't want to put them, put her in any uncomfortable situation. 😳

Next coming to the coffee at midnight.--

Though coffee is not my favourite beverage but yeah!I do grab it sometimes.The coffee was really another beautiful symbolism..There was peace in strong coffee.The warmth of coffee soon transcended to the warmth of their lips..Tasting sweet,exhilarating and comforting.

I'm not a coffee fan too...though I do enjoy it sometimes...I'm more of a tea lover. Loved your symbolism here dear...wo warmth sirf coffee ki nai...coffee ke saath saath pyaar ki bhi thi! 😃

His concern that her hair is still wet. THts another Dil Le Lo moment.

.Can I get this Sameer as some prize...😳

Naina se puch ke batati hun! 😉

And then finally the talks they had.

Naina's elucidating,fears and then his confession about kissing dreams...The beautiful concept of this story along with its prequel that both here want to be understood first,loved later...

Thank you dear...just wanted them to be honest with each other...😳 and meld things from the prequel here.

So with this beautiful episode,their sojourn of hills came to an end..My heart feels heavy as they would descend back to the sultry weather of Ahmedabad and may be sultry topics to handle.

Yes dear...even my heart feels heavy...you know how much I love rains and hills.

Their journey was best measured with each other than miles...And now I am off to sleep;with wide smiles.😃

Hope you had sweet dreams! 😳

Thank you for the PM.

With love-

Minu

Originally posted by: gugul

A beautiful update! It's so romantic... Loved reading it.. trip itni jaldi khatam kyun ho gayi?

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Sur di

pls first of all dil le lo for this part ❤️

Haaye!!

whole time while reading it I was doing only two things either blushing or smiling 😳

oh God Sameer is so naughty

that conversation between Samaina about shaadi ke baad jo hota hain was hilarious ,Sameer was teasing by pretending to be a maasoom and nirdosh lover 🤣

Sameer's birthday was so special this time

chlo bechaare Sameer ka Naina ke saath wala ek sapna toh poora hua

You are amazing

plzzz update soon

Lots of love

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Unres

This was the bestest birthday for Sameer, of course before marriage.. Shaadi k baad ka pehle birthday to aur bhi zyada special aur khubsoorat hoga😳

Ohh, both r talking about after-marriage romance☺️

Jab ye dono apni agli kissing location decide kr rhe the, thank God kisi ne inki baatein nhi suni.. Kyuki inki baaton se lag rha tha dono make out krne ka soch rhe h🤣

I loved d fireflies part❤️

Trip khatam Ab aisa romance kahan milega