Sameer Naina OS series: Elements of Nature; Fifth OS; Space...pg 17

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Ayesha

@ayeshakapoor

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Beautiful OS dear...Naina angry with Sameer but she helped him reach home & Naina made kadha for him...loved it...well written...thanks for the pm.

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Lovely.. ⭐️👏

Awesome analysis of water,,, n its content,,, n its healing characteristics.. ! Nicely woven Manisha... well taken the shot.. !!! !!!! !!!!!⭐️⭐️ 👏👏👏

Sameer has seen only cruelty to his emotions so far.. n Naina's behaviour made him more vulnerable,, but Water made the situation somewhat smooth .. !

Water is the softest thing.. yet can penetrate Mountains n earth,. clearly shows the principle of softness overcoming hardness,, ,! Got from a quote.. 😊

Here too... Sameer after drenching in the rains.. came out softly to Naina.,, n thinking of what their relation actually is.. !

The loneliness you have talked of..it cud have gone naturally some day as well... but here the water quality has melt down the anger n softness came to his mother n things starts to get cool down,, ! Nice,, !!!

Naina left the home.. leaving softness cribbing her angelic beauty behind.. Sameer's mother is a changed heart right now.,. but all resulted in the hug with tears flowing down heals the very hearts here... !

Very symbolic.. seems so realistic n you have evince your point of the healing n the loving touch.. !!!

Loved it... n feeling a reverence for you.. for such a deep analysis of the chapter with the most relevant element of nature.. !

Thanks a lot dear,,, !

God bless,,, !!!

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

loved it
awesomely written
naina is so helpful
finally vishakha realised her mistakes
update soon n if possible do pm me

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Well woven the qualities of Water in this update Manisha di 👏👏

Very interesting and meaningful chapter with very nice symbolic images given through rain, and tears ⭐️⭐️

Yes, rain did melt the anger Sameer was firing himself with. And rain resulted in Naina giving him a lift and he gets to know more of her and her goodness. She don't, but did equal a lady's presence in the house that he was longing from his mother. She said the simple words that touched his soul and make him think over again about what she is in his life !!!

Liked the way his mother came up and turned the things with Naina's conversation she observed.

Loved the scene later with her son !!! Nanu has been so sweet 🤗

Nicely examined Water element and comprising it with the story forward ! Nicely penned down, perfectly said the situations ! Lovely written fabulous 👏👏

Thank U so much di for the beautiful writes and making me also a part of them 🤗

Applauds 👏

And more loves all for U ❤️

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Awesome you are Manisha, my dear dear Sweetie ❤️ 🤗

The way you have position Water element in this update, right after the Fire, it's phenomenal 👏

Water is shapeless, just like Love! Its enormous in level, and purify everything including a heart when touched with Love!

I really admire your take on the different elements dear 👏 The fire that had raged Sameer, today water has somewhat melt it. The fire that had naina and Sameer at different paths, they are on one today with rains coming and going in their ways.

Loved the way it's epitomised with his mother here. Naina tells the credibility of her Chachiji's love and affection making her not missing her Mom for love. Here we have a purified heart of Vishakha who is thinking over her reactions and behaviours toward her son and feels sorry today!

His stone cold eyes are melt today with his Mom coming to him, and him thinking of his unsaid relation with Naina, she has brought him his mother, she has gone with happiness left for him. How many friends of him have done this for him?

Lovely perspective you have put it with your written ability Manisha 👏

Loved it so much, thanks a tonne! Will be waiting for the next element now, Luv ya ❤️ 🤗

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Wow. You related them greatly

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Beautiful OS Manisha 😳
Well written 👏
I loved how you showed Samaina relationship through the element of water
Eagerly waiting for the next OS
Thanks for the PM

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Beautiful os

Specially naina helping sameer..

Cycle meri hai

Tau mai chodugi na

Bang on

N srry yr took so late to rply

Promise

One pm daily..

Hope u r not angry n e more..

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Beautiful os
Specially naina helping sameer..
Cycle meri hai
Tau mai chodugi na
Bang on
.
N srry yr took so late to rply
Promise
One pm daily..
Hope u r not angry n e more..

It's ok Nida 😊

I was never angry with you or anyone😊

I'm not that type of a person... trust me 😃

Take care Nida 😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Loved how you incorporated the element of water in their dry lives,bereft of love.I loved the rain setting.Excellent scene that was.👏👏👏
The aftermath of the scene was simply beautiful.There is no substitute for mother's love.But Visakha has only presented Sameer with her ''presents'' and never her ''presence''.This void is too deep to filled.But thankfully she realised ,and all thanks to our dear,adorable Naina.❤️
I sum up this beautiful part with this single line--
"I water you,you water me and we grow together.'' 😳
Update the next elements soon and thanks for the PM.
Keep Writing and Keep Smiling.😃😃

Thanks Minu😃

I always feel that Vishakha needs someone to act as an eye opener for her...I tried to present Naina as that eye opener😛

You have nicely written about the void in his life bcoz of Vishakha😊

Nice to read you😊