OS : Naina , your wish is my command - Page 3

Originally posted by: angelic567

You made me emotional yaar😭... What a brilliant piece... I wont be able to handle it if naina ever has such thoughts..glad that sameer was straight forward... So beautifully written.

Glad you liked it..I have felt Naina sometimes felt inferior when it comes to her looks and social background...so its from those thoughts she assumed that Sameer might not be able to accept her as his spouse..as there was lots of disparity betwn her and Sameer.

Originally posted by: BlueJayFire

Lovely dear...Touched my heart..

Thank you so much !!

4 YEARS AND 20 DAYS!

I am speechless. This is indeed MAGICAL!. The way you carved their separation and union is beyond words and absolutely worth praising. I have always and always loved your post right from KRP days. Your observation, your analysis , your comments everything, I always loved it!
But this story, again falling short of words. You must be thinking that I always go OTT but its TRUE.
I love your writing.

SUPERB! FANATBULOS! AMAZING! EXCELLENT!

Sorry but I can't stop myself 😳

U have written so amazing

So nicely written Ashwathy !

Ashu!!!!! Total treat to read what you wrote. The detailing and the expressions were beautifully captured. I was mesmerized in the bedroom scene...LOVED IT...please keep sharing more!❤️

Lovely OS.

At the first go... I was surprised to see an OS in the title of your post 😲... believe me if you can... it was a beautiful surprise 😃👏

Beautifully written.. 👏

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Magic!! I was so absorbed in the story...I was reading it with bated breath...the flow, the story, the characters, the emotions were all perfect...not a single thing seemed out of place...Wow...I request you to please share more of your writings on Samaina...n pls pls pls continue this further...

Btw...Sameer in white shirt plus black trousers was like killer...

I'm waiting for more...

Thank you !! I have always liked Sameer in formals when worn with a casual touch...and him in white and black is an image that would burn the screen.. 😳