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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Wow yaar

Part 2 was simply amazing

Thank you dear Anjali!!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic567

Sur... It was simply amazing dear.

The star of this story is Rohan 😆... Show main na sahi yhan pe toh kuch kiya usne... Loved the brother bonding between sam and rohan... Arjun as selfish as ever... Even helping naina for his own selfish motives😡..

Sam vishakha bonding even for a small time was really beautiful... Loved how sam got some happiness... Sam thinking about naina being a dream was so cute... The desperation and pain was beautifully penned... The hug was mind blowing.

Preeti liking jeejaji's bhai😆... I liked that preeti made the first move... Rohan though shy, still noticed preeti and indirectly trying to know whether she's taken😛... Sam being the best bhai and jeeji playing cupid was damn cute..

I must say one thing sur... U always fulfills my wishes through your stories... Be it nanu naina meet or Rohan sam bonding... Loved this one as much as your previous ones.

Hi Simi!! 😃🤗 Dil le lo...elated to see you could relate to the emotions n loved the bonding between the brothers n Sam with his mother...haan Prehan mein definitely Preeti ko pehla kadam uthana padega...Timetable ko to time nai hoga pyaar ke liye...out of schedule na...I can so imagine...Preeti saying Rohan...movie dekhne chalte hain DDLJ...shahrukh ki nayi movie aayi hai...n Rohan is like nai Preeti abhi mere juice ka time hai 🤣
Arey I'm so happy that I was able to fulfill all your wishes till now...aur koi muraad ho to bata dena...would try to pen something down on it too if you like...thanks for the lovely comments as always dear 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

I was waiting for this update.. and I loved the second part 👍🏼

Temple part was so nice..

And finally gang met.. but Swati was missing

The hug.. show mein nahi mila par tumne de diya

The bond between Sameer and Rohan was so good

I loved the conversation between Sameer-Preeti and Sameer-Rohan..

Thanks for this Awesome TS.. 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

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Aww dear...such detailed comments! I'm truly flattered!! Thank you very much!
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You loved each n every bit of the story, liked Sameer's temple visit, the surprise meeting n the hug between the couple, Prehan story...side characters...n wo Safari suit ko dekh ke Sameer ka reaction (I tried humour for the first time...glad it worked for you dear!)
Ab this was initially 1 shot, fir 2 hua...ab 3 karna padega lag raha hai...Sameer aur Naina aur Dilli Darshan 😳😳
Once again...thanks a lot dear for the fantabulous comments! 🤗All you readers keep me going!

I'll make sure that it will not stop even on 3😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Sameer's dialogue to Rohan at the end had me grinning from ear to ear.
Loved how Rohan was the mastermind behind getting Arjun to Delhi to take his brother out of his misery... Must admit that there are a good few blackmailers in these FF's and im glad Shefali is one of them.
Absolutely loved Sameer's Mandir scene and Rohan's sarcastic thought that love changed Sameer.
Hope to see you writing about Rohan and Preeti in the near future

Hi Azraa...thank you for the wonderful comments yet again! 🤗 So happy to see you enjoyed the update...hehe yeah Arjun ko blackmail karna humara fav past time ban gya hai😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you dear! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Loved preeti n rohan conversation.. dil le lo hayee so cute.. awsm update dear..

Thanku so much dear😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Kya khoob likhte ho, bada accha likhte ho😳
Yaayyy Finallyyy aapne extend kr diya first part. Thankyou thankyou thankyou so much.


Oh I sooo wish I could see this on screen. I sooo wish someone from the show reads this and takes inspiration from it. Matlab maza hi aa jaega.

Everything was amazing. Rohan and Sam's bonding was the icing on the cake It had everything. Bhaion ka ek dusre ko tease krna, help krna, ek dusre ko smjhna. I don't understand why can't writers of the show think of something like this. Why why why???????


Naina Bhabhi, oye hoye, sounded so cute.

Sameer's mandir visit was so sweet. This proves how much he has changed in love. Sameer Naina se door hai pr Naina ko har pal jeeta hai


I don't want to say anything about the reunion. Frankly mere pass words hi nahi hain, it was so beautiful❤️


Though I am a die hard Preedit fan but hihi I liked rohan Preeti here. Aag dono taraf lagi hai. Mr time table ready to let go his strict schedule and mastikhor Preeti addressing Rohan as Ji. Dil le liya.

Baki Mundit aur Preeti ke to kya kehne. Unke bina samaina adhure hain.


I am so glad you wrote this. This made me happy. I can read it again and again. Har emotion aapne itne acche se express kiya hai. Amazing.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AaishaM

Kya khoob likhte ho, bada accha likhte ho😳

Yaayyy Finallyyy aapne extend kr diya first part. Thankyou thankyou thankyou so much.


Oh I sooo wish I could see this on screen. I sooo wish someone from the show reads this and takes inspiration from it. Matlab maza hi aa jaega.

Everything was amazing. Rohan and Sam's bonding was the icing on the cake It had everything. Bhaion ka ek dusre ko tease krna, help krna, ek dusre ko smjhna. I don't understand why can't writers of the show think of something like this. Why why why???????


Naina Bhabhi, oye hoye, sounded so cute.

Sameer's mandir visit was so sweet. This proves how much he has changed in love. Sameer Naina se door hai pr Naina ko har pal jeeta hai


I don't want to say anything about the reunion. Frankly mere pass words hi nahi hain, it was so beautiful❤️


Though I am a die hard Preedit fan but hihi I liked rohan Preeti here. Aag dono taraf lagi hai. Mr time table ready to let go his strict schedule and mastikhor Preeti addressing Rohan as Ji. Dil le liya.

Baki Mundit aur Preeti ke to kya kehne. Unke bina samaina adhure hain.


I am so glad you wrote this. This made me happy. I can read it again and again. Har emotion aapne itne acche se express kiya hai. Amazing.


Hi Aaisha!! Thank you so much dear!! So happy to see you enjoyed the story as I penned it down!
BOLD: I fell in love with this line...wo sach me Naina ko har pal jeeta hai!
I'm honoured by the praise you've showered on this piece dear...thank you so much!! And sabse badi baat, being a diehard Predit fan, you still loved Prehan here. I love both pairings- anyone would do for me! 😳😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mujhe pata hai Sur danda leke mujhe marne nikli hogi..Ittni late kar di reply karne mein..😆
Okay kan pakad ke 'Sorry' in Sameer style.So late ke liye compensation--each part ka ache se analysis.😳

Part-1

Words are a pretext. It is the inner bond that draws one person to another, not words..

Rohan seemed such a sensible guy to understand an always 'misunderstood' person.Loved how you projected his sensibility and more curiousity.His sobs could make him realize that he has a pounding heart unlike what he had been always projected in a bad light.
Those PCO calls..to be fully known and truly loved is, well, a lot like being loved by God. It is what we need more than anything. It liberates us from pretense, humbles us out of our self-righteousness, and fortifies us for any difficulty life can throw at us.

They both need liberation and those phone calls provided that solace and liberty.

That Deepika -Sameer scene bowled me over..Such a cute scene.😳

Mr.Timetable wanting to throw the timetable for toss fr listening about Bhai-Bhabi's prem kahaani..Dadi se pitega ek din 😆

Part-2

A bond between souls is ancient - older than the planet...

Though Rohan and Sameer are not bonded biologically but they bonded soulfully over the beautiful foundation of 'Love'.
The way he comforted his brother and made plans for the two parched souls to finally meet it showed that love is only malady and love is only remedy.
That mandir scene was much required for everyone to know how the flamboyant Sameer Maheshwari has eveolved to Sameer Jayprakash Maheshwari.

Finally Naina and Sameer meet and that has been portrayed so beautifully---
If you promise to love, trust, respect, support and stand by someone no matter what, do not just speak those words when times are good. Live those words when challenges arise. The stronger the love and commitment, the more unbreakable the bond. United hearts will never be easily divided...

The Preeti blackmailing Arjun was a good one ..bechara Arjun I pity him..And the friendship shown is the beautiful aspect of this update..

All in all I loved how you brought this aspect ---
Connecting with someone is not necessarily a bond with a significant other, or even a friend, but can be the indefinable - perhaps the rarest and most precious thing in life to find at all.

So finally commented.😃

Keep coming with more and thanks for the PM.

With Love-
Minu.

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