Preeti Pandit TS: Wo Ek Din Last Part on Pg 5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor
Nice ending dear...
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks Ayesha...glad to know that you liked...this couple has so much potential in them...i hope its utilised😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata Dil Mera Kyon Pareshaan Hai
Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage Jaise Barson Ki Pehchaan Hai...

That's all I sum up from their awesome chemistry.Lovely update..👏 Btw Sameer ko uski Sasur se bada problem hai..😆😆 Pandit ne earrings gift kiye.. Haye! Iss couple ko to imagine karke hi I have started shipping them ...😳 Fantastic storyline...😃
Thank you for the pm and keep writing.

Thanks dear...we all are shipping for them actually...would love to see them together...thanks for appreciating my effort dear😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: daenerysnow
Wow loved your story on Pandit Preeti, well written and it felt realistic what you imagine their interactions to be like in the serial, you kept them close to their characters. Wish you could continue, would be nice to see how their relationship develops.

Thanks for your comment😊

I wont be continuing this as I had planned this to be a two shot only...hope you would understand...im glad that you found it nice...thanks once again😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: babita..
Nice to read the cute ever story on Pandit Preeti 👏👏
I loved their cute banters and their talks later, and their relation start developing !
Awesome narration made me viewing all the scenes and your own lines later summed up the theme and your take on the new pair ⭐️⭐️
Sameer and Naina story moved with theirs and the new pair gives him a chance to close on the bet through Pandit ! This lead to my new imagination as well 😳
Loved it all the way it started Manisha di 🤗
Thanks a lot for your write up, loved always and loving it again and again

Lovees ❤️

Thanks a lot Shona 😃

You know i wrote something like this for the first time and i had a tough time writing this...hope we get something like this in the show as well...Thanks a tonne sweetheart...God bless you😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Swatishubh
You steal the show Manisha 👏
Beautiful and simple cuteness with every angle of fun, banters, and thinking positively to the friendship just born! Pandit and Preeti are side characters, but I loved to see them as a pair! Hope to see them as same in the show shortly!
Good, healthy talk later gives an impression that they are so good at heart! Whatever came from you in this story, it's again a lovely read and purely a stupendous effort as usual Mainsha 👏
Luv ya for your takes and narrative parts, a skillful marvel, thanks a lot!
❤️ 🤗

Thanks a lot Bhabhi for your lovely comment...you are so good at this...please fulfil my wish of writing some fiction work...please please...Their chemistry can set the screen on fire with their tiffs and banters and we all are waiting for that day...hope we get it soon😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anmol333
Awesome update!
Whole picnic was awesome...
Preeti and pandit nok-jhok was great but mazak mazak me panga ho gaya tha but sab theek ho gaya 😃
Pandit's gesture was sweet.
Loved this TS 😊

Thanks Anmol...really sometimes jokes take a serious turn and thats what I tried to present...along with that i also tried to show that they are not bad at heart...I'm glad you all liked my effort😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.
Loved the update 😳
Beautifully written as always
Preeti-Pandit nok-jhok was really entertaining
Aww he gifted her a pair of earings.. so cute 😳
Thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of this dear 👍🏼
Thanks for the PM

Thanks dear...that earrings idea just came to my mind while writing the part...it was a last minute affair...I'm happy to see that it was loved by all of you😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Superbbb update ❤️Loved the way u showed PreeDit He gifted her earrings so sweet of him 😳sad it ended 😒

Thanks Mansi...gift idea was a last minute though...i m glad this worked well😛

Thanks once again dear😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: misha.as
Very nice starting Manisha Di... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 Bechari, Swati SatyaNarayan pooja ne popat kar diya...😆 😆 Great Preeti man Gayi... 😃 Or usse koi sak nhi Hua Naina ke dimag main Kya chal raha hai...😉 😛 Bike riding and Preeti cycling is too goood... 😛 😃 Bechara Pandit 😆 kabhi Sameer ki bike se gira diya jata hai 😆to kabhi Preeti ki cycle se gir jata hai... 😆 😆
Very nice to see them enjoying their companies...⭐️ 👏 😃
Specially Preeti and Pandit...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Their cute nok jok...😉 😛 😆 😃
Great Pandit ko lesson sikhne ko Mila...😃 Har wakt mazak nhi karna chahiye... 👍🏼 Kabhi kabhi mazak bhari par jata hai...🤔 Anyway All is well...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ And Pandit ka gift Dena really surprising and very cute...😉 ⭐️ 👏 😳
Very nice story Di...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Truly Awesome... ⭐️ 👏
Sorry I just read your story in one go and review bhi mix ho gaye to both parts ke review ek sath post kar diye..😔. Sorry...😔

Its ok MIsha...its ok if you posted for both the parts together...I am so glad that you liked the story...actually kabhi kabhi mazak bhaari pad jata hai😆

Yahan bhi kuch aisa hi hua😆