Samaina FF : HUM TUM Note on pg.64 feb 20,19 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Fantastic update

Kise bhejenge guess krna mushkil lagta h..shayad Sameer ho sakta h🤔
Update soon


Hehe nyc guess.. let's c kon aata hai.. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: lakku19

Wow great update..

Loved reading it.
Please write more for next update..
Eagerly waiting for next update.


Owww sure.. I try writing more for every update.. but the greatest barrier is time.. koi na ll try..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Loved their library session a lot... and surely Sam hi aayega uski madad karne😃

Story pace is fine dear... no need to speed up 😊


Thnx dear😊
Your comment means alot every time.. loovvyaa😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
very nice.. loved it.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Very cute library scene!

Rickshaw nahi hai toh kya? Sam ka bike kis din kaam aayega? ;)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Hey - I have read and re-read this FF so many times... It's absolutely delightful to read and so positive. You have completely retained the simple charm that attracted us to YUDKBH and Samaina... 👏
Please do keep writing more... I will look forward to read your next update soon!

As for the help - I wish with all my heart it's Sameer who helps her... A bike ride at least in your FF if not in the actual show...

My imagination below - just an attempt (I felt so happy on reading your latest update that this popped up in my mind)... Hope you don't mind this...

I can simply imagine Sameer hesitantly offering her a ride and blushing while doing so... And Naina being all shy and happy at the same time but doesn't accept his offer but he doesn't leave her alone until she finds a ride home... or in any way I just want Sameer to make sure she reaches home safely... This would go in sync with the concern he has for her...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: msdfan

very nice.. loved it.. 👍🏼


Thnx dear😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Very cute library scene!

Rickshaw nahi hai toh kya? Sam ka bike kis din kaam aayega? ;)


Hehe ab bike hai to kaam bh aaegi hi😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hey - I have read and re-read this FF so many times... It's absolutely delightful to read and so positive. You have completely retained the simple charm that attracted us to YUDKBH and Samaina... 👏

Please do keep writing more... I will look forward to read your next update soon!

As for the help - I wish with all my heart it's Sameer who helps her... A bike ride at least in your FF if not in the actual show...

My imagination below - just an attempt (I felt so happy on reading your latest update that this popped up in my mind)... Hope you don't mind this...

I can simply imagine Sameer hesitantly offering her a ride and blushing while doing so... And Naina being all shy and happy at the same time but doesn't accept his offer but he doesn't leave her alone until she finds a ride home... or in any way I just want Sameer to make sure she reaches home safely... This would go in sync with the concern he has for her...


Thnxxx dear for appreciation 😊
N yes nyc imagination.. I ll keep it in my mind😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 12

Naina was getting tense now because no rikshaw was coming.. sameer who was in parking lot started his bike n came to gate. He saw the tensed naina waiting for rikshaw. He just stood there watching her. 5 mins flew but no sign of any rikshaw. Naina saw sameer but didn't responded. Time was going n naina was getting more n more late. Seeing her so much worried n seeing no option sameer went to naina.

Sam - naina kafi der ho gyi..Sham b hone wali hai..Tum bura na mano to me tumhe ghar chod du?
Naina was surprised😲.. siting on boy's bike was a big deal then.
Naina - nahii..Me wait kr leti hu.. abi mil jaega kuch na kuch..
Sam (in mind) - kitni ziddi h ye ladki.. khair muje kya..Krne do wait
Theek h.. me ja rha hu bye
N he started his bike n went away..

Naina - hawww😲 kaisa ladka h? Akeli ldki ko aise kaise chod ke ja sakta hai? Bhgwan madad kro na..
Time was passing.. she started walking now in hope ki aage kahin kuCh mil jae but no..
Sameer chla to gya but he was restless.. on mid he stopped his bike
Damn..Pta nh naina ko rikshaw mili hogi ya nh? Ye ldki itni ziddi kyu h?😡 Or muje kyu uski itni chinta ho rh h? Wo principal sir ki beti h isliye haina.. muje ek br check kr lena chahiye..

Convincing himself he turned his bike again n went to school side...
Naina's face lost color now..She was feeling tired🤢..Suddenly she saw sameer coming..Her face lighten up..😊
Sameer came .. stopped bike in front of naina.. showing full attitude - baitho..
She was in dilemma now.. sit or not..
Seeing no reaction from her side.. sameer again said - naina baitho...Me pas pura din nh hai.. this time it was like a order..😆

Having no choice reluctantly naina sat on bike.. but she was very conscious about her position like no touching him make a proper distance..
Seeing her finally sat sameer smile little😛.. this was first time when a girl was sitting on his bike .. he was feeling happy.. 😃

On the other side for naina also it was first time to sit with a guy..
Naina (in mind) - kitni bhav khata h ye insan.. pyar se b to bol skta tha..Huhh.. but ye sirf mere liye wapis aya..Meri madad kr rha hai..Muje kam se kam thankyou to bolna chahiye na...🥱

Breaking her thoughts sameer asked - chaLen ??
Naina - ohh haan.. chlo..
N he started his bike with low speed.. he knew naina was uncomfortable.. but he was kinda enjoying her compny..😉
Naina - wo.. sameer... THANKYOU..⭐️
Listening her thnx made sameer shock n in shocked😲 he stopped the bike.. in process naina hand held sameer's shoulder.😳. eye lock..❤️

Kya yhi pyar hai...
Haan yhi pyar hai...❤️

Breaking the eye lock..Sameer asked - kya kaha tumne?
Naina - THANKYOU.. ab br br nh bolugi.. ek br me hi sunlo.. n turned her face
Sameer laughed..😆 gosh she is so cute..

Sam - welcome miss topper.. n tum aram se baith sakti ho..
Naina - pr me to aram se hi baithi hu..
Sam - dikh rha h kitne aram se baithi ho.. abi brake lagaya to girne wali thi.. (teasing smile)

Naina got lil conscious now.. she was shy to held him for support..
Sam - naina.. (looking in her eyes) tum mujh par bharosa kar sakti ho..

Seeing the concern n trust naina again got lost in his eyes...Sameer also got lost in her beautiful eyes... their trance broke A truck passed near by..
Naina - hmm theek hai...😊

This time she held sameer shoulder for support.. a sudden current passed from their bodies.. both felt a connection but not able to understand it..
Found her comfortable now sameer started the bike..Both were feeling happy🥳 from inside.. it was a beautiful ride. Sometime naina checkout sam face in bike mirror n sometime sameer.. it was a distance of max 20 min but aisa laga ki pal bhar me beet gya ho..

Sameer safety dropped her home.. n naina thanked him for his help.. bhot kuch kehna chahte the par shabd nh mil rhe the.. a part of both didn't want this ride to end..
Sam - ok kal milte hai..
Naina - hmm biee.. n she went inside.. n sam back to his home..

Whole night both were unable to sleep.. they were remembering the incidents.. kitna kuch ho gya ek din me..

Sam - aaj phli br koi ladki meri bike pe baithi.. kbi nh socha tha wo ladki naina hogi..Jbse usse mila hu har waqt kyu usike bare me sochta hu? Kya ho rha h muje? Kyu uski itni parwah ho rh thi aaj ... Or jb use ghar choda to usse durr jane ka mann kyu nh kiya..😕

On other side..
Naina n preeti were on same bed.. she told preeti about whole incident..
Preeti - sameer bhot accha ldka hai haina..😉
Naina (lost ) - haan..
Preeti smiled.. naina muje lgta hai tujse or sameer ko dosti kr leni chahiye.. kitna ladte ho yrr tum dono
Naina - dosti ??? 😲
Dosti was a big word then.. it was not common to do friendship with a boy..
Naina - tu pagal to nh ho gyi ? Dosti wo b sameer se? Itna b accha nh h wo..
Preeti - pr parwah to krta hai teri.. tbi tuje ghar tak chodne aaya..Kon krta hai kisike liye itna aj kl.. muje to lgta hai wo tujse...
Naina - mujse ??
Preeti - tujhse... Ab muje neend aa rh hai.. gud night.😆 N she slept smiling.. somewhere she knew wat cooking between them but she wanted ki naina herself got to know about her feelings...

Naina - ye preeti ki bacchi bh na.. adhuri bat bolke so gyi.. sameer mujse kya??? Uhhuuu ab sari rat muje neend nh aaegi.. preeti ki bacchi tuje to me subh dekh lungi..Huhh😡😃
N lied down to wait for sleep.. but ab to neendein udne ka waqt aa gya tha.. to uss rat neend na sameer ko aai na naina ko.. dono unn sawalo ka jawab dhundne ki koshish kr rhe the jinka jawab unhe pta to tha par wo samajhna nh chah rhe the..😉😛

Note :- I hope it's long update.. n I hope I didn't disappoint u guys with bike ride sequence.. those who want pm can tell me.. I ll do from now.. thnkuu n happy rose day..❤️

Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago

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