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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

You have made addicted to this story

will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter


Really... 😛😛😛

But u people made me addicted to write something for you guys...

Thanks to u all... I m feeling overwhelmed with your love...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good update!!!! Let's see how IshRa start their journey...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pls update soon eagerly waiting pls
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hlo gys... Back with new update.

Part 6...

Mr. Iyer: thik hai...but raman kanna tum ate rehna haa...

Vandu whispered in ishita's ear: haan ab toh ana jana lga hi rhega..ishita glared her

Raman nodded : "ji aunty ji ab hume chlna chahiye... "Raman and ishita went towards Raman's car Mr. And mrs. Iyer bid adieu to them. They were off for their journey silently. After half an hour ishita thought to initiate the talk with him, she asked him softly

Ishita: raman shall we start...

Raman who was driving just hummed in response without looking at her. Ishita said ok and started to on her laptop when raman's hand touched hers unintentionally as he was changing the gear.

Raman: sorry...

Ishita was confused and shocked at the same time hearing him saying sorry to her. She thought to herself

Ishita(st): ayyo murgan did i hear right... He said sorry to me for mere touch ...ravan kumar is changing... No no no...this is not possible he can't change ever...khin yeh tufaan se pehle ka snataa toh nhi...just relax ishu... Be calm and careful...and just concentrate on ur work...don't get scared of him u r Ishita Iyer...

Raman saw her lost and said

Raman: oh... Madam where are you lost...he asked rising his eyebrows.

Ishita hearing him came out from her thoughts and spoke : nowhere... Shall we start... Raman just hummed in response. Ishita started to explain , raman was just nodding in response. When raman glanced at her. Some hair strained were adoring her face. Suddenly raman felt an urge to tuck it. He raised his hand to tuck it, ishita looked at him as his hand touched her face, they share a beautiful eyelock which broke by ishita, she saw a truck was approaching them with high speed. she screamed raman's name in horror raman eyes widened and suddenly he kept his left hand on her left shoulder in process of protecting her and turned the wheels of car, car was about to bang with the tree but raman stopped the car at right time. They were breathing heavily out of horror. Raman looked at her and asked is she fine, ishita nodded and felt his hand on her shoulder. She looked at him and can saw genuine care and concern in his eyes for herself. They share an eyelock which was broken by some people who were present their and came to see them. Raman open the mirror, one of them asked

Man1: are u fine sir and ur wife ...

Raman: ji... We are fine thanks for ur concern. After saying so he looked at ishita.

Man2: u should have derive carefully... Apki wife apke sath hai unka toh khyal kijiye...

Raman : this was just an accident nothing else and she is...

He was about to tell them that they are not husband and wife but ishita didn't let him complete she spoke

Ishita: ramam chalein... We are getting late...

Raman looked at her and nodded, they left from there. After a while ishita spoke getting furious with him

Ishita: what was that...she asked folding her arms around her chest. Raman glanced at her and spoke raising his eyebrows.

Raman: what...

Ishita: agar kuch ho jata toh(what if something happened then)

Raman getting irritated with her: kuch hua toh nhi naa( nothing happened )

Ishita: u should concentrate on ur driving

Raman: tumhe kya lga mein tumhe dekh rha tha... Hur ki pari ho tum(what u thought that i was looking at u... U r not any angel). He said taunting her

Ishita: haan toh u were seeing me only and yes m not saying that i m an angel n all...She spoke retorting back.

Raman: ab bolo kya bol rhi thi...

Ishita: what...

Raman(irritated): project k bare mein...

Ishita: we will discuss it later...

Raman: later means... I don't have time after reaching the hotel...

Ishita saw a roadside dhaba and told raman to stop the car, raman asked her why.she told him that she is hungry and wanted to eat something. Raman said to her that she can eat at Hotel itself but she was stubborn at last raman had to stop. Ishita came out of the taking her papers and laptop and went towards Dhaba, raman also went behind her muttering pagal madrasan.

Ishita sit on one table and raman also sit in front of her. Then ishita spoke

Ishita: shall we start...
Raman asked raising his eyebrows : what..

Ishita: we need to prepare for the meeting...

Raman: oh... So you are here just to discuss with me... Don't u r hungry now...

Ishita: i m but... At first we will complete our work.
Raman was amazed of her. And told her to continue. They started to discuss and soon their work got complete and thought to have something they called Waiter, ishita was seeing the menu when raman's eyes fell on group of men who were sitting right behind ishita at some distance and was smiling and giving lusty looks at her. Raman saw her and found her bra's strap was outside from her shoulder. His anger reached at peak he called ishita and told her to come with him. She was confused by his behaviour and asked

Ishita: why...

Raman: jayada questionnaire krna jruri hai...chlo mere sath...he hold her hand and dragged her to the corner. Ishita was continuously asking what the matter why he's doing so but raman wasn't bothering to answer her. he dragged her in secluded corner and pinned her to the wall and spoke gritting his teeth

Raman: can't u were proper clothes...

Ishita was bewildered by his behaviour and spoke angrily: leave me... U can't behave with me like this...

Raman tightened his grip on her and spoke: ok ... Then u should show ur assets properly naa... Show me if u can show to that boys then u can show me also...

He said pointing towards her bra's strap. Then ishita understand why he is
behaving like this ,she was way too much embarrassed with that. She looked down out of embarrassment.
Raman : kyu... Don't u want to show me...i m better then them... he said and hide her bra's strap with her duppta and left from there leaving her . Ishita was totally confused by his behavior she thought to herself

Ishita(st):" what is happening to him... Why he is so concerned for me...he was not like that before...but why he is doing this... Do he wants to befriend with me... no no no... Its not possible he can't change he is ravan kumar who won't change ever...i think something went wrong with him...i can't believe him so easily... " she was thinking so but deep down inside her heart she was feeling happy seeing his care and concern for herself after a while she went outside after correcting her dress. She saw raman was sitting on their table grumpily and was busy in his phone. She also sit on her seat and thought to thanks Raman. She called him.

Ishita: raman...

Raman didn't respond to her, she again called him.

Ishita: raman... Thanks for helping me... She said earning a silent treatment from him. After a while their food came and they started having it. They were busy in eating food when raman saw towards men's group they were whispering and smiling on ishita. Raman called them.

Raman: hey you...what are u looking at...

Ishita was confused and saw towards raman and that group.

Man1: what's ur problem man...do ur work and let us do ours...after saying so they stared laughing
Hearing him raman stood up from his seat and went to towads them and caught a hold on one of the boy's collars and spoke angrily

Raman: now speak what were u saying...

Man2: hey leave him u don't know us...

Raman: i don't need to know u... Understand that...

Ishita also came there asked Raman to leave him.

Raman angrily glared her and spoke gritting his teeth: you stay away ishita...

Ishita: just leave him raman... Why do u want to create a scene here ...

Man1: leave me otherwise...

Raman didn't let him complete and punched him on his face. All men caught him from behind but raman wasn't leaving him he was punching him continuously blood was oozing from his mouth, Ishita was startled by all this and she was trying to stop raman. At last one boy of them kept a knife on ishita's neck and spoke

Man3: hey... Leave him otherwise i will kill her...
Raman saw her crying and spoke: leave her...i said leave her

Man3: at first u leave him...

Raman looked at ishita she was hell scared and shocked by the turn of event.

Raman left him and spoke: ok ok... At first u left her...

All goons surrounded raman and spoke now u have to pay for ur deed with ur life and girlfriend , now we will kill you and take away ur girlfriend with us...

Ishita was crying and pleaded them to leave her and raman but they were nowhere listening to her. They started beating raman. Ishita was struggling and pleading them to leave him after a while police came there

Ins. : hey... Stop it... And hands up ...hey Leave her...

Ins: who is Raman was bhalla...

Raman: i m raman bhalla... I called u... They all r trying to molest ishita... He said pointing towards goons

Police made ishra free from goons... Raman was little injured blood was oozing from his mouth , ishita saw him and ran towards him and made him sit down on chair.

Ishita: please somebody calls doctor...

Raman in pain: i m ok ishita... Are u ok...

Ishita: mai thik hu raman...ayyo murgan Apko itni chot ayi hai...

She said wiping his blood with her duptta.

Insp.: we called doctor here... Ma'am and sir u have to come with us to file the complaint against them...

Ishita : ok sir we will come afterwards... U just take them...

Police left from there after arresting all the goons.

Ishita: what was need to do so...what if something happened to you then... She said scolding him. Raman was staring at her.

Raman: and what if something happened to you then what would I answered to your appa...

Ishita was all confused: ab appa khana se bich mein aa gye...

Raman: nothing...

Ishita wasn't able understand him and his behavior towards her. Sometimes he behaves with her rude and ill mannered sometimes totally opposite. Her trance was broken by raman's voice, he was calling her

Raman: chlo... Car mein betho...

Ishita: but Raman... Doctor is coming..

He didn't let her complete hand spoke: are u coming or not...

Ishita halfheartedly followed him they sit in the car. Raman was about to start the car but ishita stopped him and spoke

Ishita: raman apko boht chot lagi hai... Let me first aid ur wounds

Raman didn't responding to her. Ishita take out first aid kit from car's cabinet and nurses his wounds

Ishita again called him and said: are u listening to me raman...let me drive

Raman(angrily): can'tu stop your blabbering, will u...his eyes were red due to anger...

Ishita: i said let me drive or else i will...

She was about to speak further when raman suddenly pulled her towards himself with a jerk. His one and was on her waist and hers both on his chest. Ishita was shocked with his move, they were very close to each others. He spoke gritting his teeth with anger and spoke pulling her more closer

Raman: yeh sb tumhari wajha se hua hai...pehle wo accident or ab yeh fight...( these all happened because of you only... First that accident and now this fight)

Ishita: mene kya kiya(what i did) ...i didn't told you to fight for me...

Raman: lo ab bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai... I did all these just because of u... Didn't u noticed how they were talking and lusting over u...

Ishita: does it matter to u...it doesn't make any difference with u and them...u also misbehaved with me earlier or should i say u r doing that right now

Hearing her raman got angry and spoke: it does matter to me... Noone has right to say anything raman bhalla's...

He was about say something further when his phone buzzed which broke their trance. Ishita realized their positionand found raman very close to herself and pushed him away and composed herself immediately. Raman picked up the call and ended up saying ok.

Raman sighed and drove off to their hotel. Their journey was silent affair, after two and half hour they reached the hotel.

They went to reception and asked for their room key and goes towards their respective rooms.

Raman entered his room fell on bed all tired. After a while he went to washroom for freshening up and get changed, he ordered coffee for himself and sat on couch. He remembered all the happenings of the day.

Raman(st): what is happening to me...why i was being possessive for her...earlier i thought to trouble her...but what i m doing... Protecting her and being possessive about her no no.. i m not possessive ...may be it because she is with me...and i helped her out of humanity...yes i just helped her... Nothing else...

After a while his order arrived and he got busy in sipping coffee.

Ps: i have updated this part in jiffy just for u guys...i m not satisfied with it...as many of u people want this update soonest...so don't know how it is...please let me know with your likes and comments... Enjoy reading... 😊


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Posted: 6 years ago
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I have updated next part... Have a look guys... Give ur valuable response...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful update
Can't wait for next part
Plz plz plz plz continue soon dear
Nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update awesome 😊 update soon next part please
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
It's lovely
Thank you so much for the amazing update
Please update next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aweosme update
Ishra about to meet with accident as raman was lost in ishita but thankfully they got saved ishita was confused with ramans behaviour ishita asked ramam to stop at dhaba some boys were looking at ishitas back and was smiling raman notices that and got angry he took ishita in corner and was scolding her she got angry he showed her bra strep ishita got embaressed ishita thanks raman again those boys were lusting on ishita raman asked what is the metter they asked him to mind his own buisness raman started fighting with them ishita was trying to stop him one boy kept knief on ishitas neck raman saw she is scared and crying he left that boy they started beating raman thankfully police came on time car scene was nice raman is confused with his own behaviour
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
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An interesting update!!!! Raman is getting extremely possessive about Ishita and she too started pondering about Raavan's Kumar sudden change of behavior..

IshRa share a beautiful eye lock during their ride and they are lost in the moment ephemerally, putting their lives at stake.. . Interestingly, neither Raman nor Ishita refuted the claims, a harbinger of changing equations.. ..

Later, IshRa stop by a dhaba to discuss the business proposals, during which Raman turns a maniac. He chides Ishita for her wardrobe malfunction and protects her modesty from the goons... Furthermore, he gets enraged with the goons' lascivious words and indulges in a brawl. ..

Maybe the story would have been more intriguing if you have taken the cliched path, making Raman beat the goons blue and black, instead of him suffering minor injuries... Police comes to rescue in nick of time and IshRa continues their eventful journey... .Raman accusing Ishita for his pitiable state and Ishita lost in the care and concern of Raman...
Edited by srini18 - 6 years ago

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