Preedit story..Dard pe Marham...pyar ka- part 5 updated (19th April)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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So m trying my hands in writing..I have written a story here..but could not complete it as I was busy..
My first is on my beloved Preedit

So story starts after Sameer entering naina's house.
Sameer: kya me andar aa jau..
No one replied and said nothing..Taiji came and greeted h smilingly and said..aao andar aao, isse apna hi ghar samjho beta..
Sameer: ji, Taiji
Naina gave annoying look and Sameer was blushing seeing naina..
Preeti wanted to watch TV but as always it's not working..
Preeti: ek to manhus TV chal nahi Raha , upar se ye Sameer as Gaya..looked irritatingly to Sam
Sam: hi Preeti kya hua any problem?
Preeti: tumse matlab...apna kaam karo..and angrily tapping tv
Sam smiling: ohh..to TV kaam nahi Kar raha hai...me kuch madat kar do..if u don't mind
Preeti: tum kya karoge, pehele hi itna sabkuch kar chuke ho..me kar lungi
Sam: arey pls dekhne to do kya hua hai..baju ho jao..me dekhta hu
Preeti annoyingly moved and gave way to Sam
Sam: after checking TV arey TV me kuch problem nahi hai lagta hai antena me issue hai..me dekhta hu..
He was about to leave Rakesh came there
Rakesh: ae ameerjade kya waqt barbad kar rahe ho, jao aur Arjun ki seva karo..aaya bada TV repair karne wala..aur ha Preeti tum door raho isse..samjhi ab jao yaha se balo ki dukan
Preeti's face fell down and Sameer noticed..he left from thr
Naina: arey Preeti Jane de na, Apne AAP thik ho jayega ye TV chal ab
Suddenly Munna and Pandit came thr.
Naina (angrily) tum dono yaha kya kare rahe ho..
MP: wo nanaji ne kuch saman bheja hai sammer ke liye wohi dene aaye the..Sameer kaha hai..
Naina: wo Arjun bhaiya ke kamre me hai..
MP went to Arjun's room and gave the stuff to sameer
They were leaving when sameer stops them and asked them to help him getting TV antenna repair..Munna and pandit could not say no as Sameer was requesting them
Mp went up and was checking antena..
Munna: pandit tu neeche Jake CHK kar TV chalu ho Raha hai ki nahi..me yaha dekhta hu
Saying ok pandit left from thr and came
Naina left from thr and Preeti was sitting on chair with sad face staring to TV
Pandit came inside and stand infront of Preeti
Preeti: kya hai..naina nahi hai aur Sameer andar hai..shout angrily
Pandit: arey na na sipahi ki behen, na to mujhe Naina se milna hai na Sameer se..wo to Sameer ne kaha TV chal nahi Raha to hum log chk kar rahe the..kya tum dekhogi TV chalu hua ke nahi
Preeti's face suddenly lighten up hearing Pandit's words..
She quickly get up and ran towards TV..
Pandit was seeing her and wondering..
Pandit: Kamal ki ladki hai yaar, uske ghar me itna kaand hi Raha hai aur isko TV ki padi hui hai..
Preeti: ha ha...waa..TV chalu ho Gaya...
Pandit went outside and shouts to Munna
Munna TV chalu ho Gaya, neeche aa ja..
Pandit came inside and saw Preeti being so happy and jumping with joy..
Waise tum mujhe thank you bol Sakti ho..mujhe Bura nahi lagega..
PREETI: oye jyada hero banne ki koshish mat karo...tumhare dost ne Jo Arjun bhaiya ke sath Kiya hai na uske Baad tumhe thank you nahi thappad marne chahiye..
Pandit in angry tone: oh tum bhi jyada heroin mat bano..Sameer ke kuch nahi Kiya hai..jo bhi hua wo ek accident that..samjhi..yaar ye Sameer bhi na..bola tha Mene koi jarurat nahi hai Inka TV repair karne ka..but usko kaha samaj ata hai..kuch logo Ko to thank you bolne me bhi attitude dikhana hota hai..
Preeti: kya. Kya kaha tumne..phir se bolo..
Pandit kuch nahi..bye..
Munna came limping and called pandit
Pandit saw him limping ran towards him..
PANDIT: arey Munna kya hua..
Munna: arey yaar antena ke chakkar neeche gir gaya.bahot Dard ho Raha hai yaar.
Pandit looked angrily to Preeti and said
Chal Munna yahase, medical me Jake dawai le lete hai tere liye..waise bhi yaha kisko padi hai ham gire hame chot Lage..chal


Preeti felt bad seeing munna..afterall they are helping her only..
She thought..
Both Munna and pandit was about to leave Preeti called Munna.
Arey ruko..me dawai de deti hu..aise bahar jaoge to Dard aur badh jayega..baitho me ayi Abhi..
Preeti went inside and bring lotion for Munna
She handed over lotion to pandit and said
Lo tum hi lagao Apne dost ko Marham..
Pandit angrily took the lotion from her..while taking their hands touched each other.
Both felt akward..both stood still with their hand touching each other..Preeti felt uncomfortable and lowered her gaze..while pandit was stunned and staring her..an unknown smile appears on his lips.. Preeti again saw him and found him staring her Continusly..both were lost in each other..lost in their own world..
Munna who was limping noticed this and smiled...to break the silence Munna coughed and said
Ab ghoorna band ho Gaya ho to koi mujhe Marham lagayega..
Preeti and pandit came into senses and felt akward..Preeti felt uncomfortable and ran from there giving pandit lotion and a lil smile..pandit stood still watching her running with smile and followed her with his eyes..
Munna: oye Ashiq, thodasa dost ko bhi dekh lo..ab Ashiqui ho gayi to chale..
Pandit smiled and applied Marham oh munna's leg..
Munna was smiling seeing his single kameena dost like Ashiq Majnu..and pandit was smiling reminding about Preeti.
Both left from their..

I hope u all liked it..comments and criticism welcome..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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So cute yaar... it's awesome 😃👏
I wish aisa kuchh ho jaye show mein bhi... Preeti is really an underutilized character... I've always felt... she can be an asset to our samaina 😃

Munna fell down... I loved it 😉😆

Sorry Munna you fell down and I laughed😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's awesome
Preeti's love for TV is what I adore😆
Munna sabki Jodi bana dega😎
Update soon n plzz unki ladai na krwao..we want a Majnu Pandit
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Posted: 7 years ago
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How cute! I love the fact that Munna was hovering in the background and momentarily forgot his pain to tease Pandit about Preeti. And Preeti going shy just like her filmy characters might do!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2
Next day
sameer was doing al household works in Agarwal house..he went to Arjun's room and tried to feed him breakfasy but Arjun got angry and threw the plate away..and shouts on Sameer..asked him to get out of his room..Naina and Preeti came running to see what happened and shocked to see all the food on ground..Naina looked at sameer who was sad with behaviour of Arjun..Naina and Preeti too dint liked it..
Bela Chachi came thr with broom and asked Sameer to clean the mess..Naina was shocked. She tried to cover up and said,
Chachiji me kar lungi,waise bhi inn bade logo Ko kaha aata hoga ye Sab..and looked at sameer.
Sameer looked at Naina and said..
Nahi ye Sab Mene Kiya hai to saaf bhi me hi karunga..he took the broom from Naina and started cleaning the floor. Naina could not see it..she felt bad..Preeti too dint liked the scene created by Arjun..
Sameer was cleaning the floor when Munna and pandit arrived thr..seeing Sameer doing all this they get shocked...both became angry and looked at Naina disguised..
Munna: Sameer ye kya kar Raha hai..ha..kya hai ye Sab..
Pandit: ha yaar Sameer in Sab kamo ke liye Bulaya hai kya tujhe yaha..ha..tumhe Arjun ki seva karni thi. Na ki Agarwal pariwar me jhadu phochha...tu yaha pe Naukar banke nahi aaya hai yaar..
Sameer: yaar mujhe jo karna hai wo mujhe karne do aur tum log jao yaha se..me kar lunga..
Munna: nahi yaar Sameer..ye Sab kaam tumhara nahi hai..chal uth aur chal yahase...bhad me gayi teri seva..chal ab bas..
Pandit: ha yaar sameer..Munna Sahi bol Raha hai..ek to kuch galti na hoke bhi tum Saja bhugat rahe ho..upar se koi tumhare liye kuch bol nahi Raha yaha..hum tumhe aise nahi dekh sakte yaar..kiskiko to maza AA Raha hoga ye Sab dekh ke..Haina..
And he looked at Naina angrily.. Naina's eyes were facing growing by this time..she was feeling bad..
Sameer: yaar tum log jao na yahase..mujhe apna kaam karne do..
Munna: nahi hum Kahi nahi jayenge..aaj hum tumhe yahase leke jaynge..bas bahot Gaya ab..ab aur nahi..
Pandit: dekh yaar Sameer mt abu me jo bhi hua uske liye saza thik hai par Bina kisi galti ke ye Sab.
Sameer,Naina and Preeti were shocked..
Sameer: bas kar yaar pandit...ab iske age aur kuch nahi..tumhe meri Kasam..jao tum yahase...
Both Munna and pandit looked angrily at Naina..
Munna: sipahi tum ye thik nahi kar Rahi ho...Sameer ki koi galti nahi hai..
Pandit: ek Nirdosh Ko Saja deke bahot maza AA Raha hai Na Naina..dekh Lena. Pachhtaogi tum ek din..yaad rakhna..
Preeti who was standing and listening all this quietly sensed something wrong is happening as Munna and pandit saying this with so much confidence that Sameer is not guilty..she looked at pandit..who was angry..
Munna and pandit: achha Sameer chalte hai..sham komilte hai..
Pandit noticed Preeti looking at him with all confused face..there were so many questions in her eyes..she wanted to talked to panidt on this..he noticed all that and understood.. without saying a word to Preeti both Munna and Pandit went from thr..
Preeti: yar kuch to gadbad hai..ye log jarur kuch chhupa rahe hai..Mt Abu me kuch to hua hai..muje pata karna padega...
Muje pandit se baat karni padegi..par kab..kya karu yaar..kuch samaj nahi aa Raha..

She started thinking about it and went from thr..
Edited by VeebafanSonam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice!!! It's coming along really well.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2 updated
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

So cute yaar... it's awesome 😃👏

I wish aisa kuchh ho jaye show mein bhi... Preeti is really an underutilized character... I've always felt... she can be an asset to our samaina 😃

Munna fell down... I loved it 😉😆

Sorry Munna you fell down and I laughed😆


Thanks😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

It's awesome

Preeti's love for TV is what I adore😆
Munna sabki Jodi bana dega😎
Update soon n plzz unki ladai na krwao..we want a Majnu Pandit


Thanks...Preeti is adorable😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Pandit blurted out!!
But isi bahane we'll get PreeDit scene
Update soon

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