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Lovely concept please continue loved it
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Hello!.. Guys
Big thanks to u all for like and comment u all did for this story and gave ur precious time for reading this story ...so here i m going to give a start to the story...

Part 1...

So first i'll give introduction of the characters...

Raman kumar bhalla rough and tough business man. RKB who only cares about his business and his loved one. Their is no place for the love in his heart for some one.. Because he don't believe in love... He ruled the whole bhalla industries and business world. He can do anything to achieve his goals.

Omparkash bhalla fater of raman bhalla and MD of bhalla group of industries. He love his son and kind hearted.

Santhoshi bhalla mother of raman bhalla. A house wife. She love her family and her children. She is so kind in her behavior.

Simmi she is raman bhalla's sister. She is married to param khurana and alao had a daughter ananya.

Rinki and romi is college going younger brother and sister of raman .
Mihir arora is raman bhalla best friend cum bhai. He work in raman's company. And veey well know raman.

Ishita Vishwanathan iyer most beautiful and extremely intelligent business woman. She is the CEO of iyer industries and also the rival of raman bhalla.

Vishwanathan Iyer the father of Ishita iyer and also the MD of iyer industry. He is kind hearted person. And love his daughters and wife.

Madhvi iyer mother of ishita .She is house wife. She is little bit conservative. And love her family.


Vandita bala chandran elder sister of ishita. She is married to bala chandran. Also had kid shravu 5 yers old.

Mihika Younger sister of ishita and she is studying in MBA college.
Mihir and mihika in relationship.

Prologue...

In grand orient hotel's buisness hall one of the most handsome man is giving the presentation to get the contract and after completing his presentation everybody clapped for him. He is none other than The great Raman kumar bhalla. And now ishita's turn to give the presentation. Ishita was giving her presentation very dedicatedly but some man in the hall was lusting over her curves and some was amazed of her after her presentation they announced that they will take decision after lunch.

In lunch raman came towards ishita. She was discussing something with her associate. She said to her associate that iyer industries will get this contract at any cost by smirking on raman.

Raman: Acha itna bhrosa hai khud pr yeh mat bhoolo ki Raman kumar bhalla is your competitor this going to be tough to get the contract from him... Actually almost impossible hai tumhare liye toh. He said smirking on her face.

Ishita: dekhlenge Mr. Bhalla. She went from there.

After lunch now the time had arrived for the announcement of the company whom the contract was going. All gathered into the hall. Then host said so now the time to announce the company. This contract is very huge so want best for this contract.. Now this contract goes to Bhalla industries Raman smirking victoriously on ishita his smile fade away when he heard Iyer Industries from the host. And all people was shocked with this. Then host again said that they had taken the decision afyer so much discussion. And bhalla and iyer industries was best for this contract and raman cut him in mid.. He said

Raman: Mr. Bansal we are rival and i m against this decision.. U have to choose one of us

Host: look Mr. Bhalla we have taken this decision after allot discussion we had decided if u want this contract u two have to merge for this contract otherwise we will not give this contract to any one of u two.

Iyer industries has man power and u have best machine power.. So we decided to give this contract two companies.

Then ishita said...
Ishita: sir we have all equipment and man power to full filling the requirements of this project i m not going to work with him.

Host said to ishita..
Host: Then no Miss iyer u have man power and Mr. Bhalla has others so u two have to work together to fulfill the requirement of the project otherwise we will find other contractors instead of u two.. So decision is urs ..u can tell us till tomorrow. For now we will take leave. All went from the hall.

then raman turn to ishita and this contract will be mine at any cost.

Ishita: dekhkenge. ...they went to their respective office..

Raman had called the urgent meeting in his office and discussed about the matter ...


Raman: I want this contract at any cost.. I will show that ishita iyer that RKB jo thaan leta hai vo hansil krke hi rehta hai.. And smirk..

Mr. Bhalla: Raman kya ho jayega agr hum yeh contract unke sath kr krlenge or vese business mein yeh sb nhi dekhte sb ke sath deal krna pdta hai... Or tumhari problem kya hai ishita se usne kitne km waqt mein iyer industries ko khaan se khaan pohncha diya... Mujhe toh lgta hai hume bhi unke sath kam krna chaiye.. So this is my decision that we r going to work with them.. And its final



Raman: how papa i don't want work with her... Or vese bhi agr yeh contract hume nhi milla toh hume itna fraq nhi pdega jitna use pdega kyuki usko jrurat hai iski... Or mai usse yeh contract kbhi hansil nhi krne doonga... Mr. Bhalla cut him in mid... And said angrily...

Mr. Bhalla: Raman kya balwas kr rhe hhe ho tum ...tum esa vesa kuch nhi kroge uss ldki k sath or haan hum unke sath kaam krne jaa rhe hain yeh baat apne dimaag mein achi trh daal lo or isko lekr agr tumne kuch gadbad ki na toh mai tumhe is company se bahar nikal doonga. Or vese bhi mai iss company ka malik hu tum nhi tumhe jo khaa jaye sirf vhi kro.. Smjhe... Mr. Bhalla left the conference room after these..

And raman was hell angry on ishita because of her his father first time insulted him that too in front of all employees of his company he decided to ruin her company and her image in business world...


In Iyer industries ishita also called urgent meeting and she was discussing about this when mr. Iyer said that they will work with them because they need this contract for their comapny... And ishita also nodded..

Next day mr iyer and mr. Bhalla called meeting to discuss the contract... And ishita and raman was sitting in front of each other and were glaring each other and in last mr. Iyer said to mr. Bhalla that they are glad to work with them and decided to inform mr. Bansal for the contract they are ready for this project..


And all People was leaving the hall at last but when ishita was going raman called her said he want to talk with her she said that all Official talks had finished now im going. she was again going to leave the hall when raman jerked her after closing the door and pinned her to wall... Ishita was shocked with this sudden act. Their Faces were too close to each other and ishita was felling his hot breath on her face...


Ishita was making efforts to get free from his hold but his hold was too firm..ishita said in anger

Ishita : yeh kya batmeezi hai raman... Leave me she said glaring him...

Raman: kya smjhti ho khud ko tum haan... Yeh mat smjhna ki agar hum yeh project sath m kr rhe hain toh mai uss din wale thapad or tumhari insult ko bhool jayunga.. While smirking he said... Vese acha hi hai hum sath m kaam kr rhe hain ab mai tumhara jina hram kr doonga dekhna...


Ishita: lgta hai uss din ka thapad tum bhool gye.. Tbhi esi harkat kr rhe ho mere sath.. Ya fir tum yeh contract ka boht bda sdma lg gya tumhe.. She said smirking victoriously on his face...

Raman while digging his fingers on her face shock to tumhe lge ge ab dekhna tumse toh mai us din ka bdal jrur loonga... Or kya galat kiya tha mene tumse one night stay hi toh pucha tha isme..ishita slapped him hard on his cheek in mid she said..

Ishita: cheee... Kitne gnde insaan ho tum tumhe kuch fraq nhi pdta is trh ki baat puchte hue kisi ldki se..mujhe toh yakeen nhi hota ki tum Mr. Bhalla k bete ho vo toh kitne ache hain itna acha nature hai or tum bilkul opposite to him. Or agar yeh baat koi or tumhari behn se khega na tb tumhe pta chlega... She said while shooting dagger on him with her eyes..

Raman: He was shocked with this slap... He said gain clutching her hair in his fist ... how dare you to say like that about my sister now i will show u ur place ...he said pinned her to the wall and pull her face up and place his lips on her... She was hell shocked by this sudden act.. She tried to free herself from his hold but his hold was too firm... He was kissing her mercilessly and bite her lower lip she moaned in pain and he entered her mouth in swift moment and relish her taste.. She jerked him off with her full force...

Ishita: how dare u yeh kya trika hai...tumhari himmat kese hui mijhe kiss krne ki..

Raman:while smirking mai isse bhi jyada kr skta hu tumne meri himmat dekhi khaan hai... Or ab mai tumhe btaounga ki RKB hai kya wait and watch he left the hall after this and ishita was glued to that place shockingly..

This is enough for the first part... Please do comment and like if u people liked it ...
Love
Sukhi😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I just loved it
It is such good concept please continue writing
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Posted: 6 years ago
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congratulations for ur first story
nice concept and CS
ishita and raman are business rivals ishra got the contract on condition they will have to work on this project together they were not ready host asked them to decide mr.bhalla told raman they will do this contract with iyers and its his final decision raman felt angry on ishita as his father scolded him for first time and that to infront of his employees he decided to ruin ishita and her company other side mr.iyer said they will do this contract with bhallas ishita agreed next day bhalals and iyers kept meeting ishra were glaring each other everything was decided ishra scene was superb
pls update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update enjoyed reading
Good concept
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congratulations dear on your first work!!! To be honest, at this point of time when most of the existing writers have lost their zeal to write and update their works, it is quite exciting to see your debut on this forum as a writer...

Readers in the forum are always welcoming and accommodative hope you cherish your time as a writer..Coming to the story, the plot is interesting...IshRa are competitors and Raman in the past misbehaved with Ishita...Ishita too gave him a fitting reply...A shaken up Raman kisses her out of vengeance..

Keep writing..All the best!!! Just go through the works of Aaku Di , Pooja Di so that you can organize and present your work in a more adorning and appealing way...
Edited by srini18 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u guys for all ur precious comments... Thank you so much 😛
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Hlo guys... I m come back with new part of this story. First i want to thank all of you for ur likes and comments. Honestly I'm very nervous about this new part ..hope u all like it too...
Part 2...

Ishita: how dare u yeh kya trika hai...tumhari himmat kese hui mijhe kiss krne ki..

Raman:while smirking mai isse bhi jyada kr skta hu tumne meri himmat dekhi khaan hai... Or ab mai tumhe btaounga ki RKB hai kya wait and watch he left the hall after this and ishita was glued to that place shockingly..
Ishita was hell shocked by this behaviour of raman she wants to tell about all this to her appa and his Father, she was going to tell when raman called her from behind and said.

Raman: where are u going Miss. Iyer apne appa ko btane ya fir mere papa ko...or kya btaogi unhe ki appa appa... raman ne mujhe kiss kiya...or vo puchenege khaan beta or kya khogi ki lips pe.. ...he said pointing and touching her lips.

She was glaring him angrily. And went away.
Raman was smirking victoriously ..

Raman(st): ab dekhna mai tumhare sath kya kya krta hu yeh toh bs trailer tha picture abhi baki hai ishita iyer

In evening ishita was sitting in her room thinking about todays happening ..she was deeply engrosed in thinking when mihika entered room.

Mihika: akka where are u lost ...she asked seeing ishita lost...

Ishita: without thinking blurted out raman's name...and mihika was shocked. Then ishita realised what she said and about to cover up when mihika asked

Mihika: akka did he did something with u.

Ishita: no no mihiku its nothing like that... Its just about our new project... U know we have to complete our new project with that raman bhalla so thats why i was little tensed nothing else... U know how he and his behaviour is... Its just that only nothing else. She said without meeting eyes with mihika but mihika was not convinced with her excuse then she again asked ishita...

Mihika: akka why are u talking me without meeting eyes... She asked keeping her hand on ishita's hand..akka u know na.. U can tell me anything.. If something is bothering you then tell me... May be i can help u out...

ishita saw concern in her eyes for her... Then ishita thought to shurgged off her..

Ishita : what mihiku... Tu bhi kya batein leker beth gyi... Tu bta tera college me din kesa gya... She said with smile

Mihika: while going for freshening up she said... Nothing akka as usual study... And i m so glad that its my last semester of MBA after that i will join you in office... She said with smile...

Ishita: sure mihiku abhi jao fresh ho jao... Tb tk mai amma ki help karvati hu dinnere bnane me ok... Ishita went out from her room after that.

In kitchen ishita stood beside her amma... Amma said seeing ishita in kitchen ...

Amma: aree.. Ishu tum yhaan... Tum kyu ayi mai bna rhi thi na dinner.. Tum jao pehle hi tum tired ho office se... She said while chopping vegetables

Ishita: i m not tired amma... Mai apki help karva deti hu dinnere me... Its ok... She said to her amma

At dining table everybody was present there..

Appa: ishu kanna hamari tarf se tum head krogi iss project ko bhalla industry k sath...he said while eating dinner

Ishita: ok appa as your wish... I will handle this project on our company's behalf... She said eating her dinner, listening this her amma popped up in conversation, she said getting excited

Amma: ishu kanna u are going to do work with raman bhalla... Vo bhalla's ka beta... She said to ishita getting happy..

Ishita after seeing her amma getting happy with this news she thought

Ishita(st) : lo amma phir se shuru ho gyi uss raman ka naam sun kr... Ab phir se uski praise krne lgegi. getting irritated she said

Ishita: Amma please, don't start again with that raman bhalla's praising session...

Amma: what ishu tum kyu itna gussa karti ho raman se... Kitna acha ldka hai vo.. Kitna bda businessman ban gya itni kam age me... She said while serving herself

Ishita(st): ab kya btao amma ko, ki jiss insan ki vo itni tarif kr rhi hain kitna ghtiya or manner less insan hai...

Suddenly mihika popped up in conversation..

Mihika: while eating her dinner she said.. Amma kya topic leke beth gye ho app please dinner krlo ache se.. U know na.. Akka don't like him a bit... So leave it now.. And its a professional matter, u stay away from it...let akka handle this by her own way...

Mihika knew about ishra rivalry as ishita share everything with her ...

Ishita got up after finishing her dinner she headed towards her room...

Next day in bhalla house in raman's room

It was 8 o'clock in the morning, raman was getting ready for office , he went downstairs..

Mr. Bhalla: raman kahaan hai toshiji.

He asked toshiji while having his breakfast... Toshiji saw raman and she said.

Toshiji: lo aa gya mera puttar... Aaja puttar nashta krle.. Ajaa.. She said seeing raman..

Raman after having his seat at dining table...

Raman: Good morning papa, good morning maa... He greeted his parents.

Mr. Bhalla: raman i want u to handle our new project with iyre industries..

He said to raman. Raman after thinking something he said

Raman: ok papa as u wish i will handle this project but on one condition.

Mr.Bhalla: what condition raman... He asked getting confused with his talks

while having breakfast raman said

Raman: I will handle this when u give all rights to me like, i will take all decision for this project by my own...

Mr. Bhalla: after thinking something for a while he said.. Ok, u can take all decision regarding this project.

After listening mr. Bhalla raman did happy dance in his mind and thought

Raman(st): ab btaunga uss madrasan ko, ki raman bhalla kya chiz...
After having breakfast mr. Bhalla and raman headed towards their office.

In raman's cabin in his office ...
Raman called mihir...
Raman: Mihir kahaan ho mere cabin me aao jaldi abhi...

Mihiri in raman's cabin..

Mihir: haa bolo bhai apne bulaya, kuch urgent kaam tha kya ,he asked raman

Raman: haan mihir vo jo humara mr. Bansal ka project hai iyers k sath uski meeting fix kro, mujhe kuch points discuss krne hai ...he said to mihir totally engrossed in his laptop typing something

Mihir getting confused he asked what point bhai, we have already discussed every important thing with them last day...

Raman: getting angry...oh just shut up mihir, just do as i say...

Mihir: ok bhai as your wish, i'll fix your meeting with iyers...he said seeing raman nowhere going to stop...

After this mihir went out of raman's cabin..

Raman(st): now see... i will make your life hell ishita iyer...

On the other hand , In ishita's cabin. Her assistant informed her about meeting with bhalla regarding their project , ishita nodded. She asked where will meeting be held... Her assistant told her in bhalla industry

Ishita: recalling last day ...she was feeling nervous, she said.. Ok, inform them about meeting.

Ishita(st): agar aaj uss ravan kumar ne misbehave kiya mere sath, then i won't spare him...

She said to herself with determination...

In bhalla industries, raman was sitting in his cabin thinking about the meeting. When mihir entered his cabin.

Mihir : bhai iyer industry se ishita iyer ayi hai...
Raman: ok.. Make them comfortable.. I m coming...

He was smiling mischievously

In conference hall of bhalla industries, raman entered conference hall making everybody stand on their feet except one,who is none other than ishita.. She made face seeing him in front of her...
Raman after having his seat...
Ishita was sitting beside his right side..

Raman: shall we start meeting.

Raman asked keeping his eyes on ishita. Everybody nodded. Raman said to ishita..

Raman: so miss. Iyer... I wanted to inform you that i will head this project on the behalf of bhalla industry...

Ishita: i don't have any problem with that mr. Bhalla...so shall we continue.

She said plastering fake smile on her face which annoyed raman, he started to thought some ideas to trouble her, so that she herself back out from this contract and it will impact her image in business world and also in front of his father that she can't even handle a single project .while mihir was telling all details to everybody and ishita was busy in listening to mihir...

Suddenly some ideas popped in Raman 's mind... He smiled mischievously on his idea.

Raman hold ishita's right hand under the table and squeezed her hand.Ishita was shocked with this act of his. She glared him, he was smirking seeing her face. And made a straight face as if nothing happened, ishita was trying hard to make her hand free from his hold but his hold was too firm.She said glaring him only audible to him.

Ishita: leave my hand.

She said shooting daggers on him while looking down at the file but he was not listening to her.

Mihir was asking her something and felt something fishy about her. He asked her out of concern..

Mihir: kya hua ishita ji... Aap thik toh hai na..

Ishita making smily face said, yes yes i m fine...

After that everyone was leaving the hall... But ishita was glued to her seat and was waiting for everyone to leave only to give some peace of mind to raman. when Everyone went out

Ishita stood up from her seat and bend towards raman, Who was smirking seeing her angry face

Ishita: What was that...how dare u to touch me... I had already warned u not to do such cheap stunt with me but...

Befor ishita complete her sentence raman cut her in mid and said after getting up from his seat...

Raman: how dare to touch u... Seriously abhi toh mene touch bhi nhi kiya i was just holding your hand darling he said and winked her...
Ishita opened her mouth in 'o' shape and said.

Ishita: dekho raman mujhe pta hai ki tum yeh sb harktein kyu kr rhe ho ... Tum chahte ho ki mai is contract se backout kr loo kyuki contract me toh tum kuch gadbad kr nhi skte kyuki tumhari company ki reputation isse judi hui hai isiliye tum mujhe ese preshaan krke mujhe iss contract se bahar krna chahte ho... But for your kind information, esa nhi hone wala smjhe tum... Aur agar tumne phir se yeh sb dohraya toh mai sach mai tumari harkton ka kacha chitha mr. Bhalla k samne khol doongi... Mujhe kamjoor smjhne ki galti mat krna ...or phir mujhe blame mat krna apni insult ka... Get that straight in ur head..

She said glaring him and warned him for last time...

She was going to leave the hall. But raman called her from behind , ishita halted at her place and turn around to see him. She saw him coming towards her with slow steps..

Raman after reaching so close to her said while touching her cheek with his fingers slowly .

Raman: u know what ishita... I liked u when i saw u first and that time u slaped me hard then i thought to myself that i make u taste ur own medicine soon because i thought its so easy to defeat a girl that too in business but now... i like u even more after hearing ur warning coz mujhe vo kaam pasand hai jisse mujhe rokka jaye...or jisse kaam se tumne mujhe warning di hai usse krne mein toh or bhi mazza ayega...

He complete his last line giving victorious smirk to ishita and was going out but came back and kissed ishita's cheek and left after saying best of luck baby to face RKB..

Ps: That all for part two please like and comment if u people liked it... 😊

Love Sukhi

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Awesome update loved it why soo short please update soon next part please
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Superb update
Ishita was thinking about raman mihika and ishita scene was nice raman asked his father to give him all rights on this project mr.bhalla said ok raman got happy thinking now he can trouble ishita raman asked mihir to arrange meeting with iyers regarding this project mihir did the same raman was thinking to make ishita backout from this project so her image will get spoiled in business word loved ishitas attitude
Pls update soon

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