Sameer Naina OS series: Elements of Nature; Fifth OS; Space...pg 17 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Writer_At_Heart

Very beautifully written..

Please continue soon...

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

My pleasure 😃ohh sad but u did added Sameer's pic in the update 😃then I think u will be able to add pics 😳

Originally posted by: babita..

The idea itself is so unique and very thoughtful. Nice one Manisha di with the aspects of 5 elements shown and the story progressing 👏👏

The way Sameer is approaching life when he is not a culprit yet getting punishments, he is disturbed of course, but his friends did the misdeed and he is paying for that.

I felt so bad for his Nanu and his mother, they loves him so much, yet not able to give and get him the joys he deserve. His own anger is making things worse

I so wish that once the fire leaves him and showers of rains melt him, he gets to know what exactly happened and why things got reversed for him.

One thing is for sure, he has something for Naina, an unknown feeling that pulls him towards her be them circumstances, be them affection, or hatred. But this deffo will leave them both in pure love

Hope the fire leaves him and he starts viewing the nature so loving and beautiful around him in the name of Naina.❤️

Thanks di for this wonderful take. Loved it, love U 🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Five elements have always played a dominant role in everyone's life!

Sameer, who is a fire subjected element here, he is fierce, forcefully hating Naina, planning against her and nowhere does he see any friend or family with him!

Very nice concept Manisha dear 👏

Fire has the quality to destroy, and burn, with scars left for the lifetime. But this fire only makes gold as Kundan : aag mein tap kar hi sona kundan banta hai 😳

Might be, this fire is a testing time and the coming elements will deal with the circumstances, yet Sameer will play positively and more maturely. Let's see.

Thanks Sweetie, this is astounding and stellar. Much appreciated your all efforts, and so beautifully knitted plot.

Waiting for the next, thank you so much ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: misha.as

Really A Very unique concept Manisha Di... ⭐️ Five elements of Anger... like it very much... ⭐️ 👏
Very well described OS...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 Feeling really very bad for Sameer and Naina...😔 Sameer ne galti nhi ki phir bhi usse suffer karna par raha hai and Naina Wo Aadhe Sach ki wajah se paresaan hai...😔I like Sameer's mom behaviour here 👏 She speak something in Sameer's favour to her husband... ⭐️ ⭐️ Sameer ke step father ne to sab kuch Bigar diya... 🤢 🤢 And his Nanu is really great... ⭐️ 👏
Very well written Di... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏

Will read the next part soon...

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

I just can copy paste...thats all...more than that...I don't know how to do it dear

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I am an avid reader but of only two couples I adore and read only on them..

But somehow Saina are growing on me and your writing held me to read till the end..

U have done a wonderful job.

Would love to read more

And would appreciate if I get a pm.

Originally posted by: DevVarunChandni

Nice Aarambh👏...waiting for the water (Jal)element...