Preeti Pandit TS: Wo Ek Din Last Part on Pg 5

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Anisha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Loved the update 😳
Beautifully written as always
Preeti-Pandit nok-jhok was really entertaining
Aww he gifted her a pair of earings.. so cute 😳
Thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of this dear 👍🏼
Thanks for the PM

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Mansi

@Vampire2468

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Superbbb update ❤️Loved the way u showed PreeDit He gifted her earrings so sweet of him 😳sad it ended 😒

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Preeti and pandit are cutest lub it

Great job yr..

Ik mereliye bhi achi si likh do story

Pyari si cute si

On shefali n arjun..

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Preeti and pandit are cutest lub it
Great job yr..
Ik mereliye bhi achi si likh do story
Pyari si cute si
On shefali n arjun..

Sure Nida...will think and write one soon😊

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misha.as

@misha.as

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Very nice starting Manisha Di... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 Bechari, Swati SatyaNarayan pooja ne popat kar diya...😆 😆 Great Preeti man Gayi... 😃 Or usse koi sak nhi Hua Naina ke dimag main Kya chal raha hai...😉 😛 Bike riding and Preeti cycling is too goood... 😛 😃 Bechara Pandit 😆 kabhi Sameer ki bike se gira diya jata hai 😆to kabhi Preeti ki cycle se gir jata hai... 😆 😆
Very nice to see them enjoying their companies...⭐️ 👏 😃
Specially Preeti and Pandit...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Their cute nok jok...😉 😛 😆 😃
Great Pandit ko lesson sikhne ko Mila...😃 Har wakt mazak nhi karna chahiye... 👍🏼 Kabhi kabhi mazak bhari par jata hai...🤔 Anyway All is well...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ And Pandit ka gift Dena really surprising and very cute...😉 ⭐️ 👏 😳
Very nice story Di...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Truly Awesome... ⭐️ 👏

Sorry I just read your story in one go and review bhi mix ho gaye to both parts ke review ek sath post kar diye..😔. Sorry...😔

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: VeebafanSonam
Wow...😳
Omg...it was amazing..

Loved it..

Preedit is ❤️

Thanks dear...I am glad you liked it...Preedit is actually rocking couple👏

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Fantastic update Doc👏
PreeDit fights were rilli funny..she left him on d way n he came walking😆 Preeti to Preeti h😆

He gifted her earrings😳 aww❤️

Luvly TS

Thanks Anjali...yeah they would be awesome together😃

I am glad you liked the idea of this TS😊

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: worldequalsyou
Amazing preeti and pandits nok jhok is just awesome loved it
And sameer and naina are so cute but bet thing is sad.
But loved it just loved it

Thanks a tonne for your comment...their nok jhok is the highlight of this couple as both of them are witty😉

That makes it very interesting😆

I'm glad that you liked it😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: bawaswift
such a lovely update dear.. ⭐️👏

Kaun kab dil me jagah bana le pata nahi chalta
uske liye kabhi kabhi ek lamha hi bahut hota hai

Nice lines to give an outlook of Preeti Pandit initial friendship... interestingly becoming a good relation of the future... 😃
I liked your way of cute n fun convo between them,.,. n liked the way it progressed... 😳
You are so right Manisha... dosti marks dekh ke nahi,,, nature dekh ke ki jaati hai... 👏

Loved your take on this pair... keep writing more... !
Very nice n thoughtful effort,,, ⭐️

God bless,,,