Sameer Naina OS series: Elements of Nature; Fifth OS; Space...pg 17 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Very well written

U've so artistically related dis OS to water

Naina is so helpful..even after being angry wid Sameer, she helped him reach home n even made kadha for him

I liked Sameer n Vishakha's scene

Update soon

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Only one word for this 'BEAUTIFUL' 👏👏

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Awesomeee update 😳Loved how u showed their relationship through the element of water Sameer n Vishakha scene was very nice ❤️Update soon 😊

Originally posted by: misha.as

Amazing Manisha Di...
Heart touching... So impressive... I wish yesa sach main hota...
Really very Nice... Thanks for it...

Originally posted by: Shinynew

Amazing one shot Manisha Di. I was really imagining each and every scene in front of my eyes. This was so good. Plaese update the next part soon.

Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor

Beautiful OS dear...Naina angry with Sameer but she helped him reach home & Naina made kadha for him...loved it...well written...thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Lovely.. ⭐️👏

Awesome analysis of water,,, n its content,,, n its healing characteristics.. ! Nicely woven Manisha... well taken the shot.. !!! !!!! !!!!!⭐️⭐️ 👏👏👏

Sameer has seen only cruelty to his emotions so far.. n Naina's behaviour made him more vulnerable,, but Water made the situation somewhat smooth .. !

Water is the softest thing.. yet can penetrate Mountains n earth,. clearly shows the principle of softness overcoming hardness,, ,! Got from a quote.. 😊

Well said Bhaiya😃

I loved to read the quote you used to describe the qualities of water👏

Here too... Sameer after drenching in the rains.. came out softly to Naina.,, n thinking of what their relation actually is.. !

The loneliness you have talked of..it cud have gone naturally some day as well... but here the water quality has melt down the anger n softness came to his mother n things starts to get cool down,, ! Nice,, !!!

His mother needed an eye opener...and here Naina acts as one😊

Glad that you liked it😃

Naina left the home.. leaving softness cribbing her angelic beauty behind.. Sameer's mother is a changed heart right now.,. but all resulted in the hug with tears flowing down heals the very hearts here... !

Very symbolic.. seems so realistic n you have evince your point of the healing n the loving touch.. !!!

Loved it... n feeling a reverence for you.. for such a deep analysis of the chapter with the most relevant element of nature.. !

Thanks a lot dear,,, !

God bless,,, !!!

Thanks for the lovely words Bhaiya...God bless you too😃

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

loved it
awesomely written
naina is so helpful
finally vishakha realised her mistakes
update soon n if possible do pm me

Originally posted by: babita..

Well woven the qualities of Water in this update Manisha di 👏👏

Very interesting and meaningful chapter with very nice symbolic images given through rain, and tears ⭐️⭐️

Yes, rain did melt the anger Sameer was firing himself with. And rain resulted in Naina giving him a lift and he gets to know more of her and her goodness. She don't, but did equal a lady's presence in the house that he was longing from his mother. She said the simple words that touched his soul and make him think over again about what she is in his life !!!

Liked the way his mother came up and turned the things with Naina's conversation she observed.

Loved the scene later with her son !!! Nanu has been so sweet 🤗

Nicely examined Water element and comprising it with the story forward ! Nicely penned down, perfectly said the situations ! Lovely written fabulous 👏👏

Thank U so much di for the beautiful writes and making me also a part of them 🤗

Applauds 👏

And more loves all for U ❤️

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Awesome you are Manisha, my dear dear Sweetie ❤️ 🤗

The way you have position Water element in this update, right after the Fire, it's phenomenal 👏

Water is shapeless, just like Love! Its enormous in level, and purify everything including a heart when touched with Love!

Wow Bhabhi...well said😃👏⭐️

I really admire your take on the different elements dear 👏 The fire that had raged Sameer, today water has somewhat melt it. The fire that had naina and Sameer at different paths, they are on one today with rains coming and going in their ways.

Loved the way it's epitomised with his mother here. Naina tells the credibility of her Chachiji's love and affection making her not missing her Mom for love. Here we have a purified heart of Vishakha who is thinking over her reactions and behaviours toward her son and feels sorry today!

His stone cold eyes are melt today with his Mom coming to him, and him thinking of his unsaid relation with Naina, she has brought him his mother, she has gone with happiness left for him. How many friends of him have done this for him?

Lovely perspective you have put it with your written ability Manisha 👏

Loved it so much, thanks a tonne! Will be waiting for the next element now, Luv ya ❤️ 🤗

Loved to read your comment Bhabhi...the way you analyse every aspect of the write up...I can never match up to your levels...Naina becomes the eye opener for his Mom and he gets what he has been longing all through his life😃

I'm so glad that you liked my write up😃