The Girl Next Door _An Ishra Drabble_Part 2 on Pg 5

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bscorp13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: zohakhan7
Sigh this was one was one of the sweetest and beautiful drabble I have ever read
The way u portrayed Ishita's feelings Pb was brilliant 👏
Her blushing , her shyness , her excitement to see Raman at her door 😳
Thank fully Yhm inspired u once again n we got to read such awesome stuff by u 😛
The way u mentioned role reversal that happened few years back in IshRa life was so poignant n wonderful
Just Loved it 😳

Thanks zoha...means a lot coming from a writer as good as you😛..

Yes the ishita we have been seeing in the past few weeks and in Budapest is the inspiration to write this..someone who clearly madly is in love with Raman and doesn't hesitate expressing it both to herself and those around her and especially in the way she seems to look at him ...most of the times...love and adoration and desire ...all there...😳

Yes - role reversal waala lines have kept coming back to me ever since this track started...this whole track is almost like starting all over again naa...and smitten mr Raman Bhalla is surely in the bf-gf zone now😆

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gargpoo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Awww this is damn lovely n beautiful ..

I ws so lost reading it

Biwi just wants to b with him wants to see him his features his dimpled smile his antics everything

She thought wen he wanted to start all over again n they became bf gf ..she always wanted him to fall for her if they meen in other situation and its really happening

He blush her excitement ws too gud

Loved it

Keep writing plzz hahah

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bscorp13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Awww this is damn lovely n beautiful ..
I ws so lost reading it
Biwi just wants to b with him wants to see him his features his dimpled smile his antics everything
She thought wen he wanted to start all over again n they became bf gf ..she always wanted him to fall for her if they meen in other situation and its really happening
He blush her excitement ws too gud
Loved it
Keep writing plzz hahah

Thanks poo...glad you liked it...🤗

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Pooja

@eclipse123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Pb,It's truly an admirable piece of writing & the selection of song is also superb👏

The Ishita u described through this piece of writing is beautiful😳

And u did wrote it beautifully what was ishita's mind set before & after raman's arrival to iyer house😳

And i like how u show Ishita was guilty about ditching ishpi in their plan & how she thought about pacifying ravankumar... which cvs didn't show😛

Bewi was a big fan of puttar's dimple😳

She is thinking about puttar only in 24/7😉

By seeing Puttar bewi become flat 😉😆

So,the perfume puttar put on was a gift from bewi itself ahaa😳

And bewi identified it just in a second😉

Bewi was happy to see puttar in her favorite color shirt that too with his charming dimpled smile😉

Oh girl u also showed a possessive,jealous puttar ha ha ha😉

Puttar is so cute he just in a second become grumpy baby from happy baby because bewi didn't gave an answer immediately to his invite 😆😆but puttar didn't know bewi is lost in him only & now is in dream land with him😉😆

And Ishita immediately told she will come..how can she miss that chance which she got to spent time with her jaans😛

And puttar gave the 100W smile back😳😉

She was watching him lost till he went from there closing the door

She was thinking after this much years too she is feeling giddy thinking about him...she is feeling like a teenager wow😳

And the way u relate the old BF-GF conversation to the things that is happening now through ishita itself was wow Pb👏

And u also wrote that a small want that ishita had always & small inferiority complex she had about herself that she was forced on raman...got cleared👏

And how her wish that they would had meet in a different circumstances & fall in love & all also got fulfilled😳

And at the end now she agrees whatever circumstance they had brought them to each other doesn't matter but the fact is that they are destined to be with each other & she was thanking all the God's in heaven for this

Wow Wow Pb👏Superb i loved loved it how u described ishita here...this is the ishita we love to see which we are getting after 4 years 😛.But u described her each & every feeling beautifully😊.

Thanku for writing this excellent piece for us Pb😳

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prachii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Yay got ishita's view as well 😉

Not only ishita I was also second hand blushing 😆 reading this .

You included epic gf , bf Track as well . And perfume she gifted is thoughtful .

If possible write one on memory loss Raman confessing for Ishita like in typical romcom movies 😳

Overall loved reading it 😃

Edited by prachii - 7 years ago

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prachii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: bscorp13

Aww..most of them are delusional😆..so beware..😆...thanks a lot btw and hope you have fun reading them...
Added ishitas pov...as requested...do let me know how you like it...😛

When we know things won't work out , it's good to be in delusional mode huh 😆 esp with ishra. Post leap Real 2014 ishra is living only in stories . So I am loving this delusional mode . Yeah feeling good reading post leap thoughtful emotional stories . Esp the talk (Mani story )and Pihu Australia story is awesome! Spl mention to that sensous subah hone na do story as well !! Will resume reading remaining stories. Thanks once again !!

Edited by prachii - 7 years ago