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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's amazing
If u didn't try writing till now then I request u to try writing sone SamAina stories..u write so well

It can't be caleed OS or FF but we can add it in d 'other stories' category of d index😊 DD's story is added in that
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandita123

Simply loved this piece zulekha. How beautifully you have portraited sameer's feelings. Do continue.👏

Thank you Nandita😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Splendid...as we all felt we always knew what Naina's feelings have been at every point thru the VO...but for Sameer we recently started understanding him thru the VO...awesome thought by the makers here...and by you too...I enjoyed this piece...it seemed really credible...what Sameer would actually write...I urge you to write for some previous major episodes too...like the paper stealing, the bet, their first meet, his b'day, other dates...which ever you prefer n when u get time

Thank you Samaina...😊
And yes I am planning to write diary entries for many of the special episodes...Will start soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dr.Don

Hi Zaroon,

Wow! What a read!
Very different from other stories as someone wrote a story for the first time based on Sameer's thoughts and feelings - by his voiceover.

Keep writing this series, from the point of view of Sameer.

Suggestion: You can cover all the major points (Where we have heard Naina's POV in the show), and add Sameer's POV/Thoughts also in those situations.

It will make a great read and we will get to know the parallel thoughts of Sameer to every situation that has already been explained by Naina in the show!

Also, it is difficult to write in Hindi using English Alphabets. It takes a lot of time and proofreading to make it perfect or else many readers lose the essence of the story. And it evident that you have spent a lot of time and hard work in creating this first story. Kudos to you.

Keep writing the series.

Cheers!

Hi Dr.Don, please let me know your name. I'm Zulekha.

Thank you for a lovely comment. I decided to write in Hindi so that the readers can connect more to it. I'm glad you appreciated my effort.
And yes soon I will come up with more diary entries of special incidents...Hope you will love them just like this one😳😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow very nicely written!! U mirror his feelings so well
! Look forward to more of these reads!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mehraan

Wow Zulu🤗...!!

Very beautifully penned down ...Can imagine my boy writing xactly like tis!!..Cmon will want more of his writings now..Dnt stop..Pls continue!

Hey Meher...I m glad you loved it...
And thanks for calling me Zulu...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

It is amazing dear 👏

Beautifully written!

Thank you Anmol😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Jes...

Awww! Z such a great idea. you should definitely continue. and this piece was beautifully written! ❤️

Thank you Jes...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancyrio90

Wow very nicely written!! U mirror his feelings so well

! Look forward to more of these reads!

Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

It's amazing

If u didn't try writing till now then I request u to try writing sone SamAina stories..u write so well

It can't be caleed OS or FF but we can add it in d 'other stories' category of d index😊 DD's story is added in that

Thank you Anjali...stories ka toh pata nahi...but as you all liked the diary entries I will continue with it...

And yes I will categorize it as other stories

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