SaIna FF: Aakhir ho gaya na..; Last part on Pg 44

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misha.as

@misha.as

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Very very very Nice Di.. .. Finally Sammer realised he is something wrong... Somewhere he is playing with Naina emotions... Der aaye Durust aaye...
Very nice Di.. . Awesome...

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mishkatfanfrevr

@mishkatfanfrevr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

omg went close to her cheek but he recalled the slap he had received when he tried to kiss her hand...he made the fist by closing his fingers but his heart was melting seeing her tears...he just wished she stopped crying anyhow...omg n the ttotha tara distraction..omg u r a sweatheart such reaaall scenes..i can see randeep's acting n hear his voice u r a magician..y arent u with the cv teamm..👏

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mishkatfanfrevr

@mishkatfanfrevr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

rukko abhi aadha hi padha hai..some assignment to complete..fir aakar padhoongi good one evil one waala part..sooo excited to read part two...the way u write i feel the write up shld not end at all ..its that good👏

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Kusum

@worldequalsyou

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Thanks for the awesome update

Loved it

Naina is such a sweetheart she is too lovely,

Woh kitni trust karti hai sameer par but sameer i hope he realise whatever he is doing is just worng.

Can't wait for ur next update :)

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Very nice update 👍🏼

What a twist that was 😆😆

I really thought it was reality 😆😆

Then star viewing scene was cute 😳

And banter between evil one and good one was very nice 👍🏼

Continue soon!

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Lovely update!!!

Loved the way you beautifully expressed his inner turmoil and her faith! Do continue soon! 😃

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Part 1 :

Very nice start Manisha di 👏👏

I know when you start something, it's always a masterpiece ⭐️⭐️

I loved the sweater scene so much The way it had come up, it's like a cute romantic scene from Naina's side, and a bet winning scene from that of Sameer's !

But it's also clear from the very next scene that his vision is going to diminish and he will learn something very good and deep from this sweater !!!

Pandit has judged out what others are yet to realise and confirm ! Pandit is true to the reality that others are not indulging themselves with. The bet track is winning for no one but a lost to both Sameer and Naina after the disclosure and this is what Pandit has sensed and Sameer is not able to see.

Lovely start and now going to the next one,

Sorry i am so late 😳

lovees ❤️

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Part 2 :

Lovely and very thoughtful of you Manisha di 🤗 🤗 🤗

many of the viewers would have imagine this track, but your vision has topped them all !!!

Loved to see a confused Sameer, after all he must also see the dim light of the life in bet. He had infused a current in himself with the idea what Pandit has said last. And this is what he is facing here. He is going through an inner turmoil and not able to judge what is right and what is not.

It was really nice to see a different Sameer today who is worried for Naina, who wants to wipe her tears, who needs her to stop crying 😃

Nice to see him talking with some sense and trying to give her a notion that he may not be a good boy 😳

Good and bad thoughts are making him vulnerable, and may be his good ones will make him realise his love for Nania first and other things later !

Thanks for this very beautifully penned down story in progress di 👏 👏

Loving it to the core and will be cherishing your write ups again and again 😃

Will wait for the next one, keep updating

Huggies ❤️

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Truth can't be left hidden!

Lovely start and beautiful progress Manisha, so sweet of ya ❤️ 🤗

I just wish Naina is not much hurt with Sameer's bet of saying the 3 words to him! Just a wish!

Pandit has realised from the very eyes of Naina, that it's her real love for him, but sameer will be able to understand this soon? Or the disclosure will break down Naina?

Lots of queries, with only one answer : am with you Manisha, am and will be much satisfied with whatever you will present to us with the next updates! 🤗

Cud see an excitement in Naina's eyes while giving him the sweater she knit. Cud see the rolling eyes of Sameer with the much satisfaction of his bet nearing a win. But what i cud see more is the way Pandit has seen the reality out of the fantasy!

True that sameer had grudges, true that his heart can't see tears in her eyes, true that he is there for her if she is in a mess, and that's for sure! But the bet thing will take him miles away from her, and that will be the most difficult path he will have to cross!

I liked his good and bad minds not letting him have a sound sleep! Cos he himself knows somewhere in the corner of his heart that he is doing wrong. he knows the outcome of the revelation, but he needs to go ahead as he is not sure of things coming up!

Fascinating enough ⭐️ Lovely narration, elucidating every scene capturing minute details and making the script so easy for us to understand!!!

Nice weave! Awe inspiring if we see an aspect of a dreadful journey ahead for both Naina and Sameer!

Thanks sweetheart, for this superb story in making! Luv ya so much!

🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Purely perfect,,, ⭐️👏

I so liked the dream sequence.. it has everything that we all have imagined.. too thoughtful Manisha dear... 👏👏

.he made the fist by closing his fingers but his heart was melting seeing her tears...he just wished she stopped crying anyhow.

This is what Sameer is in reality..??/ he has the upbringing of Nanu,,,n he cant see tears in the eyes of the one who is sad in front of him,,,😳

He has the limits of being a boy there.. he wants to do the needful but his manners are stopping him cos touching a dignified girl like Naina is not acceptable here.. !!!

Sameer looked at her surprised to see the trust that she has on him while inside he knew that he was doing everything for his bet only.

he has fears that Pandit has instilled,, he has the realisation that he is wrong...

n this is what surprising him that the trust she has.. that can be gone once she comes to know of him... the real him as of now.. !

use apni life se jaane mat do...rok lo use...shart ko bhool jaao...bhool jaao...bhool jaao Sameer...

he likes her cos she is too good,.. ! Man !!! He is disturbed cos he knows that Naina is too good for him n he might loose her once the bet matter is disclosed..

The inner agitation is killing him inside.. n he is restless.. !

I liked your way to include his good n bad thoughts to tell him what he is n what he must be .. !

Awesome.. Loved it.. n will be waiting to find more... !

Thanks n God bless.. !!!