OS : Naina , your wish is my command - Page 4

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

At the first go... I was surprised to see an OS in the title of your post😲... believe me if you can... it was a beautiful surprise😃👏

I always knew you could write a fiction brilliantly and see... my belief came true... just read back what you yourself have written... it's awesome Ashwathy😃👏

All the stress confusion..anxiety of separation was so nicely expressed... the meeting after 4 years... as expected her doubts on him regarding the feelings for her in his heart... are expected when you don't hear from that person for so long... and his authority on her and she obeying to his wish... I just loved to read this😃👏

The room part was just very emotional... touched my heart😃

Please do write more dear... would love to read them😃

Originally posted by: Azraa01

This was absolutely amazing
You seriously need to write more
Please pm me if you ever post more writings