#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 18

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 7 years ago

love
guess
jealous
and then patch up
beautiful story.
really loved it.

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arooshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

The first os of song os thon by akriti.. it was mindblowimg...Raman was so possessive...Ishra patching up ...Ishita almost seduced Raman by that dress...Loved ishra romance...It was romantic...

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Arti Mishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Superb os...

Ishu was insecure about her place in Raman's life and Raman wasn't understanding her

He was all cool and taking her lightly

But jab khud pe beeti tab samajh aaya

He got possessive seeing her with some other boy

And finally was able to understand her feelings and what she might had been going through seeing him with shaggy.

Lastly he apologized to her and she shared her fear with him.

And they patched up with a kiss of course

Loved ishra

Loved the os

Thanks for pm Raksha di

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aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

awesome...beautiful os di... ishu is hurt with raman behaviour... ishra r playing opposite role... He got so jealous seeing her with mehul ...realised the pain she had gone through... fab one

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Sanjna55

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hey

Wonderful Os

Love it

Ishra's Love N Possessiveness

bEautifully Written

Simply Amazing

TakeCare

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DIVANISHRA

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Posted: 7 years ago

superb os
Loved it so much
Ishra were awesome

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arooshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

A very emotional os by ishrasoul...The end made me cry. .

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lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful os dear

Loved it

Loved Raman insult Shagun

I feel both are wrong here

Like Raman Ishu too doesn't think her activities hurt him too

Loved his apologize to her it was awesome shows his true love

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arooshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Superb os raksha...

Ishita made Raman realise how it feels to see your loved ones with someone else.. .

Loved the way Raman realised and then loved ishita...

You chose the plot padmavat and the way you related both were awsome...

Overall great work RAKSHA... A Wonderful os in songothon from a wonderful writer in this forum...

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lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Emotional os dear

Heart wrenching one

Oh god poor Raman

Everything going on happily suddenly Raman health got worsen he is death know unable to take this dear

I am really feel bad for Raman he hides his pain live's for ishu and baby was just outstanding dear

Poor Ishu she doesn't know about his health condition but feel he is not fine whenever she tries to ask him he doesn't say anything.

He doesn't care about himself in last days too he care more about Ishu was fantabulous dear

I am unable to control my tears while reading

Brilliant written up dear

Loved it

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