Mohabbat....part 16....24/10

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MONAPAREKH

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

awesome update continue soon

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Such a Mind Blowing Start

Both Ishita and Raman are rivals and both want to show the other down

both wanted to win the sole contract but was told that they have to work together

Raman on the other side does not want to work with Ishita and because of that

he dislikes her more as his father insulted him in front of his staff

while Ishita was calm listening to her father that they will work with the Bhalla's

once the meeting was over between the Iyers and Bhalla Raman pulls Ishita

but it seems these two has some ugly past or perhaps just one incident where

Ishita slapped Raman and now again she does so and tries to make him understand

if something like that happened to his sister but he forcefully kisses her

now waiting to see what will happen between them

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Part 2

Wow it was just Fabulous

I just love that both are rivals and Raman wants Ishita to back off

from the contract so he holds her hands kisses her whenever he can

okay so basically he liked Ishita before but not dating her just for a night

and he received a slap from her so now he wants to take revenge from her

Raman has already asked his father to give him full authority on the project

as he should make all the decisions only and Mr Bhalla does so

Raman can easily try to effect Ishita with his closeness and touches

but now she has to come up with something to keep Raman off her

though I'm totally enjoying their meetings as its becoming daring and feisty

looking forward to the next chapter

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Thank you the links

and please do update soon

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Priya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#25

Awesome update

Plz plz continue soon dear

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Srini

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Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Thank you for the quick update!!! A very breezy update, with a smooth narration... Sometimes it is tough to maintain synchronization between the parts but you are spot on!!!

Coming to the chapter, Ishita and Raman start off on a sour note, where either of them is trying to bring down the other..Raman is harping on Ishita after the effervescent kiss 😉...

A raged Ishita gets further exasperated when Amma starts eulogies about Raman...Appa asks Ishita to handle the project and she concurs with the same...However, Mihika tries to dig deep into Ishita's somber mood but she shrugs her off..

Elsewhere, Raman who heads the project tries to show Ishita her place and calls for a meeting... During the meeting he blows the fuse out of Ishita by indulging in a flirtatious act...A vexed up Ishita tries to lecture him about his cheeky act but he continues his insolence by challenging her to do all what she can..

Keep writing dear!! Best wishes!!!

Edited by srini18 - 6 years ago

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Sukhvi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: srini18
Thank you for the quick update!!! A very breezy update, with a smooth narration... Sometimes it is tough to maintain synchronization between the parts but you are spot on!!!

Coming to the chapter, Ishita and Raman start off on a sour note, where either of them is trying to bring down the other..Raman is harping on Ishita after the effervescent kiss 😉...

A raged Ishita gets further exasperated when Amma starts eulogies about Raman...Appa asks Ishita to handle the project and she concurs with the same...However, Mihika tries to dig deep into Ishita's somber mood but she shrugs her off..

Elsewhere, Raman who heads the project tries to show Ishita her place and calls for a meeting... During the meeting he blows the fuse out of Ishita by indulging in a flirtatious act...A vexed up Ishita tries to lecture him about his cheeky act but he continues his insolence by challenging her to do all what she can..

Keep writing dear!! Best wishes!!!

Thank you dear for encouraging me with ur lovely words... 😊😊

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Sukhvi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ishrarudi06
Awesome update
Plz plz continue soon dear

Thank you so much dear... 😊

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Sukhvi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: taahir004
Thank you the links

and please do update soon

Pleasure is all mine 😛

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Sukhvi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: taahir004
Such a Mind Blowing Start

Both Ishita and Raman are rivals and both want to show the other down
both wanted to win the sole contract but was told that they have to work together
Raman on the other side does not want to work with Ishita and because of that
he dislikes her more as his father insulted him in front of his staff
while Ishita was calm listening to her father that they will work with the Bhalla's
once the meeting was over between the Iyers and Bhalla Raman pulls Ishita
but it seems these two has some ugly past or perhaps just one incident where
Ishita slapped Raman and now again she does so and tries to make him understand
if something like that happened to his sister but he forcefully kisses her
now waiting to see what will happen between them