SaIna FF: Aakhir ho gaya na..; Last part on Pg 44 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Okay Manisha Di first of all I just wanna say that are you a fortune teller ?? I still remembered the os you had written once that Naina helps Sameer's Nanu , it was shown in the show too, then when I read the update today you mentioned sameer and naina's conversation regarding trust and that was shown in yesterday's episode 👏 You are amazing . I so loved this update . The antakshiri sequence was so I wanted. This update was perfect. I love good and bad Sameer.
I am waiting for more.
Thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Thanks a lot Ayesha for liking the update...it is my favourite part😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Hey Doc..dats a beautiful update

Naina trusts Sameer so much..just d thought of bet revelation is heartbreaking
Sameer's dream😆 sapne mein bhi thappad!!
U very nicely showed Sameer's dilemma

Thanx for d PM.. update soon


Sameer's dilemma is what we are waiting to see...hope we all get some monologue in the show...would love it😃😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

"We are little blind as we want to be." 😊

Beautiful.👏 The way he was restless and she too in foul mood.They really find a sort of equilibrium with each other.No pretence and only heart-to-heart conversation.
The star gazing.That's so magical to visualize even.😳 His inhibitions(all thanks to the slap) and her tears somewhere make them more intense than plain romance.Must say you have brilliantly penned that portion.👏

The war of Jeckyll and Hyde.Yes.Thats how we are.We are wild,blind ,beast and untamed.But then there is an angel inside too.Pure,guiding and taming us not to be superficial.And there lies the beauty.Sameer is the untamed wild breeze tamed by the eversmiling angelic Naina.And this does tricks.Good scene that was and I was surprised that this scene could actually be written.😃

Over and all this was simply splendid.
Wanted to give a long review.Hope its not too long.😆😆
Thanks for the pm and update soon.
Keep Smiling and Keep Writing.😊


I loved your review Minu😃
@red...I loved these lines from you...I'm good at writing such stuff😉😛
Just kidding...I'm so thankful that you liked it and gave an amazing review to this part...Thanks😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Awesome update Cant wait for the next part now 😳


Thanks Mansi...I'll be updating soon dear😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: misha.as

Very very very Nice Di.. .. Finally Sammer realised he is something wrong... Somewhere he is playing with Naina emotions... Der aaye Durust aaye...
Very nice Di.. . Awesome...



Thanks Misha...I just wanted to present a scenario where he tries to figure out what can be the result of this nonsense bet...I'm glad that you liked it😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: mishkatfanfrevr

rukko abhi aadha hi padha hai..some assignment to complete..fir aakar padhoongi good one evil one waala part..sooo excited to read part two...the way u write i feel the write up shld not end at all ..its that good👏


Thanks dear for your appreciation...you read it whenever you get time...no hurries...take your time dear...take care😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: worldequalsyou

Thanks for the awesome update

Loved it
Naina is such a sweetheart she is too lovely,
Woh kitni trust karti hai sameer par but sameer i hope he realise whatever he is doing is just worng.
Can't wait for ur next update :)


He is in this dilemma bcoz of her goodness only...he'll soon realise his mistake...atleast in my fiction😆😉
I'll soon be updating😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Very nice update 👍🏼
What a twist that was 😆😆
I really thought it was reality 😆😆
Then star viewing scene was cute 😳
And banter between evil one and good one was very nice 👍🏼
Continue soon!


Thanks lot Anmol😃
The star viewing scene is one of my favourite😃
I'm so glad that you liked the banter between the good and evil😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Thanks Prizi and Muskaan for liking the update😃
I'll soon be updating😃

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