Sameer-Naina TS: Fulfillment (Part 2 updated on Page 7)

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

I'm in a dreamland...n waiting for thr fulfillment...btw for college, I too wrote a pink top n blue jeans...God...our Sameers want their Nainas the same way...ab bas jaldi se next part update kar do like a good girl...3rd yr tak kiss nai kiya...uff, hard for Sameer!!!

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Wow . You are genuinely a talented writer. Your description of Naina's emotions is spot on. As a reader you have the ability to make it seem as if its me feeling what naina feels. And to me thats amazing writing. Well done.

Cant wait for the next part and hoping that Naina does give in to her Sameers love.

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
I'm in a dreamland...n waiting for thr fulfillment...btw for college, I too wrote a pink top n blue jeans...God...our Sameers want their Nainas the same way...ab bas jaldi se next part update kar do like a good girl...3rd yr tak kiss nai kiya...uff, hard for Sameer!!!

Hahaha,... Sur... That's lovely to know... Sameer is obsessed with Pink... 😆😆

Haan Sameer frustrated to hai... Let's see kya hota hai... I will try my best to fulfill his desires and yours too... Next shot will be up tomorrow!! 😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Wow . You are genuinely a talented writer. Your description of Naina's emotions is spot on. As a reader you have the ability to make it seem as if its me feeling what naina feels. And to me thats amazing writing. Well done.
Cant wait for the next part and hoping that Naina does give in to her Sameers love.

Thank you so much Azraa... 😳

I am feeling very happy to know that you were able to connect to Naina's emotion when reading this story... That makes me feel, I was successful in bringing the character to life with my words... so, really thank you for sharing this bit of feedback! 😊😊

Next part will be up tomorrow!