Preeti Pandit TS: Wo Ek Din Last Part on Pg 5

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

such a lovely update dear.. ⭐️👏

Kaun kab dil me jagah bana le pata nahi chalta

uske liye kabhi kabhi ek lamha hi bahut hota hai

Nice lines to give an outlook of Preeti Pandit initial friendship... interestingly becoming a good relation of the future... 😃

I liked your way of cute n fun convo between them,.,. n liked the way it progressed... 😳

You are so right Manisha... dosti marks dekh ke nahi,,, nature dekh ke ki jaati hai... 👏

Loved your take on this pair... keep writing more... !

Very nice n thoughtful effort,,, ⭐️

God bless,,,

Edited by bawaswift - 7 years ago

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Sonam

@VeebafanSonam

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

I wish tum te continue Karti...but anyways loved it...thanks👍🏼

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Perfect end to a cute story.

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Ayesha

@ayeshakapoor

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Nice ending dear...
Thanks for the pm.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata Dil Mera Kyon Pareshaan Hai
Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage Jaise Barson Ki Pehchaan Hai...

That's all I sum up from their awesome chemistry.Lovely update..👏 Btw Sameer ko uski Sasur se bada problem hai..😆😆 Pandit ne earrings gift kiye.. Haye! Iss couple ko to imagine karke hi I have started shipping them ...😳 Fantastic storyline...😃

Thank you for the pm and keep writing.

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daenerysnow

@daenerysnow

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Wow loved your story on Pandit Preeti, well written and it felt realistic what you imagine their interactions to be like in the serial, you kept them close to their characters. Wish you could continue, would be nice to see how their relationship develops.

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Nice to read the cute ever story on Pandit Preeti 👏👏

I loved their cute banters and their talks later, and their relation start developing !

Awesome narration made me viewing all the scenes and your own lines later summed up the theme and your take on the new pair ⭐️⭐️

Sameer and Naina story moved with theirs and the new pair gives him a chance to close on the bet through Pandit ! This lead to my new imagination as well 😳

Loved it all the way it started Manisha di 🤗

Thanks a lot for your write up, loved always and loving it again and again

Lovees ❤️

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

You steal the show Manisha 👏

Beautiful and simple cuteness with every angle of fun, banters, and thinking positively to the friendship just born! Pandit and Preeti are side characters, but I loved to see them as a pair! Hope to see them as same in the show shortly!

Good, healthy talk later gives an impression that they are so good at heart! Whatever came from you in this story, it's again a lovely read and purely a stupendous effort as usual Mainsha 👏

Luv ya for your takes and narrative parts, a skillful marvel, thanks a lot!

❤️ 🤗