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MY TAKE ON CURRENT TRACK


Her heart ached as she looked at the decorated board 'RAMAN BHALLA WEDS MIHIKA IYER'.
She wiped her tears with her fingers and came out from her building campus to get some fresh air.

Suddenly a hand griped on her's and started to drag her. Her steps stopped as the person stopped dragging her . They both stood inside the storeroom of the society .

"Ab kya hai mihika ? Tum yahan kyun laayi ho mujhe ?" Ishita asked shrugging her hands.

"Akka, I am sorry for hurting you . I am really very very sorry" she asked for an apology folding her hands in front of her sister.

"Akka? 'Ishita' bolo na mihika. Aur Yeh haath jodh kyun rhi ho tum ? Please don't do this , inhi haathon se haath uthaya tha na mere upar mihika? " she gave her a good answer of her deeds

Ishita immediately looked other side crossing her arms on her chest.

"Akka, please , maine abhi tak jo kuch bhi kiya woh sab ek naatak tha akka, sirf ek naatak. Please akka, please mujhe maaf kar dijiye." Mihika said

"Naatak? Matlab?" Ishita asked turning to her side .

"Haan akka, yeh sab maine bas simmi aur param ka bharosa jeet ne ke liye kra tha" she shouted throwing her hands in air.

"Jis din aapne court mein mere khilaaf gawahi di thi us din main aapse bahot zyada naraz thi. Simmi mere paas aayi usne mujhe instigate karne ki koshish kri..." She started to tell her but got cut in mid by ishita.

"Aur tum instigate ho gyi? Haina?" Ishita asked raising her eyebrows and crossed her hands again across her chest.

"No akka, maine bas act kiya instigate hone ka taaki simmi-param mere plan mein phans jaayein."mihika answered

Agar yeh sab plan tha toh tumne mera aur raman ka divorce kyun karwaya ?" Ishita asked angrily

"Bharosa dilaana chahti thi ,akka. Main bas chahti thi ki unhe mujh par bharosa ho jaaye . mujhe pata tha ki aap kabhi unn divorce paper par signature nhi kroge. Par uss param ne apni ghatiya chaal chal ke aapse signature karwa liye." She told her grit gritting her teeths

"Waise isse bhi mera koi loss nhi hua hai, game abhi bhi humari muthi mein hai " mihika said clutching her fist .

"Kuch nhi bacha mihika humari muthi mein" she said sadly and sat dejectedly on the stool kept in the storeroom.

"Bacha hai akka , Yeh dekhiye akka , yeh shaadi ka jodha aapke liye hai " she said showing her two parcels. Ishita started to thought.

"Akka , jeeju aise aapko kabhi apni wife nhi maanenge aur na hi unhe koi ye batayega ki aap unki wife ho." Mihika said making ishita hit with reality.

"Akka yeh sochne ka time nhi hai aap please yeh shaadi ka jodha lijiye aur taiyaar ho jaaiye." Mihika said and hand overed her parcels .


Simmi bought Ishita who was playing her role as mihika unknown to everyone.

Ishita got seated next to Raman who was lost in himself. 'Might be thinking about his wife' ishita thought .

Soon the priest started to read chants. As the rituals both groom and bride took 7 vows revolving around the holy fire. In between raman got some blur flashes but shrugged them from his mind.

Raman and ishita again sat at there places, the priest requested raman to tie mangalsutra around her neck. He did the same and again got some flashes in which a man was tying mangalsutra in lady's neck.

He brought his hand near her head to fill her partition, simmi opened her veil revealing her face .

Raman stood shocked at his place seeing ishita in the bride getup

"Ishita , ae ki sab hai?tu aethe mandap mein , mihika kithe hai?" Toshi asked keeping her hands on her hips.

Ishita stood there like a culprit and didn't uttered a single word from her mouth .

Both simmi and mrs. Bhalla started to put allegation on ishita but there was the one person who understood everything

Soon those blur flashes played in front on his eyes just like the clear picture ,slowly his whole life played like a movie in front of his eyes only and he understood everything .




"Mihika , ae ki kra puttar tune?" Mrs. Bhalla asked as she saw mihika entering bhalla house

"Ishu akka ko unki jagah dikha di mummyji." Mihika answered beautifully.

He held his head tightly as many emotions played together , he was happy as he got to know that ishita is his wife , he was angry on himself as he treated her badly, he was sad for her also.

"Yeh sab kya ho rha? Main inn sab baaton se ab tak anjaan tha par mujhe sab yaad aa gya" raman said angrily.

"Mujhe yaad nhi tha toh aap logon ko yaad tha. Aap logon ne mujhe kuch bataya kyun nhi?" Raman shouted on everyone .

He came forward , turned ishita toward himself and filled her partition making everyone shock present in the hall.

"I am sorry ishita , mujhe kuch yaad nhi tha par ab mujhe sab yaad aa gya hai." His words made her smile and she cried in his arms.

"Bhai ?" Simmi started to say but raman drove over her.

"Bas simmi, mujhe yaad aa gya hai ki ishita meri biwi hai, mere bachon ki maa hai" raman shouted still keeping ishita in his arms.

He cupped ishita's face in his palms and said
"Mujhe sab pata chal gya , kaun mera kya tu laage"

Kaun Mera, Mera Kya Tu Laage
Kyun Tu Baandhe, Man Se Man Ke Dhaage
Bas Chale Naa Kyun Mera Tere Aage
Kaun Mera, Mera Kya Tu Laage
Kyun Tu Baandhe, Man Se Man Ke Dhaage

Adi, ruhi and pihu ran to him and hugged him tightly . Now it finally became a happy family. But Simmi-Param fumed seeing them together and happy .

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Bas itni si thi ye kahani

Pls forgive me if i have written something wrong as it was my first story on current track.

Do let me know, how was it?

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Superb awesome lovely OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Beautifully written os
Loved this mihika ishra got married raman got his memory back superb
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beautiful update
mihika helpful ishu
Raman remembered everything
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Nice one
Finally a good mihika
But I don't like her at all
Finally Raman remembered everything and Ishra got married
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Awesome os di.
Totally loved it so much.

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Awesome os di.

Totally loved it so much.

Pls don't call me di because i am only 14 years old😛
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Nice os.
But mihika and adiru are unredeemable now .
Nicely written .
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