Preedit story..Dard pe Marham...pyar ka- part 5 updated (19th April)

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Sonam

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 3:

Preeti was getting impatient to know what pandit was saying about happenings in Mt abu...she was thinking about how to get the info...she knows pandit was the one who started the topic..she wanted to ask him what happened but she failed as he left angrily.. they were not even frnds..she dont know his phone number...she felt helpless..suddenly something clicked her mind..she ran to the phone and dialled swati's number.

Preeti: hi Swati, Munna ke ghar ka number hai..

Swati: kya, Munna ka number..tumhe q chahiye..kya hua?

Preeti: dar mat kahin leke nahi jaungi tere Munna Ko kuch kaam tha isliye pucha

Swati: kya tu bhi..kuch bhi bolti hai..achha likh number

Preeti noted down the number and hurriedly put the receiver off and again dialled munna's number

Munna: hello kaun

Preeti: Munna me hu Preeti.

Munna all surprised: arey sipahi ki behen, tum..kya hua..

Suddenly he got worried and asked Sameer thik to hai na..

Preeti: ha Sameer thik hai, accha kya tum mujhe pandit ke ghar ka number de sakte ho..she asked hesitantly

Munna: kya, par q..

Preeti: arey wo kuch kaam tha usse..pls

Munna started blushing as he remembered incident between Preedit on that day when they were checking antenna

Munna: ha ha pata hai kya kaam he pandit se

He gave number to Preeti. She felt some relief as she somehow managed to get his number...

While dialing his number she was getting nervous..

Preeti: ye mujhe itni ghabrahat q ho rahi hai, Abhi Swati aur Munna se baat to ki Mene..par ab pandit se baat karne ke liye me itni nervous q ho rahi hu..kya Preeti tu bhi..ek phone hi to karna hai..baat kar aur khatam..bass..

She gathered the courage and dialled his number...

Ring...ring.. ring

With every ring her heartbeat was getting fast..

She started feeling more nurvous..

Hello...a voice came from another side of the reciever..

Her heart skipped a beat..his voice has some magic in it..she was lost...

Hello..pandit again said.

Kaun hai?? Another question from his side...

This time Preeti came into her senses and said hello.

Pandit eyes got widened..in shock, in surprise.

Preeti tum???

Preeti shooked.. how come he knows its me.. she started thinking .

In over excitement she asked directly: tumhe kaise pata me hu...and stopped in midway... realising what she blabbered...

Pandit smiled...bas pata chal Gaya..

Preeti blushed. Pandit again smiled.

Pandit: acchha ye to batao tumhe mera number kaha se Mila..

Preeti felt blank as she dint expected this question from him...she was feeling speechless..

Pandit: Preeti, kya hua, kuch bolo...

Preeti: Ha wo mene...tumhars number... Swati...Munna...

She put her hand on reciever..kya pagal ki tarah badabada Rahi hai Preeti...kuch bhi bol rahi hai..ab jyada nervous mat ho..aur baat kar thik se. Pagal

She gathered courage and said

Wo mene Swati se Munna ka number liya aur Munna se tumhara.

Pandit was so much surprised. More than surprised he was impressed.

Arey waa, kya baat hai Preeti.manna padega... Mera number nikalne ke liye itni mehnat..Pandit said smiling.

Preeti's cheeks turns red. She was blushing so hard.

She herself was surprised what's happening with her. Y she is acting like this. Why she was able to control her feeling when he was around.

Pandit was waiting for her reply. After a long silence he broke and said accha batao, kya baat thi jo itni raat ko phone Kiya...

Preeti suddenly realised why she was calling him and remembered the incident happened at that morning.

Wo mujhe tumse kuch bahot jaruri baat karni thi. Kya tum mujhe kal school ke peeche ke garden me mil sakte ho. Pls dekho mana mat karna...bahot important hai.

Pandit was shocked. She wanted to meet him but y..that too in garden...he could not understand.

Pandit: kya hua Preeti tum pareshan lag Rahi ho..Sab thik hai na..

Preeti: me thik hu, bas tum kal milna pls..

Pandit: accha thik hai. Kal milta hu..

Preeti got relieved and said thanks to pandit.

Pandit: arey isme thanks ki kya baat hai. Ulta thanks to mujhe bolna chahiye tumhe.

Preeti confusingly asked Kyun?

Pandit: wo kya hai na peheli Baar kisi Khoobsurat ladki ne mujhe itni raat ko phone Kiya hai. And he smiled.

Preeti's heartbeat increased after hearing such comment from pandit

Her cheeks turns red again. This time she could not able to gathered the courage to speak to him anymore.

Accha ok bye. Gn

Saying this she cut the call and ran to her bedroom knowing that today she can't sleep..not at all..

Here pandit was smiling looking at receiver and went to sleep again. Little did he know that he too will not able to sleep that night.

Edited by VeebafanSonam - 7 years ago

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daenerysnow

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Aww, love the fact she was nervous to ring him. Such a cute scene.

It would be lovely if they could replicate this on the show...though my Preedit dreams for the show are fading fast

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Sonam

@VeebafanSonam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Part 3 updated.

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Thank you

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Sonam

@VeebafanSonam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Part-4

Next day at school..

Pandit was sitting on the bench in the garden waiting for Preeti to arrive. He was getting impatient to meet her. She Was tensed.he was feeling restless. He got up from bench and started qalwalk here and there looking at the gate of the garden.

Preeti came on her cycle and parked it near the gate. She called out pandit and entered in garden.

Pandit felt relived and happy. He just wanted to know the reason behind her tension. Preeti known as bubbly, chirpy gal was not at all looking good in all tension.

Preeti- m sorry..thoda late ho Gaya..wo Naina Ko Ghar pe bhejne ke Baad chupke se ana pada na..so time lag Gaya..tumhe pareshani hui na..sorry

Pandit-arey nahi sorry q bol rahi ho..me bhi Abhi Aya hu..it's ok..baitho..

Preeti sat on the bench and asked pandit to sit as well.

Both sat on same bench keeping some distance in between.

Both were silence for long time. Pandit who was now more worried finally broke the silence...

Preeti kya hua, tum pareshan lag Rahi ho..akhir hua kya hai..dekho mujhe batao kya hua hai..ho Sakta hai me kuch madat kar Sakta hu..bolo Preeti..asked Pandit.

Preeti- Mt abu me kya hua tha Sameer aur Naina ke beech..

Pandit was shocked. This came as a shock to him as well. He dint expected this

Pandit- Preeti ye Sab tum kya..

Preeti stopped him in between.

Preeti- dekho sach sach batao..kya hua tha..me itni bhi pagal nahi hu ke kuch dekh ya samaj nahi Sakti. Kuch chhupane ke sochna bhi mat pandit.uss din hhar pe tumne no Naina Ko bola..tabse mujhe ek pal ka bhi chain nahi hai..pls batao na. And she started crying...

He become tensed now. She wasnt wrong. She has full rights to know about her sister. Aur kya pata sach pata lagne par wo Sameer ki madat karde..he thought.

Pandit- dekho tum pehele Rona band karo. Me batata hu tumhe..

.he got up from bench and turned away and told everything that happened in my abu..(m not explaining this part in detail)

After telling everything he become quite.he wanted to turn and face her..but he could not as he and munna was also equally gulity.

After lot of silence he could not take it anymore. He turned and stood still. Shocked.

Preeti was just sitting lifeless there. Her eyes were red. Burning with anger and pain.

She was crying very badly. He felt bad seeing her like this.

Naina, meri behen, meri best frnd..aise kaise kare Sakti hai..usne itni badi baat mujse chhupayi..Sara Dard, sari takleef akeli seh Rahi thi..aur ek me thi jo uska Dard samaj nahi payi..uske ansu dekh nahi payi. Behen bolti hai Apne ap ko naina meri..aur itni badi baat chupake Rakhi..

And she fell on her knees. She was broken completely.

Pandit who was standing thr quietly went near her..grab her shiuldes and made her sit on the bench again..

Preeti sambhalo Apne AAP Ko..dekho Mene ye Sab tumhe isliye bataya qki tumhe pura haq hai sacchai janane ka..tum Naina ki behen ho..uski parwah Karti ho. Aur Jo bhi hua uske liye me tumhe sorry bolta hu... He said with lot of concern in his eyes..

Preeti- tumpe ya Sameer se gussa nahi hu..tum log to paraye ho..gussa to me Naina pe hu..wo to meri apni thi..

Pandit who was sitting on same bench still grabbing her shoulders felt hurt.All he could hear the word paraya. He didn't liked it...he removed his hands from her shoulder...but he was not angry.

He took a deep breath. He understood her pain. She was broken...she was right though. She was hurt afterall. Her sister was getting through lot of pain and she could not help her...

Pandit- dekho Preeti me Janta hu tum dukhi ho..par ye samay Rome ka nahi hai..Sameer Dil se maafi mang Raha hai Naina se..aur ha ye pyar ka natak karte karte wo sach me Naina se pyar karne Laga hai..

Kya...Preeti was shocked and hurriedly wiped her tears.

Aur nahi to kya..isliye to itna Sab sehan kar Raha hai taki Naina Ko wapas Haasil kar sake. Aur me aur munna hamesha uska sath denge...he smiled.

Preeti too smiled back and genuine felt happy for Naina...sameer was not that bad..she somewhat knew that...

Kya tum un dono Ko milwane me hamari madat karogi...pls...

Preeti smiled and nodded her head in yes.

Pandit was so happy hearing this...pakka???

Saying this he offered his hand to her for promise..she smiled happily and put her hand on his...he was so happy...both were smiling and staring each other. Their eyes locked..both were lost in each other eyes...pandit has lot of admiration in his eyes for Preeti...

Their silence broke when they heard someone entering in garden..both came in their senses..and realised their hands are still holding..Preeti felt embarrassed and instantly took her hand away..

Accha me chalti hu...bahot der hi gayi hai..she said hesitantly..

Pandit..me tumhe ghar chhod du bike pe..Sameer ki bike aaj mere pass hai..tum chaho to me tumhe drop kar Sakta hu..

Nahi nahi..mere pass cycle hai me chali jaungi.thank you...saying this she went from there.

Pandit went behind her..she stopped near her cycle and shouts...arey ye kisne Kiya...Abhi jab ayi thi tab to thik thi ye cycle..ab achanak puncture kaise ho gayi...

Pandit saw her cycle punctured and saw if someone was there...who can do this..he thought. After sometime he smiled and asked Preeti again...tum Kaho to tumhe bike pe chhod du ghar pe..

Preeti thought for a while and nodded in yes..as she has no other way as it was already late...pandit said tum ruko. Me bike leke Ata hu..

He came and stopped near Preeti and asked her to sit..she was hesitant but sat quietly.

Pandit felt so happy. He saw mirror and smiled seeing someone and started his bike..

Wondering who was there.. who did that..who punctured her cycle. To whom pandit was smiling.

Yes...it was Munna he punctured her cycle so that she and pandit can go on bike..akhir dost hote kisliye hai...

Edited by VeebafanSonam - 7 years ago

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Read part 3 and 4 together... her efforts for his number were cute... liked the conversation between them. 😃

And next part... she obviously has the right to know the truth... I loved the cycle tyre puncture trick😉

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Sonam

@VeebafanSonam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Read part 3 and 4 together... her efforts for his number were cute... liked the conversation between them. 😃
And next part... she obviously has the right to know the truth... I loved the cycle tyre puncture trick😉

Thanks...

I don't want them to get lovey dovey all of a sudden...

First they will have to know each other...that's y very less romantic scenes...

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

This was nice😃

Last part was a bouncer yaar.. Chenu chaa gya aaj😎

Update soon Sonam

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Sonam

@VeebafanSonam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Anjali33
This was nice😃
Last part was a bouncer yaar.. Chenu chaa gya aaj😎

Update soon Sonam

Hehehehe..thanks...

Jaise ponga chenu Ko help karta hai waise chenu bhi ponga bhi bhi karega...

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Sonam

@VeebafanSonam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Part 5

Pandit and preeti started their first bike ride. There was awkward silence in between two of them..Pandit somehow was happy seeing preeti is with him on bike and Preeti other side was lost in her own thought thinking about whole bet thing..tears again starting rolling from her eyes..

Pandit was unaware of all this saw the mirror to look at preeti got the shock seeing her in tears again..he thought and stopped his bike on side of the road..

Pandit: Preeti ab bas bhi karo, aise roti rahogi to beemar pad jaogi..sab thik ho jayega...

Preeti: rou nahi to aur kya karu..meri behen, meri naina kitne dard me hai...sab tum logo ki galti hai..tum log bahot bure ho..

Saying this she fold her hands and looked away..

Pandit was sad seeing her like this...accha baba ye lo kaan pakade sorry bolta hu..ab to maaf karo..and he started doing uthak baithak..

Seeing this preeti could not help but started laughing...

Preeti: Bas bas ye sab nautanki band karo..aur chalo late ho raha hai..

Pandit was now in relief seeing her smiling.

Chalo tum hasi to sahi..aise hi haste raha karo..acchi lagti ho

Preeti blushed on his comment and smiled again..pandit's heart skipped a bit seeing her smiling on his request..she is so cute..he thought..

Pandit: accha yaha na aahe ek bahot hi achha chaiwala hai..me, sameer aur munna yahi aate hai kabhi kabhi chai peene...bahot hi badhiya chai banata hai wo..tumhe bura na lage aur time ho to kya hum waha chale..

Preeti's smile flattered listening to this..

" par pandit aise kaise? Ur waise bhi kafi late hog aye hai..ghar pe sab log wait kar rahe honge..

Pandit: arey please chalo na, jyada time nahi lagega..aur tumhara mood bhi accha ho jayega..pls chalo na..pls

And he made a cute pout face..

Preeti was still in deny mode finally agreed for their first unofficial Tea Date' as she could not able to say his pleading. "thik hai, chalo..lekin jaldi niklenge hum wahase, thik hai?

Pandit very happily said ha ha thik hai and asked her to sit on bike..

They were riding their way to tea stall when suddenly big hole on road came their way...pandit suddenly stopped his bike resulted preeti feel on his back. This makes pandit worried about preeti and he turned back to see her..

As soon as he turned their eyes locked with each other and both gets lost in each other eyes..

Their eyes spoke to each other for long time when one car passed by makes them come out of their long eye lock and akward closeness...

Pandit quickly turned and asked her is she ok..

Preeti who was lost in their close encounters and eyelock remain silent...her heartbeats increased...she was breathing heavily..

Pandit who was waiting for the answer realised she is lost..his situation was not different..both were facing difficulties while speaking..

Pandit again asked Preeti?

This makes preeti come out in senses and finally able to break the silence...

Ha ha me thik hu, chale..

Both started their journey again for their tea date...

Sorry for the small update...I m quite busy..i will update next part soon..

Precap: their Tea date and some more closeness