Hey dear.. i read all parts in one go.. I must say this is quite different and influential story..
1. I mean it had a hidden message where sometimes we go by looks and judge ppl but never realize after spending some time with the person we never bother about it like Rishab in this story.
2. I am in love with this Raman🙌🙇♀️🙇♀️🙇♀️🙇♀️.. yeah no one helps a stranger that much but the way u have narrated is quite convincing saying his exp whr some close one dead bcoz of depression. And he dont want to leave this chance to help her.
3. Ishu's parents🙏🙏🙏.. many of the cases parents also gets convinced by society and pressurize kids for their apperance but here though they insisted her in first but later thay gave her supporting hand its quite appealing..
4. Darling Ishu🥰🥰🥰🥰.. u gave life to this character wow she is soo good than she appear.. she shares evry thing to parents who will do ingeneral.. she is sensible while she spk.. yeah insecurities still there but those will go when u have a person who will accept u unconditionally..
I request you to add some hidden qualities like chirpy, jovial and naughtiness to Ishu char as she open up. Bcoz she never show that side to anyone as she is always judged by ppl.😉
I wanted you to show some achievements ishu get in studies or some placement job in well reputed firm to show alia and others their place which also increases ishu's confindence. It is just a request🙃
Thanks in advance for allowing me to share my request on chars.
Net net this story as awesome as ur otherstories. Only thing is i think i got connected this story so much and forced me to open up...
Take a bow from bottom of my heart for ur spending ur time for entertaining ppl like us. Kudos to ur narration skills which are getting finer better and bestest story by story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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