The Girl Next Door _An Ishra Drabble_Part 2 on Pg 5 - Page 2

Originally posted by: eclipse123

Fabulous Os buddy👏👏

You wrote our puttar's turmoil clearly😛

Puttar was getting ready for his bewi cum investor from morning itself😉

And his heart & brain had a war b/w them but at the end heart won😳

Puttar want to be perfect for bewi & he is thinking did she like his this stubble or that stubble.. & all...lol...puttar bhi na😳

Puttar was jealous that bewi cares for all & he is just one of them..hmmm😉

Puttar was thinking why his heart didn't believe after seeing her lifeless body too that she was dead...because puttar your heart is connected with her😳

Puttar's brain is trying to control his feeling stating she s just an investor but but his heart is not taking it😳

After all the lecture from his brain too he is using his favorite perfume,shirt etc to impress her & he know she will like it too😳

And she knows she is making him mad & puttar was enjoying it too😎

Naughty puttar was trying to escape from the haddies without their knowledge but his princess break his plan😆

Pihu told his papa that his perfume is good...so father-daughter-mother trio have same taste too😛

Adi told he will drop him but puttar nicely escaped him😉

So,puttar reached his final destination at last where his heart lies

So,our puttar & bewi day made after seeing each other😳😳

Pb...Superb writings..you are very good in writing 👏& when it is about our ishra it will become more beautiful😳.Continue writing when u gets time😳totally enjoyed reading this ishralacious or can say naughty puttar's heart-mind battle & his cute antic OS .And this OS become an addition to the sweet surprise we got today,at the same day when our yhm reached top one after months because of divanru😊.I think 2017 ending is good for all of us.Once more congrats for this wonderful piece of writing👏

Originally posted by: eclipse123

Aww..thanku for the link Pb.I'm going to enjoy reading it 😊& i know i will love that before reading itself😳

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Aiiyyoo OS from pb 😲 this yr surely gonna end with so many khushiya 😳

Such a lovely OS based on puttar's pov ...his confusion his excitement his peace which he feels around ishita 😳 he is going crazzy n he is loving it 😳

Haaye the way he ws getting ready selecting shirt using perfume n trying to slip away from the family 😳 u made my day 😛

Loved it !!

Can v have a small one after invitation from biwi's side like her excitement as 'date with bf 😉

Originally posted by: bscorp13

Ayyo..😲😆..don't keep great expectations..i am a very mood based writer unlike some really good writers on this forum..do read at your own risk😆

Originally posted by: ishitaruhi

Wow Wat a lovely os, thanks for putting down ur imagination & thoughts here in such a wonderful way.

Hmm can we have another part of it?