Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...)

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Oh no this cant be your first attempt ... Fabulous yr .. keep writing ... I cant wait for next part when sameer meets his love .. pls update soon

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: surbharati
Please update soon...as all are having different imagination...

You writing is beautiful as if story is playing in front of our eyes...

Please continue and update next part soon

Thank you so much for your appreciation! 😊

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: angelic567
I cant believe this was your first attempt... So good and beautiful... You described sameer's thoughts in such a beautiful way... Loved it... Will be waiting for the next part... Pls update soon

Thank you so much for your appreciation! 😊 I will try and update soon...

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
Oh no this cant be your first attempt ... Fabulous yr .. keep writing ... I cant wait for next part when sameer meets his love .. pls update soon

Thank you so much for your appreciation! 😊

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

This was so good..not at all like a first attempt!!

I'm suddenly craving for a train journey😆

Munna is actually like Sameer's mom😆

Excited to know how SamAina meet each other

Update ASAP

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Wow it was so good.

I loved it so much..

Train journeys are so beautiful.. loved it loved it loved it.

Please update soon..

And pm me too..

Sending u Biddy request..

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Humera

@ITSABOUT_DMG

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Is this your First Attempt???😲

it doesn't looked like one

Magical Moumita

i will now call u pyaar se sona di

if only u give me permission

u r like sonpari to me😳

spreading magic n happiness wherever u go

ok coming to the story.its just OUT OF THE WORLD

train journey is sooo beautifully written

loved that little detailing of kids laughing at petlu uncle

it happens everywhere😆

n sammy boy remembering naina was sooo samainaish feels

loved it

eagerly waiting for the further parts

n yeah last part was fab munna scolding sameer motherly

i can imagine munna's expressions

update soon

🤗

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Niakhush

@Niakhush

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

First of all thnx u for the pm!!

Was this seriously ur first attempt!! U Wer brilliant...u explained it so well...the best thing was whole part 1 was on his train journey...his return!!

Wonderful yr... waiting eagerly for the next part... hopefully naina meeting sameer!!!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Wonderful dear!!! I loved it...it filled me with a strange air of positivity and freshness...but I'm sure there's much more to it nowm.

Naina is in trouble surely...koi rishta ya shaadi pakki types? That's why Sameer had to rush..

Sameer coming back to Ahemdabad feels like he's finally coming home...just the way in the initial episodes, he stood near the train door...in his red sweater...n silky hair flying away...waiting eagerly for next