Posted:
Hi Zaroon,
Wow! What a read!
Very different from other stories as someone wrote a story for the first time based on Sameer's thoughts and feelings - by his voiceover.
Keep writing this series, from the point of view of Sameer.
Suggestion: You can cover all the major points (Where we have heard Naina's POV in the show), and add Sameer's POV/Thoughts also in those situations.
It will make a great read and we will get to know the parallel thoughts of Sameer to every situation that has already been explained by Naina in the show!
Also, it is difficult to write in Hindi using English Alphabets. It takes a lot of time and proofreading to make it perfect or else many readers lose the essence of the story. And it evident that you have spent a lot of time and hard work in creating this first story. Kudos to you.
Keep writing the series.
Cheers!
Fan Fictions
Anupamaa
