Samaina FF : HUM TUM Note on pg.64 feb 20,19 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Wow dear...lovely piece...u bought out the cute innocent bit out in thia story...I love it yaar! N best part is both Sameer and Naina have fallen in love with each other but are not realizing it...fab...I'm waiting for more on this story


Thnx dear 😊 m happy u liked it.. it happens many times that h dnt understand your emotions..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Kareeb to ayenge..tumko lana pdega unko kareeb😆

Update soon yaar


Lolzz u gave me the FEEL with your kareeb wali line😳
Ofcrs aaege..Jld hi😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice update dear😃👏

Both of them are unable to understand what and why they're feeling for the other one... they have started feeling good in each other's company...😃
Update soon dear😃


Sure dear😊 bss tym nh lgta otherwise me daily update krdu hihi😆
Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: lakku19

Wow.. I read all the parts together..

Very cute update..
Really enjoyed loving all the parts. Please write more for each part. Waiting for next update.


Thnx u liked the sweet n slow story.. yupp ll update soon😊
Means alot yours appreciation 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Fantastic as usual ... Pls update soon



Surely will..After all this week gonna b valentine week..😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: REA_33

Good FF. Beautiful Story.


Thnx yrr.. n yeah it's sunday so I ll update today..Pkka..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
PART 11

In Library

Naina was already there discussing with shanti mam regarding debate..It was inter school hindi debate competition which held In other school. Topic was TV idiot box hai ya nahi..

After few minutes sameer entered with his bag in full swag, flowing hair.. naina's heartbeat start increasing as he was coming close..Sam eyes were fixed on naina.. she was looking so cute with that nervous expression..🥱

Mam - sameer maine naina ko debate ka topic bta diya hai.. naina tumhe sb samjha degi.. fir b kuch madad chahiye to kal puch lena.. gud luck..😊

Sam - ji mam..Thnx.. n shanti mam left from there..
It was only sameer n naina was present there with their raising heartbeat every second..
To cover the awkwardness naina started conversation..

Naina (without looking in sameer eyes) - wo mam ne topic bta diya h or kal tak hume prepare krna hai.. n she sat on chair..
Silently sameer also settled on side chair..
Sam - toh naina.. topic kya hai?
Giving book to sam..She said - topic hai ki tv idiot box hai ya nahi..
Sam - ohhh that's gud topic.. to tumhe kya lgta hai.. tv idiot box hai ya nh?
Naina - umm me to pura din tv dekh sakti hu..Muje to nh lgta ki tv koi idiot box hai blki wo to hme desh duniya se Jodta hai..Hmara manoranjan krta hai..

Sameer smiled😊 listening her.. - pr me to kbi kbi hi tv dekhta hu..Hmesha hostel me rha to koi interest bh nh hai..
Naina was like kaisa h ye insan jise tv dekhne me interest nh hai.. 😕
Naina - to kya tum films b nh dekhte?
Sam - dekhta hu.. pr VCR pe.. kbi kbi hostel me hum chup ke dost ke ghar pe jake films dekha krte the..
Naina - wahhh kitna mja ata hai na.. me or preeti b bhot br chup kr tv dekhte hai or kai b to VCR kiraye pr lake sari rat picture dekhte hai.. n she went on n on.. describing their night fun..
N here sameer was getting lost in her antics..In her talks..In her smiling eyes..😳

Kyu kbi chupke se mudke tuje dekh lu..
Kyu tere kareeb hi ab to me rahu..❤️

Naina saw sameer eyes fixed on her..She felt conscious..N stopped talking.. but still sam was lost in her..
Naina - sameerrr
Now sam come in real world..
Sam (in mind) - sameer pitega.. naina ko ghoomna band kr
Sam - han wo me bss topic ke bare me sochte sochte kho gya tha
Naina - ohh... She seem convinced with his answer..
Toh ye decide ho gya ki tv idiot box nh hai . Hum isi pr kaam krege
Sam - theek hai. Me kuch books dekh leta hu..

N she stood up n went to check out some books thinking he ll divert his mind from naina..
After a while they were ssly doing work n prepared the notes.. naina got to know sameer is a intelligent boy..
Sam saw the time m found it's 4 pm
Aree itna late ho gya.. pta hi nh chla..

Naina - han ab chlna chahiye..Baki kal kr lege..
Sam - hmm theek hai..
N both got up but accidentally naina foot slipped . She was about to fell but sameer hold her hand..
Concern was written on sameer face..Seeing that concern in sameer eyes naina eyes got lost in his..

Rahiman rahiman preet re..
Koi na jane ye reet re..
Ye unn dino ki bat hai..
Ye unn dino ki bat hai..

Slowly sameer made her stand but naina was still in her dreamland.
S - naina... (Tapped her little on shoulder) Naina..tum theek toh ho?
Coming out from trance - haan.. me theek hu..
S - okk bie..Kal milte hai..
N - bie.. after sam left naina seeing her her hand which sam hold .. she recalled the moment just happened.. it was first time that some boy has touched her.. she was feeling weird sensation in her body..
To herself - muje aisa kyu mehsoos ho rha h sameer ke choone se.. usne to bs muje girne se bachaya haina.. pr uski aankhe to keh rh thi.. jaise ki...
Naina tu pgl ho gyi h..Chl ghar late ho rha hai..
Hey bhagwan aaj to papa ke sath aai thi ab rikshaw se jana pdega.. pta nh milegi b ya nhi..

Sameer firstly went to drink water.. he washed his face but when he close his naina eyes her smile was coming in front of him again n again..

Aankhe bnd krte hi naina ka chehra kyu samne aa rha hai..aaj jb wo girne lgi to kyu itna darr gya me?

Lost in thoughts he went to parking lot..
Naina was standing on gate..Looking here n there..Waiting for rikshaw but there was just empty road..
She was getting tense now - Aaj to pkka mar gyi.. kuch nh mila toh paidal jana pdega..Hey bhgwan kisi ko to bhejo madad krne...


Precap - So kise bhejenge bhagwan naina ki madad krne? Guess guess..😉
Here it's 11th part guys.. plz comment n tell me if I need to speed up the story..

Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Fantastic update
Kise bhejenge guess krna mushkil lagta h..shayad Sameer ho sakta h🤔
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Wow great update..
Loved reading it.
Please write more for next update..
Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Loved their library session a lot... and surely Sam hi aayega uski madad karne😃
Story pace is fine dear... no need to speed up 😊

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